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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 23:40 CDT
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wow, what a story! you gave us everything in the end, even the opening for a new story. i love sequels. i love the kinder, gentler sesshoumaru--who is still very much in character. i bow to your great ability to give him those qualities, while still keeping him as the great ice lord that we all know and love. and now he really has his own ice lady to match his outward personality. i anticipate seeing the fiery interactions between the two of them. while i can't wait to see where the next story goes, i would like to thank you for all the enjoyment that this story has brought to my life.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 21:23 CDT
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thank you, i feel remiss in that i hadn't been able to review the last couple chapters as i had been unavoidably detained. ♦ wonderful story and i'm so happy to hear of a sequel! ♥ a delight as always ♥ ginny
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Title: Every Heart
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: September 14, 2008 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Absolutely amazing!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. If I could truly rate this story, I'd give it a 100% average! It's just that good! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 19:18 CDT
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I get it! I read the story again. By putting mokomoko (you know that means fluff) around Snegura (sp?), he had accepted her as his mate. *dancing around on tip-toes!* I can't wait to see what fate you are giving the jewel. I'm so excited! ^_^ Until the next installment..Snow ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 17:07 CDT
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You may be able to find some examples of Kyudo on youtube. It's worth a try. I've seen some interesting training films in the martial arts...going back to reading now. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 15:23 CDT
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This is a great story. I love the action. Also, your original character is a great match for Sesshoumaru. Even her father was killed by the dragon. I like her. Oh no! Kagome can't go home? What happened to the jewel? Did it really explode? I've forgotten much of what I've read, so I'm going to have fun going back and reading it again. ^_^ Can't wait til the next chapter! Great job! Snow
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this story! Great plot and inclusion of all the major characters... and I especially love making Kagome stronger and giving her better skills. I hope in the next chapter she will use those skills and kick some serious butt!! :) I like the new character and hope she is a tough lady too! Curious if you are going to have any lemons regarding Inuyasha and Kags?? Mating marks and all that? The scent thing as a mating thing was different considering nearly all the other stories mention biting marks, etc. Interesting, can't wait for another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 12:55 CDT
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your battle scene was written so well that i felt as if i was in the middle of it. it's not an easy thing to do. you kept all characters accounted for, and left no one out--except shippou. i love reading a good fight scene as much as a good angsty or fluffy scene. they all carry strong emotion. now i have to wait to see who sesshoumaru saves, and who he leaves for the others to rescue. this story continues to be one of my favorites. thank you for your dedication to it, and all the hard work you have put into it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 12:39 CDT
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kouga's reaction to kagome was quite interesting. something one thought he realized in the manga when he took his leave after kikyo's death was kagome's devotion to inuyasha. ♣ i'm too lazy to go back and read right now to see if you based this mainly on the anime or manga for the weapons/attacks/strengths everyone possesses, but one would think that kongoushouha or meidou zantegshuha might have been more effective than kaza no kizu since neither is an elemental attack? for that matter wouldn't have kouga used goraishi? (i realize that if you have based everything on the anime, half of the above would not exist) ♦ i understand the need for them to keep the knowledge of real location of the jewel from the enemy but one is concerned that kagome, in an effort to save rin will spill the beans. ♠ exciting chapter, much suspense. ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 05:37 CDT
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the intensity built so much in this chapter. by the end, i was on the edge of my seat! i love ginta and hakkaku. they always add a laugh. and the relationship between rin and shippou is so cute. now that sesshoumaru is on his way back, all the main characters will be gathered together, once again. this is a truly amazing story. i can't wait until the next chapter! good luck with the move, and thank you for finding the time to continue this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 19:23 CDT
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by shielding them off from the outside world she only prevented him from confronting her enemy sooner. so, yasha can't catch some 'alone time' with kagome after such a long journey; she needs her sleep anyway. . . i read a fanfiction somewhere that i will now quote from: "do not meddle in the affairs of dragons as you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup." i am so sorry i didn't write the fanfic and author's names down so i could give credit. will it be yasha's tachi to the rescue? ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 20:40 CDT
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As a friend of mine would say, this is turning into one big fuster cluck! I'm looking forward to seeing how you sort things out. The reunion between Kagome and Inuyasha was very sweet and very well done, in my opinion...too bad they only had that much time before they were back into the fray. Oh well, right? At least this way Kagome gets to see everyone again right away like she wanted to. I can't wait to see what happens when all these paths converge! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... glad that inuyasha & kagome are together again... hope they get to their friends on time... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 21:59 CDT
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as all parties converge... the biggest threat they have to worry about is of the dragon variety, we haven't seen them in a while. one hopes kagome has truly assumed complete control of her powers and that of the jewel as you have been setting things up for a major conflict. one also hopes the new 'lady of the west' doesn't have anything against human/youkai interaction and hanyou, if not she'll have to get used to it. . . quite an epic tale. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 06:25 CDT
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wow, 1000 hits? really? congrats! this story is so good, more people need to read it. i loved the emotion of the reunion at the beginning of the chapter. the feeling of rightness came shining through. now they can all be reunited, and set things right, again. i cant wait to see the conflict you bring their way before that happens, though. thank you for another great chapter.
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