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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 05, 2008 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. . . I was impressed with this. I was not expecting something this good. The characters, the storyline. Now . . . I am riveted to it, and I will definitely be checking in for more updates. It was nice to find a new author with lots of talent. I really liked the story. K and I stories are always my favorites. Thank you for sharing with us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just did a marathon read of your story...wbk recommended it, and I value her opinion, so I knew this would definately be a story worth reading!! This is a wonderful story, and the reunion of Inuyasha and Kagome in the last chapter had me all squishy!!! this is how the manga SHOULD have ended...but I have a feeling you will continue to manipulate each of these beloved characters a bit more. The tension you have built within the seperate "groups" leading up to this is spectacular, and I have a sneaking suspicion that something big is about to happen concerning all the major players....I wonder, if Rin's devestation over her Lord finding a bride will send her into the arms of Kohaku, perhaps? Will she be the key to healing his battered soul? And will Koga take the hint now that Kagome is officially "scent marked" by Inuyasha.....I eagerly await the next chapter to see if my assumptions are correct!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 16:01 CDT
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i am so glad that you have them together, again. and i do like your reunion better than the end of the manga! now will they go to sesshoumaru's home? i know you have everyone heading there for a reason, and i can't wait to see what it is.
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 06:52 CDT
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I don't have much time to review just now, but this is great material! I couldn't run off and not tell you that. ^_^ I'm definitely looking forward to more--cheers!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 06:25 CDT
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snegura seems to be a good match for sesshoumaru. both think they will go into this union without emotions. i have a feeling that you have other plans for them, eventually. right now, they both see themselves as only using the other. i can't wait to see what going on back at the castle. thanks for a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 05:23 CDT
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now rin is in danger just because she was with inuyasha. kohaku is on his way to a war between demons, and sango and miroku will be with him. inuyasha and kagome are still trying to find they way back to each other. i can feel a climctic moment on the way! you are building the tension and the anxiety so well! i can't wait to see where the next chapter takes them. thank you for a great post.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 22:26 CDT
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kohaku has always been a tragic figure. to take such a gentle spirit, and use it for such darkness has always seemed like the most tragic storyline of the manga. i'm glad that you incorporated it into your story. his very soul has been violated, and the simple act of remembering will not heal him. sango and miroku will have their hands full, now. not just having to help her brother, but with a baby on the way. thank you for a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:08 CDT
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it does seem to always end with kagome... she is pivotal in her powers and with the jewel. even takahashi-sama has done that with the manga. . . it's exciting that she has found the clue to her power and protection... like yasha's dad programmed into tessaiga the need to protect and the secret to yasha's strength. . . lets hope kagome's friend switches his affections to ayumi. ~ a delight, ginny
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 03:01 CDT
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the reciprocity of kagome being stronger when she's defending inuyasha--even if it's only in her mind--was a great addition to this chapter. the theme of protecting someone important to you has been a part of the inuyasha story throughout. you worked it in your story without being obvious or contrived. i loved this chapter, and the revelations it brought. thank you for posting it.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 05:46 CDT
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Oh, I certainly hope Kagome comes back soon. Poor InuYasha, you really gotta feel for him, especially now that his brother has HIS human with him...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 03:50 CDT
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i feel sorry for sesshoumaru. now he will have to feal with a hormonal girl and his mother at the same time. how long will it take him to discover rin's feelings towards him, and his own reciprocal feelings? and what will his mother do to cause trouble when she finds he has the human still involved in his life? inuyasha and kagome are now the only members of the core group that are on their own. i can't wait to see how you get them back together. thank you for a great post.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It is something new and different. It has Rin and Sesshoumaru in it, my favorite couple! I am not sure if you are a shipper, but do you plan on progressing their relationship in you story? Your writing is very detail, I can imagine all the actions the characters are doing in my head. I like how your story is up to date with the manga. I also like your shout out to Resmiranda. Looking forward to your update!
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Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. After 10.000plus InuYasha fics it's hard to find one that brings truly new thoughts, canon interpretations and story lines. You manage to do all that. Even though to me, everyone is completely in character, there are new views to their personality that fit well with everything we know and yet helps to flesh them out some more. Your Rin is a favourite of mine. Also, kudos on the brilliant use of original characters. Usually I try to stay clear of them (Beware of the Mary Sue!-mentality), but the ones in your fic don't come over mary-sueish at all. Having devoured all 11 chapters in one go, I'd really love to see more of this.
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Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 02:00 CDT
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I am contemplating the notion of putting up an "author's notes" blog somewhere, to give a bit more background on this story and some of my future plans for other projects. Would there be any fan interest in that? ~LK
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 02:51 CDT
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wow! blood, gore, the thrill of victory, sentimentality, breathtaking scenery, threats of retribution and a cliffy, all in one chapter. this one kept me glued to my computer for the whole chapter. thank you for a great post!
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