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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: Daniel de los Santos On: September 09, 2004 23:13 CDT
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Well that was very interesting, the Ranma/Jean fling really threw me in for a loop, I'm sure Rogue will confront Ranma about this, I am still going for a Ranma/Rogue pairing, and let me remind everyone, or people who already know, Rogue was adopted by Mystique, so Ranma and Rogue are not blood related, only Kurt is ranma's actual half brother
| Title: marco cabrera is one of the usual 'hentai that needs more schooling" person
Reviewed By: mukamuka On: September 09, 2004 21:22 CDT
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marco cabrera...if you don't know....JEAN AND ROUGE CAN'T GET IT ON WITH SINCE ROUGE'S POWERS WOULD SUCK JEAN'S POWERS AND HEALTH DRY! yeesh. Okay to Matdeception: seeing your explaination, I can understand your position right now and won't bug you like hell for the next chapter and similar crap. Just rest and do what you have to do okay? I believe we can wait for the next chapter. If not, then we are all a bunch of assholes.
| Title: none
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: September 09, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this page yesterday anf it very good. I would like to see more of the ranma,rouge, and jean love trangle. Why cant ranma just have them both? Two girls who are hot!!! maybe he will have a threesome with them later in your next story. this is the only ranma1/2 x-men crossover i like. When ranma mom coming back soon you think i see it right now she will say MY SON SO MANLY. Am a big fan of both shows that your writhing about have you ever just wont die from jeff oneshot wong he really good too. He made a just die story were ranma meet the x-men it damm good. Well that all i have to don't have anything else to say about your story but remember ranma, jean, and rouge treesome next time in your next story please please please please please please please please please please!!!!
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 08, 2004 16:31 CDT
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Great chapter
| Title: Yep
Reviewed By: Philip Weigel On: September 08, 2004 15:38 CDT
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Heh, yeah Mat. School's been going on for the past three weeks. Was bogged down with some problems in RL, so I didn't try to get ahold of ya ta let ya know I was back. Hey, just keep up the good work man. We're all rooting for ya.
| Title: Me and my addictions
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 14:21 CDT
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Heh. It's a sad but true case. It's not like my writing depends on them 100 percent, but more or less my ability to sit down and write that comes in question. GOing through nicotine withdrawal the last time, makes me pissy, anxious, unable to sit down worth a damn. It'll alternate between that and annoyance, all of which is a big negative when it comes to writing. One of these days I'm going to quit, I just don't see it happening it any time soon. Once pay doll rolls around, I'm going to go buy a corn cob pipe, and a shit load of tabacco. That'll save me a ton of cash in the long run. The problem is getting to pay day. I hate starting a job just before the next pay day, making me have to wait nearly three weeks for cash. Argh. And thanks for the vote of confidence Philip. Nice seeing yah again. School started up for you already?
| Reviewed By: mukamuka On: September 08, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
feel like adding in a poll vote of Nabiki boinking Jean or Ms. Frost? - I'm joking, I'm joking. A vote Ranma for Jean for your pairings please. - I believe that this is the first time I've actually seen Ranma human in a fanfic. Not like some urbr god like asshole, not like some wimpy, never had sex idiot, but HUMAN. I have to copy this to wordpad maybe and print it out just so I can have something like this to read while walking to college or on the road. - Curious though, you REALLY do need smokes to write your fics?
| Title: Aww... Who Cares?
Reviewed By: Philip Weigel On: September 08, 2004 08:33 CDT
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Mat, I'm serious, who cares if you mess around with the time-line like this? First off, you are having fun, at least from what I can tell. Secondly, this is an awesome story, I don't think I'm alone when I say that many of the things that you've done in this story make it even better than before. I mean, come on! Everyone's saying that this story is good, hell, I'm practically busting a gut in these last few chapters here. Heh. I gotta wonder when ole' Buckethead's going to show up though.
| Title: Bump in the Jean
Reviewed By: Matty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 04:30 CDT
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I've realized that a long, long time ago. Remember what I stated numerous, numerous times through out this posting. This is, at the very best, a rough draft. I've made no attempts to go back and correct things, and I won't make any such attempts until my muse dies. I know of a ton of things I need to fix/fill in. Plot holes galore, forced issues I'd rather take back, rework, and spread out over a series of chapters before things blow up. I know this, hell I've been expecting people to bitch about more then just Jean, but it goes to show you just how much practical knowledge people have of the series when not even one person commented on the fact Wanda was with the Brotherhood, and Tabitha too no less, when in the series Mystique was the one who got Wanda out of the looney bin, and when the guys betrayed Tabitha, siding with Mystique over something rather trivial, she left the Brotherhood of her own accord. There's tons of stuff like this I need to go over, fix, and rewrite. Hell, that's probably ten, to twelve chapters of stuff I need to create just to expand the story, fixed forced issues, and create a back drop to the main plot itself. Yeah, I got my work cut out for me, but thats way ahead in my schedule, whenever my muse dies. Who knows when thats going to happen? Heh.
| Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 04:21 CDT
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Nope, didn't like the Ranma/Jean part. It was fine for a while but the last part just feels forced. I don't feel it works well at all. That's the only 'bump in the road' I've come arcoss. Everything else has been top notch.
| Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 23:09 CDT
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Now that was a heck of a first day in school. Nice to see some humor in this story. Some good chuckles and a good too. Well written, keeps me as a reader well engaged. One of the best if not the best X-men/Ranma crossovers I've had the pleasure of reading to date.
| Title: Fate of Takahashi and Sho
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:43 CDT
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Is left in the side story, which will deal generally with Ryoga and his little situations through out Japan. You won't be seeing them die here, at least, it's doubtful. Matdeception
| Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not enough. I'm still out for blood. I want the entire Agency Nero chopped up into little itty bitty pieces. The line where Kasumi continues to haunt me. The death of an innocence crys out for vengence. I'll be following this one it the last period. By the way I do hope you've got some nice slow nasty death's planned for Takahashi and Sho, I'm really looking forward to reading when they get taken down. Congrats, you've got me good and fired up. I'll be up all night if needs be to read what you've posted to date.
| Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:23 CDT
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Lordy, Lordy, I'd say may kami-sama have mercy on thier souls but I don't think even he will forgive them killing Kasumi. As for the rest of that misbegotten back of walking excrement - it's time to flush! And Ranma's got his hand on the handle. I'm just curious how much of Japan is still going to be above water when he gets done. You've definately got me doing a slow burn.
| Reviewed By: McClown On: September 07, 2004 18:56 CDT
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Holy shit this story rocks, Bit hevey on the gore side at the start but its great now. Just where the hell is nodaka tho?
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