| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: lelia On: September 16, 2004 02:58 PDT
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i like vegeta.vegeta good. more vegeta. vegeta better when having sex. i want a better vegeta
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: September 15, 2004 19:53 PDT
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ooooooooooooooooh! me like! Bulma's POV! And her power trip over the prince! I like the effect progesterone has on you! This is for sure going to be one steamy fic!!
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Title: Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 18:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more i want more..please.maria
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Reviewed By: pol vchj On: September 15, 2004 15:25 PDT
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I hope this isn't the end.
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Reviewed By: starslight On: September 15, 2004 14:51 PDT
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Wow, frist chapter and you already have me hooked. So is this story going to be based on Bulma's point of view? Or is there vegeta's too?
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