| "The Ones They Take For Granted" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sereniti On: July 05, 2002 05:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg....you left me hanging so badly I wanna cry -waaaails- LOL So unfair, this is torture!! Write quickly PLEASE! I beg of you!! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 16:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really enjoying this. I found it at the Lemon Stand and had a fit when I clicked on ch4 and recieved a 440msg, so I tracked it down here and I just really like this story. I ususally don't read odd pairing, but I started reading this piece and I couldn't stop, needless to say I spent my day off hunkered in front of the puter neglecting my housework and my own fics.
I can't wait for the next chapter...~EM |
Reviewed By: DD On: June 29, 2002 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, as usual, I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Goku is such a sly one, STILL at it, after all this time!! Though of course it is understandable, love and lust, but still, what a situation. Thats his son for Kami's sake! I enjoyed the turmoil he felt about that this chappie (sorry Goku!) Can't wait to see if Gohan's going to find out, and what will happen if he does. Also, my fave bit (can ya guess ^.^ ) was the scene with Vegeta. How you can write both Goku and Vegeta with so much character, likeness and respect really impresses me :) Veggie was so in character, loved his sarcastic wise little comments. He was awesome! And when he said the bit about Kakarot's woman not his mate - o.o I just about screamed!!! Nice writing there. Can't wait for more! Wonderful fic |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with chpater five before I piss my pants! :) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 13:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update this soon. I really like this. :) |
Reviewed By: Meiyume On: June 17, 2002 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
id give you an eleven but theres none! heh...i love that you update so quickly...*touches wood* heh...well till next time! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: October 10, 2002 21:00 EDT
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Oh my gosh. What can I say, I absolutely love the emotions in this story! I was totally shocked when Goku spilled the beans to ChiChi and again in awe when it all came crashing down for Videl. Whew! The buildup to both of those events was amazingly well done and yet still not totally expected. I'm interested to see the advice that Bulma has to offer. The flashback of the fight with Gohan was a great way to show us what's going on with him and I look forward to seeing more of him in the next part. And as usual I think you've utilized Vegeta as a great supporting character. All in all, well worth the wait. :) |
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