| "Something to Protect - Echoes" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 00:22 CDT
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Love this story. Chapter seven left me grinning, you wrote it so well, I could feel the wind, and the exhileration. You handle the relationship b/t K and I very well, balancing the tension with wonderful fluff. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 22:23 CDT
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I love this story!!! It's just great! I've had it as one of my favorites forever and I'm just so glad you updated...Oh, and I don't know if you noticed or not, but you do have a few grammar mistakes in the last chapter, like words that run together likethis, (i know i do that when i type too fast)But just so you know, I think you are an incredible writer and I wish i could write this well
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 03:56 CDT
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First off, I wanted to let you know about Reviewer replies. For people liek myself with blue names in their review, due to a hyperlink, you can click on our names and be taken to our profiles where our e-mail addresses should be listed. As for a specific way that's part of the MM.org system, I'm sure there is one, but I haven't used it before. Now, onto the actual review, I loved this chapter! Inuyasha falling asleep on Kagome's pillow and using Kagome's blanket was just adorable besides the fact that he passed out within seconds. I was hoping you'd go into his thoughts about hwo and why it happened, and maybe have him revel in her scent but perhaps that's for the future, hehe. Inuyasha is adorable and there's definite chemistry there between Kagome and him. It looks like it'll have to wait since it seems an attack is underway near Sango's village. I'm still kind of wondering how Miroku in the prologue fits in with the rest of the story, not to mention the mysterious voice that Kagome heard telling her she wasn't ready. There's definitely a few mysteries to look forward to unravelling in the future, not the least of which is Sango's mother's sword. I know you didn't bring that up for nothing, especially since it's 'borrowed.' I'll be looking forward to your next chapter so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I liked your story a lot :o) I am def. adding it to my faves. The characters are well-developed, and I like the story line so far. Great job! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: March 07, 2007 18:32 CST
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WOOT! You updated. I had to refresh my memory about this story, but now I've got it and I'm good. I loved this chatper! It was awesome! First with Kagome's confusion and then with Sango and Miroku. I really liked Sango and Miroku in this chapter. Now I have to sleep before I pass out. >>'
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Title: Prologue-Chapter 8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 18:34 CST
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Wow, this story is truly unique, and I like the direction you're going with it so far. I loved how Inuyasha is sharing intimate moments with Kagome, whether he knows he is or not, and how he touches and holds her. He may be horrible with words but his actions are another story entirely. The new approach you've taken to Kagome's powers is interesting and I can't help but wonder how you'll resolve it. I just hope they finally get passed all the things that are holding them back, eventually. ;) I also wonder what purpose Shiori has but it seems she's getting friendly with Rin. How Sesshomaru reacts will be another story I'm sure, not to mention Jaken. As for Shippou, I think Kagome needs to open her eyes to her true feelings for the kit, she treats him more like a son than her little brother. That scene where he mumbled her name as she cradled him to her bosom was truly heartwarming. Let's hope for more of those moments in the future, with Inuyasha. ;) hehe I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: More soon, please!
Reviewed By: Nekomata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great take on the InuYasha/Kagome romance. Just enough angst to keep it believable, without being utterly repetitive and depresing (as so many are). Marvelous description, I almost felt like I was flying through the forest with them in this last chapter. Of course whatever Naraku's plotting can't be good.... Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:10 CST
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This chapter had some lovely imagery, particularly the 'king-of-the-world' scene. I also liked Kagome's internal monologue about Inuyasha's feelings. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I am a definite Inu/Kag shipper! Hooray for the cutest couple ever! Not many people add Shiori in their stories, I like it ^_^ perhaps you can break the made-up cycle and pair Souten with Shippo? Only a suggestion, Personally I cant remember a story with Soutwn in it, and I'm on a lot. Well sayonara!
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Reviewed By: ganzil On: December 04, 2006 21:38 CST
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I am really enjoying reading this fic. It is well written, and the storyline is interesting. I can't wait to see how the prologue ties in to the rest of the story. You are also doing a good job with the Inu/Kag romance. Keep up the good work! (And thanks for sharing it with us.)
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 18:18 CST
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YAY! I'm so happy that you decided to keep this story going! You know, this was the first fic that I added to my favorites cause I didn't want to miss it on the off chance that you'd write some more--and here you did! You are an excellent writer and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: rach (aka pokiepal) On: November 30, 2006 10:47 CST
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Good to see an update! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:29 CST
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You've really got my attention, can't wait to see how this pan's out. I think they should kiss at least in the next hmm, well can't hurt to ask. See ya next read
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good chapter. I had to go back to read the whole thing as I'd forgotten what had happened before, but I loved what I read. I'm very interested in the sword that Sango has for Kagome, I almost think it might have been Midoriko's sword. And the voice in her dreams, obviously there is something more to it than the obvious. I can't wait to find out how it all comes together. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:22 CST
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thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
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