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| "The Ones They Take For Granted" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I am SO happy right now...do you know how long I have waited to read THIS!? I was reading it at the lemonade stand (by gokusgirl), and I was waiting forever and ever and ever for you to update! And then i happened to stumble upon someone else's website that mentioned this story on here. I ALMOST DIED. I am so happy...that after two years I have finally been able to finish reading this story. It was absolutely incredible...I loved it with every ounce of my soul. I did cry a little bit, right when Goku told Videl he loved her, but that was it. Anyhow...yes, I demand that you write a sequel. i don't care HOW many things you have going on right now...find time! You will leave me completely disappointed if you don't...and I don't want that at all! I shall check out your website, and if you want to or anything, you can email me at girl_that_is_sexy@hotmail.com. I would really enjoy that! And once again, this story was a glorious, excellent piece of artwork. It was incredible in every way, shape, and form. You are a beautiful writer, and I hope that someday soon you will make a sequel...it would mean so much to me! Thank you again, Pareathe, for finishing this story!
| Title: Thanks for the memories
Reviewed By: dlord21 On: January 10, 2004 14:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Has it really been two years? When I first started reading this fanfic, I was looking for a creative and unique pairing. Videl X Goku was it. I did a search on ff.net for a super long fic (the longer usually means the better written), and there it was. The rest is history. The writing just blew me away! At first it was just the best written NC17 fic out there, and then gradually, as the tone of the story changed to a romance, it became one of my favorite fanfics, bar none. You had an amazing story/plot that just kept me craving for the next chapter. It was poignant and strong with excellent characterization. It really made me understand their thinking... Now that its over, with a sweet ending too, I just want to thank you for putting such effort into your work and I look forward to any other fanfics you care to write. You're an awesome author! dlord21 PS: And though I don't see the possibility for a sequel, I can see a happy epilogue chapter concerning Goku's return. The story however doesn't really need it though...
| Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 10:02 EST
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Bravo!! Yes, it was sad as hell. But I agree with you that it was the best way to end it while keeping them in character. I was really glad they got to share that one final kiss though. Sweet! I'll miss looking forward to new chapters for this story but I know it had to end sooner or later. It's enough knowing that one day, they'll be together. Great job, Pareathe!
| Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 10:02 EST
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Bravo!! Yes, it was sad as hell. But I agree with you that it was the best way to end it while keeping them in character. I was really glad they got to share that one final kiss though. Sweet! I'll miss looking forward to new chapters for this story but I know it had to end sooner or later. It's enough knowing that one day, they'll be together. Great job, Pareathe!
| Title: "Seven Day Revelation"
Reviewed By: Avid Reader On: December 11, 2003 23:37 EST
Comment/Review:
Ok sorry I didnt read this fanfict yet but i thought you might like to kow that On your fic "Seven Day Revelation" you have 122 reviews are you gunna continue that fic? sorry to put this here but I dont have my E-mail set-up yet.
| Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Gods what a fic! What a wonderful fic! *Sighs* I am sorry to see it over. In a way, I would like to see a small epilogue -- that is the romantic in me. But the story ended the way it needed to be ended not necessarily the way I wanted things to end. Lovely. Beautiful. Heart-wrenching. Can I gush enough? Probably not. I am glad that this is up on Gems and the BluEyedMnster kept us appraised of the updates. I am looking forward to your other fics and now I get to go read your orginal works. See you online and on the lists. Again what an absolutely wonderful story. Now if I can just convince my roommate to read it. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's princess17 On: December 11, 2003 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a sequel...but an epilogue? Could that please be a possiblity it would be the greatest thing in the entire world, it doesn't have to be long and overly detailed just short and simple or however you want it. Your story was amazing, and no doubt the best written, most creative story I have ever read. Please consider an epilogue it would so entirely be appreciated. But all said and done....thank you for writing this story, I enjoyed every word. And will more than likely reread it a billion times even though I already have.
| Title: *exhale... finally* ^_^
Reviewed By: djFusion On: December 10, 2003 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible! Simply fucking incredible! This has been THE best fic I've ever read, hands down, no contest! It's made me laugh. It's brought me to tears. I'm in awe. I'm inspired. You fucking rock! Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant story with us, because it truly stands alone in the wide world of fanfiction. I'm sure I'll be enjoying it many more times to come ^_^ Hell, I love it more than I ever loved the show! You're a incredible writer! I wish you so much success in your carreer, and I promise to read your original the second I get the chance! You're too good not to! lol And thank you - from the bottom of my heart - for finishing this fic. I was worried there for a while thinking it would remain unfinished forever, but your coming back to finish it has inspired and motivated me to finish my own lingering epic as well. Thank you for even that! This has been a fabulous read! I hope we can meet up on IM sometime - I'd love to talk! *standing ovation*
| Title: the ones they take for granted
Reviewed By: Kichi On: December 09, 2003 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely wonderful fic! I really hate Videl and am definitly NOT a Goku fan, but I absolutly loved this! I really felt for both of them and wished it would have ended happily, but real life is seldom like that and I'm sort of glad it ended the way it did, although I am sad to hear there will be no sequel. Have you thought of letting someone else do it? I mean it might be hard to find someone who could do it as well, but I'm sure tons of people would love to try!
| Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *log me in automatically damnit!!* On: December 04, 2003 13:11 EST
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Woooohooo! That was soooooooooooooooooo great! i cant belive it's finished!! Excellent job indeed! Aww... it IS sad though.. I mean its sad that its finished!! A sequal would be nice, but not compulsory! So.. if you ever do find the inspiration and the time.. it would be great! Thanks for a fic of such a high standard, I'm sure you know how hard it is to find true quality. And thats what this was, true quality!!! Thanks again, bai-bai!!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 09:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fic for a while and have enjoyed it thoroughly. You have drawn me in completely using two things I don't normally like: Goku and switching first-person POV. That's a testament to the story. Thank you.
| Title: DRod5@msn.com
Reviewed By: DJ Rodriguez On: December 04, 2003 05:20 EST
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This was cool, all the way!! This story has been definatly worth the wait! I feel very sorry for Videl and Goku, but so it goes. I wish the both of them the best of luck in the future! I also wish you the best of luck in the future! Man, I hope you create more Goku/Videl fanfics like this! Its deep, and also cool. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Bardockgurl(MM says I'm not logged in) On: December 04, 2003 04:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... It seems mean to only be able to give 10's... They need higher ratings... :D I feel so down and empty now that it's over...:( Lord knows how you must feel. It was a perfect ending. It seemed to be the only way to wind up the story, and of course leaves the field wide open for the reader to imagine all the possible scenarios that lead out from where you left off. Ah well, thank you for writing and sharing with us... *Damn, I just bought a new box of sporks, too... What to do with them?? Ooooooh - 'Timeline'... :D*
| Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter what anybody says to you, this was the perfect ending for this fic - and I don't usually like angst! It was beautiful...truly beautiful. Throughout the entire fic the characters were well constructed and maintained. Your plot was...perfect. I'm probably your biggest fan and have been since the first moment I read your work. I have to say to you that this is my favourite DBZ fanfic I have ever read and that you are my favourite author. You're work is flowing, poetic and is a true pleasure to read. Infact I'd love it if you'd allow me to host this fic on my site, I still have a thing for odd couple fanfiction even after all these years! (vegeta_goddess@hotmail.com). I don't know what else to say to you...you know that I love your writing style, your stories and your ideas. I think the only thing left for me to say is that you're one of the few people I know who can write a story using about a saiyan bond and not have the story turn out to be...well...the same as every other saiyan bond fic. You're writng is original and wonderful and is a fantastic mixture of genres! You have my full support with everything you go on to do...although something tells me that one day I'll probably find a book in my local book store by you! I'll miss you! - Lena (VG)
| Reviewed By: SexyGoku17 On: November 19, 2003 21:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COMPLETELY AWESOME!! The best story I have ever read anywhere!! I check everyday to see if you updated...yes I know...I have no life...but alls fair because it only takes a second to check. But I do hope you plain on completing this story sometime soon, I would very much like to know what happens! Even if Videl and Goku can't be together! Please update soon!
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