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| "Midvalley's Serenade" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Miraba On: January 27, 2003 18:08 CST
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*weak grins*
That last chapter was particularly moving. Midvalley (finally!) learning who his father is, Nick overhearing Chapel's speach.
Keep up the good work. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 21:30 CST
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Love this! Love this!
Man, picture this. Snow is falling outside, blues is playing on the radio, and reading a wonderful update from one of the best fics ever. Oh man, I love this! The fic, the evening, yeah. . . .
OK, enough of that. If I haven't said it enough, course not, this was terrific. The imagery was fantastic, especially the dreams. Its always your dreams that make me want to draw. And the emotional connection between Middie and Nick. Oh wow, when chastity is better than hot sex. And the tying it in with Mei City; yep, Middie, something of the 'Springer' sort is afoot--NOT. And McCoy is awesome. What a guy. Total respect for him now.
Man, it was great. | Reviewed By: Twilight Rose On: January 20, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I always do tens for you, feel happily privlidged, feel so privledged you write more. ^_^; Nick said Vash, and Midvalley heard him. That means a questioning session is inevitable, once Nicky stops dying. Which he had BETTER. I have a sickly feeling about Midvalley being reassigned though. A feeling that makes me so very sad. You'll have to update this amazing fic soon. VERY VERY soon. Or as soon as humanly possible. ^_^; | Reviewed By: Twilight Rose On: January 15, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you spell better then me, so points to you. I started reading this story awhile ago at ff.net, and then lost it for the longest time. You cannot imagine how thrilled I was to find it here, with many more chapters, and chapters still pending! You did a WONDERFUL job capturing the attitude of what is basically pretty much a background character in the Anime, and actually bringing him to life. The way you communicate his reasons, his passions and desires really helps me understand why you seemingly like this character so much, and I must admit, I was not really a Midvalley fan before this fanfic, but now I think I am. The writing is of the highest caliber, and the fact that different, fresh vocabulary is used is absolutely invigorating. ^_^ I have the sad, sinking feeling, since this is following the Anime storyline to a perfect key though, it will end the same, and that makes me cry. I hope that you continue to write this wonderful story, and I also hope that you update soon. ^_^; | Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible fanfic. One of my favorites, actually (I have three, one of them being Trigun 'Action!). I can't wait for another chapter, but I'm also dreading for this story to end. The writing style is great - lots of detail, and I am in awe of how well the characters are developed. After reading a few chapters, I started to see Midvalley in a whole new light. Great job! Keep up the good work (please). :) | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 21:20 CST
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YIKES!
What's going on! What's happening to Midvalley? I'm trying to make sense of it all, but how is his power making him sick?
I love how you wrote this chapter. I was a little hesitant about how the story will turn out once it starts to connect to the series. From my reading exprience, usually stories start to falter at 'connection' points. Not this one, not at all. Its still strictly Midvalley's point-of-view and it is flawlessly written. Love it.
I'm still sure that Legato is up to something. Quite a change of attitude towards Midvalley, don't you think? | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(low long whistle)
I love how you do dreams. Speaking as one, it's an illustrator's playground.
May City already? Man, time goes by really fast.
'trust McCoy like you would trust Legato.' (snicker) That says a lot right there. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 23:32 CST
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YIKES! No, this is worse than yikes, this is downright AAAAAAAAAA!
This chapter was hypnotizing. Heh, great to see those two back together again. Midvalley in a chartruese (spelling?) suit? Cool picture. Great chapter! A beautifully painted word-picture of love.
Boy, Legato does know how to make an appearance. Sheesh, it's like he slithers in like a snake, and then ccasionally charges in like an alligator. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 21:14 CST
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Ooooo the plot thickens.
I was beginning to get a little worried about the story getting a little more quiet, now that Nicholas is 'out of the picture". Nope. It's all the more intriquing.
Nice to see some of the 'humanity' in the "Academy" group. Know what I mean? Sorry about Caine, tragic. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 23:12 CST
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Waaaaaaah!!
It's finally happened! Nick's gone! Waaaaah!
Man, Caine and Welch. . . awww geeez! This is such a sad section.
I want to kick Zazie's immature ass!
On the e'clair, I kept wanting to say, "Legato, shut up." Same with Rai, surprising little dude that is he.
Hmmmm. I wonder where this story can go from here. What can be expected to happen has already happened. Will he be making visits?
Boy, you are so great! I love how you keep me guessing. | Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 21:21 CST
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I find it rather dispiriting that my paragraphing and italics don't seem to survive the upload process. I hope the song lyrics are not too confusing in Chapter 21. It made perfect sense on my computer. Fat lot of good that does anyone else. Sorry for any inconvenience or lack of clarity. Furthermore, in dream sequences and when Legato was speaking telepathically, it was all in italics but lo! and behold! as uploaded--not. Another mm mystery. But I love it. Good and gracious mm. I prefer it to ff which stands for, well, never mind. | Reviewed By: katsa5 On: November 25, 2002 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Straight tens for Jexia!!
LOL! Mine the Meat tenderizer, that's hilarious! Zazie's got quite a temper; it's funny. Not such a nice mouth though; I recommend Dial soap soda.
Intriquing little moment at the beginning. Things between Legato and Midvalley are beginning to make more sense.
'Lover' that is so sweet. Those two are so sweet.
Once more, an awesome update. Many a kudos!
("I'm with the band." LOL! That still cracks me up.) | Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Powerful. Poignant.
The only thing I don't like is the way you've done Legato's character. But you do a brilliant job with your interpretation of the character.
I love this story. It's one of the best I've read.
Everything is handled very well: Emotion, tension, hell, even COMBAT, which is not easy to write, and is often boring to read. I usually just skim it, but I didn't with this one. You made everything interesting and it reads very fluidly. Your style and talent are amazing.
It's also nice to see such an in-depth Midvalley x Chapel fic.
Thank you for writing this. Hope to see more. | Reviewed By: katsa5 On: November 11, 2002 09:27 CST
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As always, I'm impressed.
So, in a few days, it's Nicholas gone bye-bye. I wonder how its going to turn out? Its a little difficult though. I mean, we all knew he was going to go sometime, but its still a tough swallow when the moment arrives.
Dominique and EG. (laughes smugly) Dang, you are so cruel, I love it. She and Nick sparring; so that is the filthy vocabulary of legend. I'll admit it, I laughed.
Geez, Legato is playing dirty. What is going on up there, Legato? Emotional revenge? (I don't like using this word in such a context, but) Frustration? Power thing? Makes one wonder. | Reviewed By: katsa5 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 05:55 CST
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'High Hopes' is a really uplifting chapter. A 'sunny' mood with subtle predictions. I like that combination. Its really nice seeing those two so happy.
I know I've said this before, but I really like the way Legato is portrayed. An elegent speaker and a sharp, calculating mind. A few of Legato's great qualities.
Currently, I'm thinking of ways all this could tie into the series. Hmmmm. When 'tieing in' comes around, things, I'll bet, will get really intriquing, more than interesting. | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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