| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Heninu On: November 10, 2003 17:40 EST
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Ack I am getting deprived. Please update update update.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: karenebl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've spent two days thinking about why I like this fic. Yes, yes the sex is great (did I say that?) but I am really starting to care about these characters. Also the construction is neat. I loved the call back at the end of this chapter to the first scene. I liked the sniffing reference to the end of the previous chapter. I am curious to see how you bring the two timelines together and look forward to more chapters. Karen in CT
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Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I nearly died laughing half way through the chapter. Only by a sheer force of will did I manage to stay alive long enough to finish reading the chapter and write this review. I so LOVE this fic, and it does NOT suck, no matter what anyone else tells you. In fact, point them out and I'll hurt them for saying something as braindead stupid as that. Well, not really. Not quite sure what I would do to someone over the internet. All well. Great chapter, as always, though I did still spot a few grammar and spelling mistakes, and there were a few things that could have been worded differently to make the chapter flow better. If you would like some help with it, just email me @ crash_and_burn48654@yahoo.com Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash, a.k.a. Black Raven of Death
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: {::dancing around her stage::} Yay! She updated! Yay! Silver Fox: Oh no. Here she goes. For the love of God, don't do the- {::SF breaks into a happy dance/Funky Chicken crossover::} {::shakes his head and walks offstage::} SF: I'm so happy! I've waited all summer for this chapter! {::dance gets out of hand::} Silver Fox: {::he and Sesshou grab SF and drag her offstage::} Please update soon! I don't believe she'll stop unless you do!
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Reviewed By: lady_Midnight On: November 04, 2003 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this story. I first started reading it and forgot to write the name down, so several months later I'm still thinking about it. Low and behold I find it, I really can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry, but take all the time you need to make it as wonderful as the first chapters.
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Reviewed By: The Wereleopard On: November 04, 2003 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO! Mooooooooooore!!!! Must... have... more... Sesshou.... and... Jaken the Wonder Toad....... The Wereleopard
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Reviewed By: Draco13 On: November 04, 2003 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... damn.... I think I could say much more for this chapter. I stayed up an hour and a half last night in order to read it when I found out that you updated. I think I really should have taken my time, since it was a long chapter and I don't get much of this fic so often... but damn, I couldn't stop. 0.0; *bows* You. Are. Amazing. No, no, wrong word... You rock. And hell, I think I woke the neighborhood up when I was laughing at the whole Hojo/Sesshou scene. ^_^ It's great... I was a bit disappointed knowing that the next chapter (this one) would be in the present time. I was more interested to know what happens in the past, since you left the other chapter off that way. *sob* I'm still clawing at the screen anxiously for that chapter, but I've been satisfied... so far. I will make any sacrifice possible for you to get the next chapter up in the next week... but that'd be impossible, so at least I'm going to hope and cry at your feet and beg on my knees (which isn't done often) for you not to take 4 months. *cries* I've been patient... I've been following the story for ahwile... I've reread it several times... The torture of waiting every painful second, hoping for that chapter.... alright, I'm not that pathetic. ^-^ Well, hope to hear from you sooner, at least, but I love your long lovely chunks of chapters every time! Hell, if you even most 1/5 of that chapter at a time every week, I'd love you ever more, but it's still very satisfying at the end!! ^^ Um... Is this review pointless and long? I hope not!! -Hiding behind the shadows, a loyal fan, and obsessed about reading more and more of TMWI ^^ _D Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 12:18 EST
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I had to read this from start to finish...not that I had forgotten what this was about, I just wanted to make sure I didn't come across any references to things that had slipped my mind. Nice work *thumbs up* I loved every part with Hojo, and each interaction between Hojo and Sesshou. I'm happy to see that evil has snuck back into the picture, as well as into Hojo's body *laughs*
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Title: Can this story possibly get any better?
Reviewed By: Blue Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think so. I loved it. The humor and witty banter make it so enjoyable. I was laughing so hard at Hojo's hyperness (because I could somehow imagine Hojo getting high on caffiene), my roomate walked in and stared at me as if I had grown a second head! Anyway, I really hope to read the next installment soon...I can't wait to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: heninu On: November 04, 2003 03:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That would have to be my absulut fav. inu fic. I am soooooooo hopeing you will update soon. It was soo good. I so want to know want going to happen next. I luv it soo much.
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Reviewed By: iram (wackoramaco87) On: November 03, 2003 19:24 EST
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this story keeps getting better and better! and the future shesshie is SO funny! lol! i was LMAO!!!! hehe! plz plz plz tell me you wont' take a MONTH to update... pretty plz?
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 14:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics!! Love the humor, love the plot, love that you finally updated!!! (Oh, and love the lemon, too...) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 11:05 EST
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Okay, tried to sign in, but it wouldn't let me. *kicks computer* Anyway...*deep breath* This was sooo much more fun with ALL of the parts included! I bruised a rib with the whole 'Houjou irritating Sesshou to demonstrate lack of facial expression' scene. Oh. That's right; I already bruised a rib. *shrugs* Well, I rebruised it. Did you spice up Kagome's dream from when I saw it first? Because it seemed steamier (and therefore more enjoyable) this time around. *drools* And nice touch with Naraku. *shudders* Yes, definitely as creepy as promised! I'm ecstatic to see that you decided to post two versions instead of editing out all of the sexy, dangerous Sess parts. *snickers* Still love the whole self-gratification bit. Shows his humanity--er, susceptibility to sexual frustration, just like the rest of us! *squeals in delight* And I can't wait for more---and humbly offer my miniscule proofing skills anytime!
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: November 03, 2003 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON. I LIKE THE STORY BUT TO BE HONEST I HAD FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS STORY . SOME ADVICE: TRY NOT TO TAKE TOO LONG TO POST CHAPTERS OR READERS TEND TO LOSE INTEREST AND TRY NOT TO MAKE IT TO HAVE TOO MANY CHAPTERS READERS GET BORED WITH IT . BUT SO FAR ,I LIKE THE STORY . IS CRAZY CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER .
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Reviewed By: miau On: November 03, 2003 10:42 EST
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Finally, the new chapteR!!!!! Next sooner, neh?!!!!!!
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