| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: January 11, 2006 19:44 PST
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now that was awesome... You did a beautiful job... All I can say is Wow!!!!
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Title: Sinfully Delicious
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: January 11, 2006 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely incredible. I am so happy that you updated this fic. I've been hoping for it to be updated for the longest time. It just couldn't be left with the couple at odds with each other. And this chapter was so perfectly done. hmm.. The ultimate sexiness of Vegeta, and his possessiveness. It's so sinfully delicious. "You're mine," he whispers. "Yes. I am yours" Stunning. I can't wait to see what you will write next. Thank you! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: Hot and Sexy!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 17:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I'm so glad you finished it. I think you did an excellent job showing both points of view, and kept true to their characters. I found myself holding my breath at times, and smiling wickedly at others. "Heaven isn't white, fluffy clouds and pink cherry blossoms blowing in the breeze. Its lips and teeth. Wet kisses and hot breath." Yes, Yes, Yes! Oops, I mean I couldn't agree more. And that whole "You are MINE" thing makes my heart flutter every time... so deliciously possessive! What an ending. I think I'll go read it again. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl (not logged in!) On: December 04, 2005 18:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This the BEST B/V story out here! I feel Bulma's determination and her pain... I understand her not allowing her self to let go with Vegeta, but he is to the point to pleading with her. That line you used, '...what I gave you only a fraction of my power...' that was truly deep and sexy! Hell, I would have said yet! Please update soon! Your fans are waiting...
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
Reviewed By: pooka =) On: November 26, 2005 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AIYAHH! TemptingTemptation! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE MASTER OF DESIRE! I think I'm going to die if you don't, MORE FREQUENT UPDATES! I've been waiting almost forever for you to update, btw I'm loving your other stories =) BUT UPDATE THIS ONE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! *gets on her knees & pouts*
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Title: I neeeddd more....
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 00:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TemptingTemptation....*cough...hack...gasp* Need to read...more of this story...*pant...cough* Can't live without an update....*wheeze...spasm...hack* Please....please...UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!!!!! ^__^ I loved this one, but then again I love all your stories but this one, you simply HAVE to update, I'm dying here, like a hentai junkie....Surviving only with your masterful work!!! Can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Riven Liether [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god. Most tantalizing fic ever. PLEASE continue, or I might go crazy, lol.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 10:46 PDT
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*smirks*
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Reviewed By: Maru-san On: August 14, 2005 11:56 PDT
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PLEASE update this fic. You don't know what you're doing to us!! I like how you portray both Bulma and Vegeta and the story itself is just ... HOT ;) Anyway, please don't make us wait much longer ^_^
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: chica-chan On: August 02, 2005 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this!!! plz write some more, this story is my new addiction aside from Vegie. Gosh i just want to eat him like pie...im so fat..anyways you rock!! peace out-chica
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Title: atu
Reviewed By: atiqa On: July 16, 2005 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my GOD! its the coolest fic. its so sweet i love it. please finish it soon im dying for the next chapter. keep on writing like that and good-luck.
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: Kichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 14:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is excellent! I hope this is not the last chapter?
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Title: ch 3
Reviewed By: Kichisama On: July 03, 2005 13:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! that's awesome to see Vegeta put her in her place! you go boy!
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Title: sorri
Reviewed By: SYSAIYAN On: June 29, 2005 13:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I MEAN UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!
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Title: OH COME ON
Reviewed By: sysaiyan On: June 29, 2005 13:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
REVIW ALREADY
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