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Reviewed By: rincewind2012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 03:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great and its a damn shame it had to end so soon. only real problem is that the last chap seemed a little anti-climatic (though that might be because i didnt want it to end lol)you didn't realy tell us what happened to the other girls. anyway the only thing that i think could have improved this was to have more kanako sex sceens but this was a great fic regardles
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is hard to truely comment on this story. It by far has more plot and character development then most smut fics I have seen over the years yet it still deals out pretty good romance and such as well. I do feel some girls got repeated performances with Keitaro a little to much while some other girls barely get one quickie. The other aspect I found slightly disapointing I suppose was the abrupt ending, after spending so much time on the Motoko, Shinobu and Haruka problems it just seemed way to quick of an ending. I suppose the author just got tired the story and decided just end it, which I suppose is better then nothing. But I really can't help but feeling the last chapter or two was not up the to the quality the rest the fic had.
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Reviewed By: anima_constrictor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 23:11 EST
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god damn it man you finished it up! if been reading this and your negima story for a long time now. though i am was kind of disappointed on how you ended that one, both fics were amazing. and to actually write 2 at the same time is impressive as hell. i will reread this from the begining, just as soon as i'm done with miscalculation. i look forward to reading your future fics
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Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's over! I applaud your writing from beginning to end, and if it means anything to you, I bought the Love Hina DVD box set because of this story. I really enjoyed this and my time spent here was well worth it. Good luck in future writings, whatever they may be.
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fanfics I have ever read. I found a few (very few) spelling errors but overall your story is one of the best I have encountered.
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Title: another good tie-up
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 22:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go on another good thread tie-up. nice to see nyamo again. also nice to see two of the idiots in a shrink's office, that's a real hoot. keep up the great work. chris
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 10, 2009 23:39 EST
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Go Keitaro...now Amalla is with him awesome!! You are wrapping things up nicely!! As always I am definately looking forward to more!!
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Title: how do you keep things straight
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW! oh well. more great tie-ups before the big night. can't wait to read when keitaro and koalla finally get it on. this story is also a lot of fun also. thanx, as always- chris
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 07, 2009 19:46 EST
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wait a minute, the only thing that bugs me in this is the lack of Nyamo. how will she fit into this harem.
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Title: CH 64
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 07, 2009 01:33 EST
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Hmmm... Methinks that you and your muse are feeling well and truly inspired this past month. Answers to old mysteries are being revealed thick and fast, although there are still a couple of big ones to go, i.e.; The Urashima side of the curse, what Hiatani/Shirai/Kentaro/Shinobu's teacher are up to, the MolMol wedding itself. As well as this new wrinkle about the concubines. But, we will see. -- And it was nice to see Kitsune getting some action again. Finally. The poor dear has been rather ignored lately. (After all, she's only had him twice now. The rest of them are all almost into double digits, aside from Kaolla. And you can bet that she'll catch up real quick!) -- Damn fine work as always. Eagerly awaiting more! T
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Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 21:08 EST
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Ah the joys of frequent updates. The past few updates have been nice and things moved quickly, almost quicker that I thought they would. Nice interactions at the Ayoma household and this seems to be a step to unifying the families to some degree. Nice job on the miscreants. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: jj On: February 05, 2009 15:30 EST
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let's not forget nyamo
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Title: CH 59-63
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 05, 2009 08:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My-my-my, you are feeling inspired lately! Several chapters in such a short space of time. Then again, it is an exciting run of events over at the Shinmei-Ryu ancesteral grounds. Tsuruko and Motoko finally begin cleaning house to bring the family into the modern age. -- Shinobu's friend finding herself in a similar situation to the Hinata Honies, though just barely. (M/F twins, eh. Tasty!) -- And yet another modification to the wedding of Kaolla Su. (I'm honestly waiting for Tamma-chan and Shippu to be proposed to next!) -- As ever, a fantastic read. Keenly awaiting more. T
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: February 02, 2009 20:23 EST
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Awesome I love the frequent updates now... and so far everything is coming together nicely. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 16:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice tie-ups and buttkickings. i think motoko got the respect back from her family and keitaro, though trying to protect his concubine, still doesn't realize how powerful the aoyoma women really are. but, i think it was good though, because it gave motoko the chance to shine and show her true power. now, the trash is gone. why are you so good? i'm jealous of your style, but i love it also.
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