| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 171 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bulmafox On: October 07, 2003 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR PAN! Trunks does not deserve her.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just can not believe that Goku and Chi Chi are stupid enough to think Goten is messing around with Bulma! And I get the feeling that poor Pan is going to have to deal with Marron... perhaps Bulma and Pan should team up and start bitch slapping people! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nesha (2 lazy 2 login) On: October 06, 2003 15:14 EDT
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Man, Pan should've slapped "Morron" for that comment! But, I enjoyed this chapter very much! And Bulma's on her way to Chi-Chi's... why am I sensing a VIOLENT confrontation on the way?
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Reviewed By: LiL PriNCeSs Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! i read dis fic soo long ago n it end with "Bulma Briefs". I was like i gotta read more but i kinda didnt check mediaminor so sorry bout that. well now i kno u updated n im very happy. i love dis fic. its funny it really is. i cant wait for Goku's talk with Goten. next xhapter should be good. update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 15:05 EDT
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When are you gonna continue on this? I simply can't wait! I'm going crazy! Crazy I tell you!!
*spins around and vanishes with a cloud of dust* |
Reviewed By: Rei_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 05:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY AND UPDATE IM DYING!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X (not logged in) On: July 29, 2003 13:45 EDT
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Keep it coming! This is such a great story... I can't wait for the Trunks/Pan lemon... or pairing whatever.... ;) |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X (not logged in) On: July 25, 2003 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REEEEAAAAALLY Like this story, I think that you should continue... SOON!!! I think that it was funny when Vegeta came into the room, and Goten fell off the bed, I laughed for a few minutes or something...
But, me and my sisters, Freaky_X and Psyco_X think you should continue soon.
Bloody Jennie |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 21:19 EDT
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*Sigh* Are you EVER gonna update this story? I mean seriously, it's been 34 days since you last updated! No, I do not count the days, that would be a VERY bad sign if I started doing that, I just did a little math quickly to fugure it out. So could you update, please? |
Reviewed By: kittykat88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 11:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, it is really good!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 15:51 EDT
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Yay, yu finally updated! Can you make Pan slap Trunks or something, he's really being an ass and he deserves it. After all, it's his best friends niece! |
Reviewed By: Reneex On: June 06, 2003 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soo much, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: DBB On: June 06, 2003 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is dedicated to everyone who hate Chi-Chi... y'all can kiss my ass!!! Chi-Chi rocks, and she's only reacting as any mother would react!!!
This story rocks, and I hope Pan kicks Trunks in the nuts for what he said. She's better off with Hiei (Yu Yu Hakusho) anyway. Let that purple-haired brat have "Morron!!!" |
Reviewed By: Nesha On: June 06, 2003 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!!! That was unexpected!!! How can Trunks be so cruel??? I KNEW Pan deserved better!!!
And how's Bulma gonna react when Chi-Chi accuses her of sleeping with Goten??? More importantly... how's Vegeta gonna react???
Either way... drama some MAJOR drama is gonna occur!!! I'll keep on the lookout for more updates!!! |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: June 05, 2003 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated!!! Loved the conversations in this chapter. Looking foward to Goku's talk to Goten. I think Pan should get to kick Trunks' ass for that comment. Hope you can update the next chapter soon! |
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