| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: amandajune123
Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 08:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Best story all year! Best Story Ever! please update soon amandajune45@aol.com
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Title: "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 04, 2004 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cruel.even foe him.oh i would go find someone anyone but him after that.i mean i need a shower now but after i would go.lmfao...man please update soon.this shit is great...maria
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Reviewed By: Anonymous105 On: September 30, 2004 00:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! My god, it's one of the best I've ever read! Keep up the good work! Um... I'm assuming that you'll work on it more? Cuz the 'status' bit claims that it's finished! Oh no! tell me that's not true!!
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Title: Hentai-palooza!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 11:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Goodness gracious that was rewarding! You do have a way with lemons--graphic, yet very personal as well. These are real people, not just bodies. Excellent and I can't wait to see more.
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 27, 2004 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need a shower myself..lol when are you going to put them together..i want to read some ACTION soon...lol update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 09:17 PDT
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OMG. I've got goosebumps. You are writing the best hot-damn B/V lemons in the world. These are so purely sexy, so very untainted by romance! I mean that in the best way! I've read so many B/Vs I didn't think they would give me shudders anymore...but geez, Tempest! I got a parched throat panting through that! *goes off to get a glass of water*
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 05:27 PDT
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OHHH this is wonderful! **is at a loss for anything better to say at the moment**
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again! ALl hail the Queen of the B/V lemon! reat job.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 11:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable. I hope to see more from Vegeta's POV.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: September 18, 2004 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! uddate soon!
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Reviewed By: lelia On: September 16, 2004 02:58 PDT
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i like vegeta.vegeta good. more vegeta. vegeta better when having sex. i want a better vegeta
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: September 15, 2004 19:53 PDT
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ooooooooooooooooh! me like! Bulma's POV! And her power trip over the prince! I like the effect progesterone has on you! This is for sure going to be one steamy fic!!
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 18:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more i want more..please.maria
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Reviewed By: pol vchj On: September 15, 2004 15:25 PDT
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I hope this isn't the end.
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Reviewed By: starslight On: September 15, 2004 14:51 PDT
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Wow, frist chapter and you already have me hooked. So is this story going to be based on Bulma's point of view? Or is there vegeta's too?
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