| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: caliko(not signed in) On: November 03, 2003 10:22 EST
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YAYYYY!!! I've been waiting for SOOO LOOONNGGG!!! YIPPEEEE! ^_^ THIS was good! I LOVED the Seshy/Kagome interaction, esp. once he realized the 'dream' was something else! LOL.. I'm enjoying this! ~Caliko
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Title: Amethyst
Reviewed By: Amethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 19:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
interesting
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: October 10, 2003 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update? I read your biopage. Yes, I was that bored, and still am. lol. When are you updating that? Please, update this. Everyone I know is waiting (impatiently, I might add) for it.
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Title: More!
Reviewed By: 8Artemis8 On: October 05, 2003 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write more! This is like the third time I have re-read all the chapters! Not many people can write Sess/Kag pairings, but you are doing an excellent job! Also, you are doing a perfect, and I mean, absolutely perfect job with Jaken and Rin! I laugh so hard, uh, you must write more!
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Title: "This Mess We're In"
Reviewed By: Hakari Von On: October 02, 2003 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am having so much fun reading this fic! I love the Sess/Kag pairing and think you've come up with a really interesting hook. I'm dying to find out about Sesshou and Kagome in the future. I just found this fic the other night and stayed up until after one in the morning reading it (not a good thing when you have to be at work by seven in the morning). It was wonderfully written. I also wanted to compliment you on your grammar and spelling. So many authors don't take the time to check those things before they post and it makes fics very difficult to read. Even on a chapter as long as the one you just finished, it was an easy read! Keep up the good work! I hope you post the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (ish too lazy too log in) On: October 02, 2003 15:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
Uh oh. They must be heading toward Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 09:51 EDT
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Oh, good heavens. I have been following this story or so long, and I can't wait for the next chapter. *whines* I've been so patient, too! Please, please, reward this good little puppy with a treat! *ahem* Sorry about that. I keep rereading this, though. I can't get over how enjoyable it is. But I've starting to get itchy for the next chapter, so, *makes 'come' motions with hands* anytime now, okay? Anytime. Please. *big Shippou eyes* Please?
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Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I really like this fic. That was really sweet of Jaken at the end. Also, when will Kagome ever remember about the past?
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 13:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! awesome story so far! i'm so glad your not making shessy and kagome fall in love really quick! i also like the fact that you didn't make kag a complete heroine in distress! lol!!! but i do have one question... will you have a happy ending for this story?
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 27, 2003 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
q()p where's my new chapter? I thought you posted another chappie up? Wah... nothing's here! Update! Quick! Hurry! Pronto! Immediately! RIGHT NOW! pretty please?
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: September 25, 2003 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story , it;s diferent than others. please update soon!! it's been a while!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FanFic Addict On: September 07, 2003 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the whole story and I really hope that you haven't stopped writing it! I love this story! So PLEASE, PLEASE continue!
FanFic addict,
K.T. |
Reviewed By: Katt On: July 28, 2003 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the way this story is written. It's so funny! I am also a fan of Sess/Kag fics so this story is perfect for me. I can't wait to read what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 23, 2003 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please write more update |
Reviewed By: Raven39 On: July 21, 2003 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is a good fic. Here is the line that I about rolled out of the chair laughing so hard:
"He probably had always been like this, she thought, oblivious to his anger. In her mind's eye, she saw a tiny Sesshoumaru rise from his bassinette, pluck a soother from his mouth, and coolly state, `This plaything bores me. Remove it from my presence.'"
What a visual!
Keep up the good work.
Raven39 |
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