| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT fiction and you must continue it now. I am dying to know what will happen next. When will Trunks and Pan finally be together? Will it be Goten and Bra or late Goten and an angry daughter? I have to knoooow!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! You have to finish this! I got to the end and I'm like, where's the rest? Unfortunately you haven't updated since January so I don't know if you're even going to finish. T_T Not that I can complain about lack of updating.... I really loved this. I think this is a GREAT story. Trunks and Goten as "man whores" - it's awesome! ^_^ Um... would you please update? How about if I cover Vegeta in whipped cream and give him to you if you do? ^_^
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Chibi Halo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 23:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for submitting your piece to FFARG. You have a good start to your fic with a nice grasp of grammar. The story has a good flow and pace to it. There were a few things, however, that could use some renovating. For instance I noticed a couple of places where you may have not removed suggestions from your betas. Also, in this passage "very unlikely it would happen" you need to chose to use "it" or "that" not both words for the sentence as a whole. I would also suggest taking out the references to modern music and film in this chapter as they do not fit in with the Dragonball world. Calling it rock music and movies would better fit in with the world the story takes place in. All in all you have a good start to your piece with good grammar and pace. Keep up the good work and thank you once again for submitting your piece to FFARG.
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Title: Aw, come on!
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 14:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Write some more? People like this story! I personally don't like to wait *this* long for a new chapter, especially when it's *this* good! >_< LOVELOVELOVE!
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Title: !!11
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, new chapter, come on!!! >__<
Good stories like this should be updated like .. all the time!
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 13:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOWW! please updats soon! it is so good!! (i really want to see what is going to happen to goten! ^_^!)
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Title: Omg!!1!
Reviewed By: no use On: September 15, 2005 14:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, where is the rest?!!? I'm so dying over this story! I love it sooooo much. I was just wondering, when are you gonna continue this? I kind of need it =^___^=
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 09, 2005 19:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!PLEASE!!!
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 00:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing as always- thank you for updating this!! You've been missed! :)
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Reviewed By: cocostarr On: June 23, 2005 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U P D A T E.
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Reviewed By: NewbVR On: June 04, 2005 20:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
honestly i cant wait till u update again.. i thought u had given up on this story TT_TT thank god u didnt!
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