| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: EroPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2024 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After so many years I've decided to revisit this story. Two decades
later, this is still my favorite G/B, T/P fanfic! You may remember
me as Nesha from back in the olden days (lol). Now I'm under the
penname EroPrincess on AO3. Now that I'm much older I can recognize
things about this story that I didn't notice before. I liked how
you kept both Bra and Pan hopeful and naive regarding their
respective love interests. Which makes sense considering their ages
and lack of relationship/male experience. It makes the story more
believable. I know this story won't have a conclusion, but just
know that I still enjoy reading this today just like I enjoyed
reading it for the first time in 2002.
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Reviewed By: angelica_lisa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2012 11:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story - I hope that someday this will be finished! |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Brit00 On: April 18, 2012 18:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow this is one of the best fanfics I have read in forever I know it's been 4 years since an update but I have hope I can see it finished. |
Reviewed By: Ginea On: July 25, 2011 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was told by a friend to read this story because it was great and enjoyable. I agree but I do hate I read it because its not finished and you keep saying through out the whole story you plan to finish the story but you leave it unfinished. You only have like a few more chapters left befor you done with it. It will be sweet when I get to read more :) |
Reviewed By: fameworld [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2011 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought you were going to update this story...cause I've been waiting for a year now. YOu can't just leave it here after Pan relationship with Trunks start lol. I really really really hope you finish this great story. |
Title: I'm still reading/waiting
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2011 09:10 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ZOMG! It's been like, 4 years since I last read this fan fic! Like you I got bored with DBZ and became a Bleach fanatic. But now that I'm bored with Bleach, I started watching DBZ Kai and my love for the series started all over again. So naturally I had to look up this story to re-read it all over again, and it's just as enjoyable as it was 9 years ago! (Damn that's a long time!) I read your Author's Note stating that you're planning to finish this story. I hope so before the apocalypse comes! Lol! Just thought I'd check in! |
Reviewed By: Fumbol On: November 21, 2010 11:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great story I really do wish you would finish it one day, but either way great story. I just found this story today and I couldn't stop reading it not many stories can ddo that to me. |
Reviewed By: Happy clam On: January 23, 2010 02:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!
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Title: loschicos.es.503.lesly@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Lesly Hernandez On: August 30, 2009 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
keep writing please! best Trunks fanfic I've ever read... love it rather; continue please =[
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Reviewed By: ChiseChitose On: March 04, 2009 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I'm a lurker. I admit it! I'm sorry! I will say that I've been lurking since this story came out in 2002! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON IT!!! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Black_Ink [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 09:52 PST
Comment/Review:
it's a shame this won't be finished, but I understand when you lose interest and it just becomes a chore to continue something. It was pretty good, aside from any spelling/grammar errors, it was quite enjoyable. Thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Amazon-Saiyan_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! pretty plz finish this story its great! i wanna know wat happen with trunks and pan.
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Reviewed By: your biggest fan On: October 27, 2008 00:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. i love it! the story gets better and better. I'm hooked! i hope you update soon!
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Title: i don't fricking believe it
Reviewed By: ladybugg0000 also known as ladybugg1234_2004 On: January 23, 2008 00:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been to this site in about 2 years, and when I finally come back I greeted with such a sweet surprise. Goodness I thought that you abandoned this story all together, but I'm glad that you didn't. This is me doing the happy dance. :) :) :) :) :) I loved it and I can't wait to see the changes in Trunks....or not. He's so bad. Also congrats on having your baby. So seeing how busy you are, I won't harass you about updating soon. I know how kids can be, but I'll make sure to come back here and see if you've updated. You've just made me one happy woman.Laters.
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Reviewed By: Toki_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 16:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Really Really good so far. Hope you do update soon please!^-^
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