| "Who Wants to Live Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegetasonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 16:51 EST
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Wow...I don't like the pairing B/V But this story is totally beautiful....*favs!!*
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Title: beuatiful
Reviewed By: kagomereborn not signed in On: January 05, 2006 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was beautifully written. the protrayal of the characters, well you could see it was hearfelt. I thank you for sharing this with me with everyone that will get to read this. and I pray the the fire and soul that burned in this story continues on to strenghten your family
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 12:33 EDT
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Your story is simple, but it is beautiful in its simplicity and it touched me. Keep writing like that. I hope your mom keeps fighting.... and I hope she wins. Ja ne.
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Title: ...............
Reviewed By: maegan a.k.a koolaid On: March 20, 2005 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm truly crying as I write this, oh my lord. You are so true and simple words and phrases can't show my tears or express my feelings. I can't help but show remorse, for I lost my blood grandfather to skin cancer and almost the smae fate had risen on my aunt but fortunetly didn't. I have looked for so many ways to cope but I haven't found one.......youv'e helped me more than you know. PLEASE e-mail me at bellevue1991@aol.com or lightbuttyfly8@aol.com THANK YOU!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BlueMo0n [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 19:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know that gut wrenching feeling when something so sad is presented to you? That is going, in waves, through my chest. I love this story, it's under my favorites list on my browser, and is the first story I show to people when referring them to mediaminer. Thank you so much for writing something so true to the actualy process of cancer, it runs in my family, breast cancer to be exact, and many people laugh at it because of where it originates. No one really gets how real it is, until you experience it. 10/10 with not a blink of an eye, this is flawless, and yet, not far from what is actually experienced. Thank you once again, for showing the world how real this is, and just how much it hurts.
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Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed in) On: January 20, 2005 20:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::cries:: This is so sad...but it's so heart touching, i'm sorry to hear about your family. No one should go through that so much. You did a wonderful job on carring out the main message.
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: December 04, 2004 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely beautiful the emotions were raw and completely realistic you evoked sympathy from me especially when Vegeta was crying. The ending was extremely powerful and i loved it.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 22:29 EST
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*sobs* yes i really am crying! that was so touching, especially that last part! and that birth scene was hilarious! "you f***ing push", i love that line! good job, that must've hard for you to keep everyone in character like that! it's flawless, no wonder it's in the featured section!
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 16:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff sniff* Whyyyyyyy???? *sniff* Poor Bulma and Vegeta, *sniff* its soooo sad... Trunks: *sniff* I know! Atarah: Flame? Why would anyone want to flame a sad story, youre not allowed to! Rule In Section 2, number 164, Part C of Rules For Being A Fanfictionist And/Or Reviewer "You are not allowed to Flame any Angst and/or Drama stories that come from personal experiences. If the Story was poorly written then keep your mouth shut and do not comment at all." See? Its in the rules!
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Reviewed By: CrabbyPatty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is extremely touching. I actually cried while reading it. We've all lost love ones, never forgetting them. The way you've written this fic is beautiful. The emotions you feel while reading it can just tear your heart apart. Congratulations on a fic well done. One of the best ones I've read in a long time.
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Reviewed By: Cazziz On: September 29, 2004 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an amazing and beautiful story! I have to admit I cried. Sorry for your loss.
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Title: lovely
Reviewed By: RosebloodAme [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sad yet happy story. One life ends and two begin. I can't believe Vegeta held his own against Chi-Chi! I bet he had to change his pants after, though lol. *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Kusanagisan On: September 13, 2004 20:09 EDT
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Amazing. I have been a very large fan of the Dragonball universe for years...and this story not only touched my heart...it added a depth of emotion and feeling that Akira Toriyama never did. Truly...a very beautiful piece.
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Reviewed By: Yami No Marik [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 12:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know much about DBZ but that doesn't matter. This is a really well written story. Sad at the end. It did a good job in getting me into the story. It's gotten me a little interested in reading more DBZ fics so I can read more about the characters you have in your fic.
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Title: Touched
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 13:28 EDT
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I truly enjoyed this well-written, extremely touching one shot. Not being a big DBZ fan, I initially had some doubts, but once I got started, I easily fell into the story. I'll admit it now, I cried. This was a very bittersweet story. Good though.
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