| "The Ones They Take For Granted" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 16:19 EDT
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whaaaaa!!!!!!!!! omg, that was sooo good, and yet another cliff hanger, not as bad as that last one mind you ^-^ but still :sighs: it's not fair. Oh well, guess I'll have to wait with everyone else now uh? |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 11:55 EDT
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This was great! Will Videl and Goku stay a couple, will Chi Chi continue to be a bitch! ANSWER ME! |
Reviewed By: Meiyume On: July 20, 2002 08:01 EDT
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*Sigh* Did you know I've been checking everday since the last update to see if you've updated? Anyway, I have a demand and it's the only demand I will make, YOU HAVE TO MAKE SURE THAT THEY END UP TOGETHER if they don't...omg! I mean, I know I would stay with him and yeah...no matter the consequences. Ah...well...update soon, I hate cliffhangers... |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh NO! How could it end there?? **sigh**
They deserve happiness! Can Goku EVER have happiness???
I've been rereading the manga, and from what I've seen, ChiChi has never at ANY point loved Goku...Gohan yes, but Goku no. The saviour of the universe deserves better!
**grin** you should be proud! it takes a lot to get me emotionally involved with a chapter! INCREDIBLE AWESOME FANTASTIC JOB GIRL! |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 17, 2002 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so evil?! Please write more. I'm dieing to know whats going to happen. And it seems to me that Gohan is having a little affair himself(seems to like work alot;).Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sephira On: July 13, 2002 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Very honestly i loved everything about it. I've always loved Goku, but you've given him new dimentions....pleeeeeze hurry with the next chapter, cuz that was one bitch of a cliffhanger! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 08, 2002 13:44 EDT
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Oh, great, what a place to leave it, my heart is racing! :) Fabulous chapter. It was a great turning point in their relationship (in more ways than one!), I really liked the
emotion you built in to it. Especially from Videl’s point of view, because I think we’ve known that what Goku feels is real, and we feel sorry for his predicament. But knowing
she feels the same way is just … aah!!
I have to say, too, that I know this affair makes Goku into such a bad father, even moreso than just being a cheating husband. But I think you have done a very good job of
showing how horrible he really does feel about it, and what type of person that makes him and how disappointed he is in himself. And yet he can’t help it, I guess that’s how it
is when someone else has something that you need. Not that he’ll be able to make Gohan understand… Please hurry soon with the next chapter :) |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh total WOW!!!
I am amazed...cliff-hung...totally on the edge of my seat by that ending! All I can say is this has GOT to work out for them! Somehow make them happy!
I sit amazed!
YOU ROCK! |
Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 23:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God this is getting good! They finally admitted that they love each other...and now Gohans found out! Wow!
I love this story so much and I cannot believe, at all, how much I want to read the next chapter! I hope you get it out soon because this is quickly becomming my favourite fic.
I cannot wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 23:04 EDT
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Cliffhanger...hn...you weren't joking, huh? I'm anxious to see how Mr. Prim & Proper reacts to what's been going on under his nose. Well, I can't wait 'til the shit hits the fan in the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 19:29 EDT
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This chapter was great! When will Goku and Videl come out with their love for each other in front of the others? Will Gohan attempt to kill Goku out of shear rage? ANSWER ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: DD On: July 05, 2002 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh sweet Kami P! Why is the next chapter not up? NOW?!!!! Oh my god, the whole chapter was mindblowingly good, and to finish it like that. *grabs ICV by the shirt collar and begins shaking him viciously* Whats going to happen?!!!! AAAaaaaah!!! I can't wait for more, more, MORE! *deep breath* Okay, ASIDE from that fantastically amazing, and incredibly evil, cliffhanger the chapter was, for me, as good as all the ones that have come before it, if not better. The emotions of Videl and Goku are so raw and real in this story. You can literally feel lust and the longing between the characters, as if they are both the most special people
in the world to each other. And in this chapter you showed that this really was how they felt. Almost to the point of them telling each other directly. The sex scene was wonderul, what a clever idea to have Goku going super saiyan! Videl is one lucky lady, thats all I've gotta say... Or maybe not, seeing as how GOHAN HAS JUST CAUGHT THEM!!!! I'm dying to see how you're going to handle this tricky turn of events, and will be bugging you for a sneak peek! lol Also, the Celine Dion song was extremely fitting for the chapter, and some of the lyrics were very beautiful. Thumbs up, gold star, A+ and 110%. Thanks for writing hon! DD |
Reviewed By: Meiyume On: July 05, 2002 19:07 EDT
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! :) I LOVE THIS STORY! Aren't you falling in love with Goku more and more while writing this?! I know I'm falling in love with him more and more while reading it! Might I add how EVIL you are for leaving the story there?!?!?! HMMM?!?! I swear I will hunt you down and then find your computer and steal all the notes and ideas for this story you have so I can read them....MWAHAHAHAA...*ahem* anyway update soon! |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done it again. Very exciting chapter. Goku is one of the sexiest characters in the series. I'd love to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 10:11 EDT
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nonononnonononononnooononoo!!!!!!!!! I have never, ever been left with a cliff hanger like that! OMG!!!! That was amazing! I'm speachless... usually I've got a whole bunch of things to review but this....wow... This story is immediatly going on the fav list.... |
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