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| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: Nistha On: June 08, 2005 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...it took me a few chapters to get the whole two story thing, but it is genius! I love the way each character is...characterized! This is one of my all-time favorite stories. It is sad, knowing that the Kagome, who interacts with Sesshou, doesn't remember her relationship with Sesshoumaru of the past and somehow, something happened to the two lovers of the past. Sesshoumaru must have died somehow and reincarnated into a human, since he remembers his birthday and all. And then there is the factor of Kagome and Sesshou's birthday being on the same day. The past individuals love each other so much and knowing this future Sesshou lets us comprehend that something bad happened in Sengoku Jidai, giving it a doomed-sexy feel to it...like I believe you were aiming for using PJ Harvey's song, "This Mess We're In" as an inspiration. The pieces fit together so perfectly. This story...I can't even describe it...is wonderful. I hope it isn't discontinued...please update when you can. ^_____^
| Reviewed By: Sesshoumarulover0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 18:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fan fic is one of the best ones yet. I have to say that, being a writer myself, has brought me to review many of the stories I read. Unfortently, many of these are bad reviews. Your story has kept me on the edge of my seat. The plot was great! Even the discriptive sex scene with Sesshoumaru and Kagome. The two in one story thing was also a great touch. Sesshou is one of my favorite characters in this story. I hope your not discourage to write anymore since it has been a year since you last updated your story. Please, I would like to see this story finished and if you keep going at it, you might become a writer just like I am. With total respect, Alissa Ciampa
| Reviewed By: falconswing14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Well, I saw this story on a bunch of other author's lists of recommendations, but I never really bothered because (no offense) the summary isn't so great. But then I did read it, and was completely blown away! It was much better than expected, and you have found a dedicated reader in me! I look forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: questofdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ This is such an awesome story...why did you stop writing? I'm sure you have your reasons, but just so you know (in case your 100+ reviews haven't told you so, haha) that your amazing story-telling is darned addicting XD so I hope that one of these days...you will come back and pick this story back up ^^
| Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:07 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Somnambulicoius (not logged in) On: March 15, 2005 17:49 EST
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Ahh, me again. *sheepish grin* I just realized that I was incorrect about the whole "notch/nock" thing; either is appropriate. Just thought I'd clear that up and apologize. Sorry.
| Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (not signed in) On: March 15, 2005 03:58 EST
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Ah, I had forgotten how much I enjoyed this fic! It was one of the first IY fanfics I ever read, and in the year or so since I first read it, my tastes have grown more discriminating, but you still manage to impress the hell out of me. The humor, the fight scenes, the lemons, the dialogue, the angst...everything is just spot on. I picked up on a grammatical or spelling error here and there, and just a couple of other errors (a person doesn't "notch" an arrow, she "nocks" it,) but all in all, your fic is a shining example of what fanfiction should be like. Looking back over it, I can see exactly how much your story has influenced my own, even to the point that I've apparently (and unintentionally) borrowed a few phrases here and there. *sheepish grin* I guess I'll have to go fix that. Anyway, I understand that you've got some real-world problems that keep you from updating, and I wish you the best of luck with that. However, even if you never updated again (which I sincerely hope doesn't happen,) this would still be one of the best IY fanfics ever written. For making me laugh out loud, I thank you. :)
| Reviewed By: Spikerix On: March 04, 2005 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story this is, it took me a couple of days but once I began I couldn't stop reading! It's too bad about your hand that you couldn't write anymore, but that was a year ago, are you still hurting? Or you're not planning on updating anytime soon? Because if that's the case then you should do as many authors that dropped their stories, they put "no longer updated" on their fic status or better, beside the story's title. That would save a lot of reading time to the people who don't want to wait indefinitely for seeing a plot developed and finished, like me. At least that would show a little respect and consideration to the ones that ARE waiting, don't you think? Anyway, I will say what all hundred and plus reviews are, hope not futily, asking: PLEASE UPDATE!!! Kisses from Argentina
| Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 09:48 EST
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UPDATE
| Reviewed By: leysha On: November 24, 2004 11:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this fic. it has everything that i love. i hope you are going to update real soon cause i've been waiting for the update since like may.
| Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really beautiful fanfic. i love that you have two stories in one. and most of all i love that it is a kagome and Sesshomaru fanfiction. please can you write some more i know it is hard to wirte this stroy because it's to in one but i would really like it if you could. this is a very kawaii story. Domo arigato
| Reviewed By: FeFe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 16:20 EST
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This is and always will be one of my favorite Kagome/Seshomaru fanfics. Whenever, and if ever, you feel like adding another chapter, you will always have people eager to read it.
| Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 14, 2004 15:50 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: jc On: September 13, 2004 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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update update please?!! *does puppy face* people run away... err maybe not... well, i believe it has a promising plot and the senarios the future kagome and sesshoumaru have are soo funny! so please please, pretty please with sugar on top update a nice longggg chapter?
| Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: Holy Cat On: August 16, 2004 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pokes you* Update! Update!!! *Hits over Head* UPDATE!!!!!!!! I really like your story so please! Update! Don't make me have to get violent! Update!!!
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