| "Midvalley's Serenade" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 19:58 CDT
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(the last time I tried to read this, the power went out. Now, I see why. It's dark.)
This one was great! Love the history about Legato: makes sense. Cannibalism? Yuck! Legato must be really drunk to go that deep. Please Bring Nick Back! Please Please Please! It's breaking my heart what happening to Midvalley! (hey, this might be a good thing.)
I relate to his writing the letter. It's so hard putting such emotion into words. Especially with all that's around. I hope the tear-stains (if there are any.) on the letter say enough. |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 06:40 CDT
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Wow. Next chapter I can tell you happy 40th!
This fic really is epic...
Certainly one of the best Trigun fics ever written.
Keep it up.
-k. |
Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 21:28 CDT
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I've only read ch. 1 so far and really wish I had more time to read more. What a way to catch a person's attention and drag them into the story. Never had paid much mind to Midvalley in Trigun and already with this one chapter you've made him this fully realized human being and given to Wolfwood a vulnerability and strength that we've seen in the series. Beautiful. |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 14:18 CDT
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(It was a long journey getting here, and I'm not upset that I suffered it. The goal was worth it.)
CRUSH! That's the one word. CRUSH! Like a can in a recycling dumpster. And the thing that makes it worse is, Midvalley did it to himself (of course not intentionally.) $@^ Knives. Legato is. . . well. . .confusing in a curious manner. Just when it was all figured out, boom! new details. I'm beginning to think that he's a guy who just can't think for himself anymore. Heheh, I suppose 'rought f - king' can do that to someone.
Anyway, this read was great.
(Pardon me saying, but I'm impressed with Midvalley's self-control. Took him so long to resort to 'slippery M'. LOL and you know I'm joking.) |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mm.org is working for me!
I love the new chapter keep it up!
:) |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouf, so much going on... I really like how much depth you're giving to Knives and Legato in the past two chapters. I'm really wondering as to how this is going to end! I hope that Midvalley sees Nick again, but I'm beginning to question if he will... o__O Very realistic reactions to things, like how Midvalley's compassion is making him tend to Legato, and how he's starting to become almost infatuated with him. Wonderful work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 02:43 CDT
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"I'd like to review some reports with you when Master Knives is finished with me," he began and then placed a thick stack of documents in my. I walked back to the office at headquarters, put aside my angry feelings and concentrated on my work. I started to leaf through the papers.
I'm guessing you meant 'in my hand', but left out the last word. I thought you might like to know about this. ^^;
-k. |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 18:51 CDT
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So sad, so beautiful, it was like Indigo Blue. It was a heavy clash of ideas: hope or hopelessness. Will 'Nick' ever return? And Legato: what can one think about him now?
Hehe, and Knives. If I was there giving the report, I couldn't help but chuckle. "It's nothing, really. You just remind me of a boy I once knew in High School." (And very likely he will kill me.) Not saying that your Knives was bad, o no. This is just a reaction of mine. |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Chapter thirty-six was definately an intruiging one. I'm really interested in the chemistry between Legato and Knives. Hearing about how Midvalley's rape was planned was quite a surprise! The ending was very gripping and realistic... I feel bad for Midvalley. He's so overwhelmed! I'm really anxious to see how things turn out regarding his relationship with Nick... and what's going on with Nick and Vash, I wonder? Aah, so many questions! I guess we'll just have to read more to find the answers, which I am most certainly looking forward to. :D Good work! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!
can't wait for next one!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: Claudia On: April 23, 2003 19:45 CDT
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Oh God. *rewatches episodes 18-24* OH GOD! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS!! |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 04:57 CDT
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Knives? In...human public?
This could be interesting...
The meeting, though I cannot see Knives stooping so low to associate with humans, is brilliant. You really do capture him well. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 04:48 CDT
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Your writing, is again, amazingly powerful.
I don't think Knives would ever deign to rape a human, but the empathic connection that Midvalley picks up is highly believeable...I've read something done with Steve x Knives shotacon, and I think the entire situation is incredibly plausable...Steve was such a bastard... -.-
*waits impatiently for next chapter to load*
^^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 18:13 CDT
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I reviewed you at fanfic, but I wanted to review here too! This is by far my favorite Trigun fic I've ever read! Keep up the good work!
can't wait for next chapter!
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm left on edge. Knives, Legato, with Midvalley. Ho boy, what a crowd. How will Midvalley feel about this? Both causes of his current pain in the same space? My goodness, I'd hate it. I'm proud of how he's taking all that had happened, and wanting to be honest with Nick. I hope he is.
Plus, I like how you write out Knives. He's a real leader. ;-) and a scary, iron firm one at that. You can tell just by looking and hearing him once that 'you DON'T fuck with him!' I'm impressed with Midvalley not being overly 'submissive'.
As always, good write. Most excellent. |
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