| "Something to Protect - Echoes" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_magic_1 (NSI) On: July 17, 2006 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you write some more to this! I want to see what happens! Nicely written chapters; it's the kind of writing style I use too! Keep up the good work and Happy writing!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer On: June 08, 2006 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep updating please, im interested to know what happens next. Very good story so far. :)
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is going rather well, I'm interested in how everything is giong to tie together. The prologue has obviously not happened yet, and who is this young girl? Is she Hanyou as well? Looking forward to seeing what happens next. ~QueenTatooine
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Title: oh wow
Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. beautifully written. i'm honestly shocked at how well you keep the characters in character. this story is unbelievable. i hope you'll update soon.
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Title: Whoo-hoo!
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HORRAY!!! I really like your fan-fic! I'm very interested in how your story will develop and even more interested in what kinds of twists it might take! Keep up the great work and I can't wait til the next chapter! Update soon! *Amber Mae
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 21:31 CST
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Well, as you probably know, I really like your fic. I am so intrigued about Miroku in the prologue. What can I say? He's my favorite. Your characters are never OC, and you describe action scenes really well. I'm really curious to see what's going to happen... Do you have it all planned out in your head? Well, keep it up! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 01:57 CST
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Pretty good story so far...keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story! Very few people can launch straight off the canon plot and still make a fic interesting, but you have done very well so far. I love how very much in-character everyone is, and certainly enjoying the plot. Well done!
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Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: February 03, 2006 18:18 CST
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I love how you don't use very much dialogue, and still make each chapter work. Most of the time, people leave out descrptions, but it flows so well and smooth, I can't help but fall in love with the story line. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: February 03, 2006 15:50 CST
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great chapter. awww...very cute how inu saves the day. i love the dead panned humor that is bundeled in this chapter. the youkai throwing an unconscious kagome at inu, great idea! lol. so...that sob got away with the jewels, ey? not cool man. and one girl who...was left...purple eyes? Shiori? hmm...interesting. can't wait to read more!!!
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Title: Dragon Witch
Reviewed By: Dragon Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:24 CST
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I am really confuzziled :S . The prologe i do not understand. Did Miroku try to slit his rist or what and why would he? Then what is with the girl at the end? What exacly happened at the village that exploded? And what is Inuyasha on that is making him hullusinate and see Naraku? Once again I am really confused! Could you maybe explain what is going through your head or is this something that we are all going to figure out later. Anyway besides my complete and utter confusion i have to say that i do like the fic. I think you are a very talented writer and i do hope to read more of your work.
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: kane-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. There were a few grammar and punctuation errors, but otherwise it was very good. I especially love the way you describe things. Your simiies and metaphores are descrpitive and make the story all the more interesting. Keep going, I'm hanging on the edge here!
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Title: baka site won't let me sign in!!
Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! ^_^ You have a great beginning to your story!! Nice cliffie...you've got me hooked o_O. You know I can't wait to find out what happened Kag. Update soon!! ~_^
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: January 22, 2006 23:20 CST
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hey. the story is coming along nicely. very interested to see that it wasnt' naraku who nabbed Kagome...but why is inu sensing naraku's jakyi everywhere? don't make much sense...but i'm sure it will later. poor kag...there she is being crushed...and she's worried about her bow. really a good dissociative complex...but accompanied with a near death experiance, it makes sense. good news, inu should make it in time...maybe. bad news, she'll have to answer to him yet again. ::sigh:: man...catch 22 no matter how you look at it. as for kag surpassing kikyo comment; i don't think she has. i think Kikyo still has a lot more on Kagome, only becasue of practice and age. and you're right, kagome hasnt' officially trained with anyone. she kind of trains herself ...so it's realistic, trust me. you're doing great!!!
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Reviewed By: Ayita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 20:05 CST
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Wonderful beginning. I'm hooked. Please keep writing.
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