| "Something to Protect - Echoes" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Onba On: November 25, 2009 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I'm loving this! Esspecally the parts with Shiori in them because I think her meeting up with Sesshy and Rin is an awesome idea and a very original one too!
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Reviewed By: lunemoon On: July 29, 2009 22:38 CDT
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Great story so far! I am in Chapter four right now and it's kept me at the edge of my seat! There's just one thing though... your writing is very elaborate, which is good but sometimes it's quite distracting and unnecessary. I feel as if you need to get to the point quicker and avoid the unnecessary details. Also, you tend to change the colour of Kagome's eyes in almost every chapter: It starts off as stormy gray, then blue, then lavender? I love a good description or two, but consistency would be nice here and there. Keep up the great work thus far! ~lunemoon
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so beyond happy that your planning on doing more with this fic! I know I loved it soooo much (I haven't read it in like 2 years) and as soon as you get another chapter or two up I'm going to reread it! :D
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 05:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story... The hair brushing and the vanilla scene are just beautiful. Thanks. I also really liked the one that Inu interrupted between San/Mir. I hope you continue with this please. I am sort of curious about the beginning with Miroku.. is that future or a dream or what? Dei Dei
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 18:14 CST
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Interesting Inuyasha is finally getting somewhere.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! YES! the saga continues! As well as the humor, lol. I still love your characterizations and humor. I find them rather refreshing, and very entertaining, and the store scene was awesome, lol. Till next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: January 13, 2008 23:27 CST
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If I wasn't in the middle of something else I'd give you the best review I could, because you deserve it for writing such an awesome chapter, and for finally updating! But I'm just going to keep it short. You do the best grocery-store scenes, lol. I anticipated the magazine turning out to be either swimsuits or a playboy mag. xDD But my favorite part of the scene was when he found her body wash and was smelling her. Talk about make a girl's heart race with that!!! And that's all I'm gonna say for now. Please continue to update!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 22:51 CST
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Yay, it's back! This chapter had me rolling. IY loose in a grocery store. (or worse yet, a walmart/target) The potential for amusement there is endless! Glad to see he kept his word, and that he and K are getting along so well. Hmmm, the sniffing scene makes me wonder how long it'll be before these two have to break down and really talk. Can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story. I do hope Inuyasha and Kagome decide to get together since it slowly seems to be heading that way. Hopefully Inuyasha can catch whoever is breaking into Kagome's house too. Please update soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I too, say you revising some and was hoping you'd pick this back up. It a great read with wonderful characterizations... and humor, lol. I especially loved Inu audacious attack on Kagome's alarm. Hehe. So until the next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 00:05 CST
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Hi Angelswrath, Saw you were revising, and wanted you to know that I really, really hope you pick this up again! I've missed it, you really nailed the characterization down, and it's a wonderful read. Please continue....
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good so far! Do you intend to continue?
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 05:48 CDT
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You have got to come back and finish this, the suspense is killing me! Come back, come back!
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT story. Your characterization is wonderful, particularly Inuyasha. He's such an adorable contradiction here, funny yet serious, blunt to the point of being brutal yet heartbreakingly vulnerable to harsh words himself. I can't wait to read more of this story. Your award nomination is well-deserved.
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