| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Creature of Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2012 10:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright I realize it's been an extreme amount of time since you've updated this, and even logged onto this site, but I am still daring to hope you are going to finish it someday. I only read completed fics and I have no idea how I opened this one and didn't notice it wasn't, derp moment on my part, but I am willing to submit to bribery to get more chapters. I have no idea what I could do in exchange, but I'm offering nonetheless. I will even beg if it will help. |
Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 10:25 EDT
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I read your story a looong time ago and just came across it again--once I remembered which one it was, I had to reread. ^_^ This ranks with some of the most enjoyable fics I've ever read, and I wish I thought you were still planning to update, but I'm not optimistic enough for that I guess. /sob. Now we'll never know what happened! Anyway, just wanted to shoot a line out to let you know that your story is still greatly appreciated! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good. i think u are really talented. it was a twist kade found them. and even bigger one when inu finally realized something was going on between them. he's soo clueless~ Italics hope you update soon! ItalicsT.B.A
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: remilia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's been a while when I first read this story. I never really forgotten it and when I ran across it on someone's favorite, I couldn't resist reading it again. It's been a while since you've updated, but that's perfectly okay. I'm honestly be extremely content to know thta this fic isn't abandoned.. because.. WOW. Friggin' amazing, this story is. I LOVE your sense of humor! I couldn't believe how many time I've snorted or laughed out loud. Your characterizations are AWESOME. I adore it. I don't think I can read any other story because I'll be comparing this incredible fic to it too often! Your Sesshoumaru? Bah, no one has written him as well! I thank you deeply for writing this and I imagine this chapter (The Sin) must have been very difficult to write. I applaud with how it came out! All that violence, passion and rawness intertwined in one! Nice. I dropped the IY Fanfiction fandom for a while but I imagine that after reading it, I'll be looking for more fanfiction of similiar nature to yours. I'm hooked, just as I was when I first read it. You've neglected none of your characters. We got to see into each of their thoughts. You've handled their interactions masterfully and I just melt at the scenes between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Long review, sorry. BUT I love the originality here. I can see this double timeline scenario working in my head and I'm rather excited to see what happens next. Very creative. K, I'm done. I sorry :( -remy p.s. omg i dont think what happened between Sess and Kag in this chapter should be classified as a lemon because it seems like so much more than that :O omgomg you can write damnwell p.p.s probably strewn with many spelling errors but i just want to review and i feel stupid now
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: sesshyluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is aboslutley amazing! I love everything about it! I didn't stop reading until I HAD to go to bed.... TT.TT I adore it. The flow of everything, and the comedy is all so... well put together. Plus the way the future and the past meshes so well, that there wasn't one point wher eI was confused. COMPLETLEY AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I enjoy reading this story over and over again, however I was wondering if you would updae. it's been 3 years since the last update. i hope that you do update soon i know how busy life can get. wel i'll talk to you later. hope that i see you soon.
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Reviewed By: Shadowdestiney_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 05:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i love your writing style its completely hilariose(sorry I cant spell)but it never takes away from the storey and jumping back and forth between presnt and past makes it more interesting so you cant get bored hope you update soon!! its really hard to find a fanfiction thats original and well written and its easy to keep up with 2 anyway i love and again update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 23:42 EST
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I've been following your story for over one year now. I'm still waiting for you to continue this wonderfully written story. Please update soon and I'll do the same...
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Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, I have truly enjoyed this story and I hope that you haven't given up on finishing it! I know it's been nearly a year since it was last updated and I hope that in all this time another great chapter is being typed up and that soon it will be posted in an update. This is a very well written and not once was I confused in the shifts of time. Which some stories tend to do. I love the humor (which while reading several chapters last night, I nearly woke my husband trying not to bust a gut from my laughs! lol). I hated to see that I was getting close the final chapter posted and I kept taking my time reading because I knew it wasn't finished yet. So I hope that sometime soon another great chapter will be posted! Excellent work!!!
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Title: sessy love
Reviewed By: claudia g ( clawdia) On: September 29, 2005 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bloody hell this is great. I see you are writing other fics and it has been over a year since you updated this one. I been following it since day one. PLEASE update this. I find it one of the best i ever read. clawdia
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Title: So depresssed
Reviewed By: (himeg) On: September 24, 2005 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutley perfect I love it. I am just going to have to get over it though. You did not update very frequently in the past and since it has almost been two years since you last updated I am not really expection another chapter to come along. However that does not mean that you do not deserve praise for you excellent work. ***** FIve stars of course.
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Title: Ch 1 - 11
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 21:20 EDT
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it's about time for another chapter, me thinks. I laughed so hard at the way you phrase things. I like you ^_^ please write more!
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Title: abheff
Reviewed By: abheff29 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 03:27 EDT
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I really like this fic!!! I like the back and forth thing and surprisingly enough I can keep up with it. Keep up the great work!! By the way, I love the humor in your fic, can't wait until you update again.
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:17 EDT
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That is the funniest chapter I have read in a long time. So LOL! I loved the bit when Sesshoumaru is stomping all over Inuyasha! That was SO funny! And the stuff with Rin and Jaken! Love it!!!
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