| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Reviewed By: ? On: January 22, 2003 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ? On: January 22, 2003 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan an Trunks UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: !@#$%^&*()+_!@$^&*(*&^%$#%^&* On: January 22, 2003 00:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pan and Trunks! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: January 15, 2003 22:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I had reviewed more. About your new comments - On other fics, I have waited over 3 months for a page, so if ppl can't deal with the fact that you have a life, they don't have to continue reading. I'd much rather get shorter chapters every month than nothing for several months. The fact that you have told us that you are continuing this is good enough for me. So hang in there update as soon as you can, but no pressure, cuz that takes all the fun out of it for you. It truly is a fantastic fic and I for one will wait as long as it takes for you to update. |
Reviewed By: kOdaKmOmeNt On: January 11, 2003 13:05 EST
Comment/Review:
OMGosh!!! That was so incredibly good. I can't beleive how you made Trunks and Goten's personalities! Wicked awesome, you should definitely continue! The next chapter should be very good considering that Bra and Goten are the better couple of the two! They kick mad ass! Well,keep goin with this, it's really great!!!!
PEACE-kOdaKmOmeNt |
Reviewed By: SaiyanMad On: January 02, 2003 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the coolest fic!!! I like it how you don't just make it so that bra fancies goten, goten likes her= have it off 4 a while, it's not all happy happy perfect the whole time which makes it a proper story. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 16:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time you've updated this story (you won't find me anywere else on your list of reviewers because last time I read this, I didn't have time to review, sorry...). Don't take too long on the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Blacky On: December 27, 2002 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your story you should write more often it is very creative for once trunks is not an goodie goodie. |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 12:27 EST
Comment/Review:
Gokusgirl you sure know how to right a story, so can u e-mail me a copy of the updated version at jsw097@aol.com. also i think your right about how goten and trunks were players |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 13:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't just stop here!!! That is just, not fair!!!!! And when does the Trunks and Pan thing start!?!?!?!? Anyways, it's a really really good story, it's STILL on of my favorites!!
Keep it going!!
B.J |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 00:22 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry...I noticed that there were two readers who were complaining in an, erm...somewhat mean-like way about the short chapters after my last review (Not so much mean way, but you know what I mean...kind of a "nagging" review).
I understand about the whole "Updating" thing, I'm really bad with my own stories as it is. I hope my last review didn't offend you in any way, or was what was the cause of you writing that in your summary.
Can't wait 'till you update next!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 15:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo Hoo!! another chapter!! (Why do MM never tell me?? They're supposed to) Thoroughly enjoyed it Gokusgirl - well worth the wait...what has Bra got planned for Goten??? The poor boy has been in BB hell for months now!! : D ... I quite like Marron, but I also like the way you've made her a complete slut!! HA!! naughty GG!! I look forward to the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 12:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story and i never thought i would happen this way. |
Reviewed By: raska On: December 18, 2002 13:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining, original, and well-written story so far. Trunks is getting what he deserves- he can be such an ass. I can't wait to hear about what's involved in the bonding ritual! |
Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 21:37 EST
Comment/Review:
No offense gokusgirl, but I waited two months for that? There was almost no plot in this particular chapter; it was more like filler. However, as a whole I love the story and I can't wait to see how it develops. I'm just dissapointed with this particular chapter. |
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