| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 09, 2004 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.......just update....maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG. You've done it. You've won the all-time lemon crown. This is a story about power, not just about sex. It's simplified the B/V get-together into a pure contest. In a way, that's what DBZ was so much about--competition and subjugation. Of course that's not the whole story, but here, we have a pure hot dynamic between two extremely powerful people, and that's the B/V relationship at its core--or what it had to have been at the very start. I still believe in Mirai's line "My father was lonely" and in a more vulnerable Vegeta, but geez Louise do I love spending time with YOUR Vegeta!!!!!!
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: intelXx On: October 05, 2004 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just WOW! This is great. You write Vegeta's personality very well. I mean, come on, he was the Dark Prince, destroyer of whole civilizations. I was getting tired of the softly-portraited Vegeta that other author's keep making him. Yuck! Honestly, you bring Vegeta to live. Bring me more, I want more.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 13:53 PDT
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You've ruined me for the day! My husband won't be home for HOURS! You make hentai an art, really. And this is serious stuff, my eyeballs are burned! Now, how will Bulma tease Vegeta beyond this wall he's erected (no pun intended, natch!)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 08:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And it ain't over!! I love how this story is more than a pure hentai fest where you can stick in any characters and still make it work. This story is so OBVIOUSLY Bulma and Vegeta. Vegeta was so himself in this third chapter. And we have a real tension that's more than sexual....and.... oh dammit, this is the sexiest story I've ever read.
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Title: amandajune123
Reviewed By: June16458 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 08:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Best story all year! Best Story Ever! please update soon amandajune45@aol.com
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Title: "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 04, 2004 05:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cruel.even foe him.oh i would go find someone anyone but him after that.i mean i need a shower now but after i would go.lmfao...man please update soon.this shit is great...maria
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Reviewed By: Anonymous105 On: September 30, 2004 00:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! My god, it's one of the best I've ever read! Keep up the good work! Um... I'm assuming that you'll work on it more? Cuz the 'status' bit claims that it's finished! Oh no! tell me that's not true!!
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Title: Hentai-palooza!
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 11:03 PDT
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Goodness gracious that was rewarding! You do have a way with lemons--graphic, yet very personal as well. These are real people, not just bodies. Excellent and I can't wait to see more.
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 27, 2004 11:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need a shower myself..lol when are you going to put them together..i want to read some ACTION soon...lol update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 09:17 PDT
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OMG. I've got goosebumps. You are writing the best hot-damn B/V lemons in the world. These are so purely sexy, so very untainted by romance! I mean that in the best way! I've read so many B/Vs I didn't think they would give me shudders anymore...but geez, Tempest! I got a parched throat panting through that! *goes off to get a glass of water*
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 05:27 PDT
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OHHH this is wonderful! **is at a loss for anything better to say at the moment**
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again! ALl hail the Queen of the B/V lemon! reat job.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 11:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable. I hope to see more from Vegeta's POV.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: September 18, 2004 09:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great! uddate soon!
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