| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 20:20 EST
Comment/Review:
Ergh. I happen to know girls like that vapid twit... Poor Sesshou, being molested by her. Let Kagome make it all better! Great chappy, can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: ericedwyn On: February 11, 2003 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetings,
You've captured my attention, and I certainly hope you continue. I really want to know where you are going with your story. |
Reviewed By: seshoumaru lover On: February 16, 2003 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE PERFECT SET UP FOR A LEMON!!!!!!!
I JUST HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE PLEEEEEASE!!!!!!!
p.s
who is the miko in the south is it kikyo?
(is that how you spell her name?) |
Reviewed By: Hekate On: February 14, 2003 15:29 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic. You have excellent vocab and a great assortment of writing techniques. I always try to give helful criticism with my reviews but you're too good! Keep writing I love your story. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 08, 2003 07:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOH!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE THE FIC!!!!!!!!!
I AM A BIIIIIG SUCKER FOR SESS/KAG FICS!!!
PLEASE POST SOOOOON!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:43 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh! Great start! I can't wait to read more, it's a great take on the Kag/Sess pairing! |
Reviewed By: Chick On: February 07, 2003 23:08 EST
Comment/Review:
This story is good and different!update soon!! |
Reviewed By: kang_lin On: June 03, 2003 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soo good. You really need to write more! It wery interesting and I love it. please write more? pretty please? () ()
(^.^) |
Reviewed By: little miss crazy On: July 15, 2003 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! dis is so good! i luv it! u hafta continue it! iz realli realli good! pls hurry! ill be waitin for tha next chapters! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: wretched1 On: February 09, 2003 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool story. Ialways thought sess and kag should be toghether they'd make such a nice couple.
any way, I really like your story so hurry up and get the next chapter posted. |
Reviewed By: kh#1 On: February 19, 2003 17:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is really obssesivefangirl but i kinda for got my pass word.....anyways i love your new chapter ope u get the next one up soon!^_^
Ja Ne!
p.s....that kissing sceen....HOT...hope u make another one your really good at them!^_^ |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:04 EST
Comment/Review:
SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME ARE THE BEST AT YA KNOW WHAT *COUGH COUGH* I MEAN YEAH SESSY AND KAG KEEP THEM COMMING ~~KISS KISS~~ |
Reviewed By: Sonomi On: February 07, 2003 13:30 EST
Comment/Review:
And I don't know! I wanna find out! Does that mean Sesshi is reborn in Kagome's Time? WOW!! Write more, please? |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 20, 2003 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the best sessy/ kag fic on this site and i love what you are doing with this.
I want you to write more im becoming a die hard fan of your stuff now lol..
This was a great chapter btw.. chapter 8 ..
LOL hojo and sessy freinds lol
claudia |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i like read this on a different site and now its just driveing me crazy!!!!.......i really need to know what happens!!!!!!!im began you please please PLEASE!!update soon!!!^_^
ja ne |
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