| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:43 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: X-Slayer On: May 09, 2005 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! Did I mention I loved it? LOL! Do ya thing gokusgirl, you make you're stories better by the minute! Can't wait for chapter 14!
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Reviewed By: Trisha On: May 03, 2005 03:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is the best. i cant wait. pls update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i cant wait for Pan and Trunks to hook up
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Title: Hey!!!! long time no post, eh honey??
Reviewed By: Lady Valtaya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 01:01 EDT
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LOL same here. Real life is just hell as you get older. I couldn't believe it when I saw you had updated this again!!!!!!!!!!! Great to see ya, sweetie, keep up the great work!!! Looks great so far, I sure am glad that Chichi's ranting wasn't in front of Vegeta- I bet it wouldn't have gone over well with him at all!!
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Reviewed By: ahahahahah On: April 25, 2005 19:34 EDT
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ahahahahah omg you have finally updated.lol .......................hhahahh nice
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: ladybugg@@@ On: April 25, 2005 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I for one am soooooo glad that you got a new computer. I'm also glad that you've decided to write more, and yes I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what you have planned for us next. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I seriously thought you were dead! I emailed you and everything like what, a year ago, trying to get a hold of you to see if you were alive! I don't know how many times I visited your website, trying to get some information on you, but it just seemed like it was dead. I really hope that you continue to work on it, I know that I tried to join for the doujinshi part, but I never got any information back. So it's on hiatus forever, huh? I hope that you're not serious! Your website was really nice, and I loved it! I even advertised it on my own! Please update soon, I swear I almost died when I saw that mm.org emailed me with an update from you! THANK YOU FOR BEING ALIVE!
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't know how happy I was to see this chapter! I really hope this means you will continue this fic. There are several that have never been finished that I was reading, but this is one that I have thought about more than once hoping it would continue. Anyway, great chapter....can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: bvc On: April 23, 2005 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! its really good. pleeeeaaase update soon. bvc
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Title: none
Reviewed By: eli4 On: April 16, 2005 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, hope you have a continuation in store for us readers. Really, you had me falling into the story. I'm a big T/P fan. Guess what? I'm 31 with two teen girls, 16 and 13, and two smaller kids 7 and 3. I like to relax and watch my favorite show with my son and Daugthers. They think it's crazy and hilariously funny. It's full oof action for all ages. I think. I will have a hard time forgetting DBZ. My brother got me hooked when I was trying to watch, Saving Private Ryan. This as during the fight with fat buu. The way Vegeta went all out, I just had to see what happened next. Thanks for the great story.Wish you had more.
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Title: yeah... ever heard of UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: Impatient person On: January 28, 2005 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO! Anybody there! Yeah us people would like an update... right about... NOW! C'mon I've heard of writers block... but this is ridiculous!
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Title: Itz Really Good
Reviewed By: Sam from Canada On: September 18, 2004 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Itz Really good and when i looked at when u last updated it was like so long ago about a year so i was wonderin if u can update soon????? Please continue the story its so gooood
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Title: When?
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 10:30 EDT
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When are you gonna update? Please..? This is definately one of the best stories I have ever read. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 14:22 EDT
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Can you at least let us know if you are going to continue this fic? I really don't want to keep ask for an update if it's never going to happen. Thanks. But I really would like an update!!
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Title: >:/
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:10 EDT
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You just love to torture pathetic people like me? I Think You Should Hurry, And Get On With The Story. But besides that; the story is very good and very nice written ^_^
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