| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: tammyzora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 00:36 PST
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Font Red"...let me show you what heaven looks like to mortal eyes." WOW!! What a great line! My mouth dropped. You continue to amaze me.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 09:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I mean WOW!!! This fic is fantastic; utterly stunning. I'm glad I found this fic, and you've just found yourself a loyal fan. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: J On: March 12, 2005 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yessss!
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Title: ssssssppplaaaasshhhh.....
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 04:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear gods! is it sizzling hot in here, or is it just me?!?! You are one talented writer, I am officially addicted and I need my medication: another update!!!!! Need update...cough...gotta have my updaattee...cough, gasp choke.... Awesome chapter!!! I loved it, it was so trilling, and erotic, I'm still panting! I love this story!!!! Oh yeah, congrats on the baby!!!!!!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 01:10 PST
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You have to stop this you know!! *Cries* Here I am, a dyed-in-the-wool Bardock lover, thinking myself impervious to the charms of other Saiyans - and you keep making me think improper thoughts about Vegeta!! Now, I'm not averse to casting my net wider occasionally, but only as far as Turles and Goku - at least I could pretend they were Bardock if the lights were dim enough! But nooooo - you and your stories go and stir the ghost of my Vegeta lust... :( Gotta hand it to you though... ain't no one can do sexual tension like you can! *applauds*
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:54 PST
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I don't see how you can do it. The sexual tension doesn't QUIT in this story! No pressure but simply dyyyyyyying for more here. I liked the glimpse of Vegeta knowing how one rumor would mean death on Frieza's ship, how he understood the importance of keeping up appearances! Is the guy starting to think outside himself? Is he?
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Title: "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 18:21 PST
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wow yes wow yes wow yes loved it loved it loved it...more more more more more...... update soon please....maria
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 10, 2005 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhh! smokey!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Iceblueangel On: March 08, 2005 12:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best fic i have ever read! Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: bvgirl On: February 12, 2005 21:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I love how you put together Vegetas character and Blumas too. The plot is great and you got to love those master slave fics. But yours has got to be the best I have ever read. Update soon so I can see if Bulma obeys Vegeta and comes home or is there another lesson in store. LOl :) Keep update your other stories as well. I a huge fan. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story out there. plz hurry up and update soon. :)
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Title: how good u are
Reviewed By: j On: January 21, 2005 15:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was like one of the best Vegeta and Bulma fanfictions that i have read its really good. Keep upp the good work.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 22:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: yeah! On: January 12, 2005 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has got to be the hottest, juciest, most scrumptious VB fanfic i've EVER read! damn. hope u update real soon cuz im about to Xplode here! I just had to give u 10 outa 10 for it
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 06:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I'm really starting to get annoyed with Bulma. Geez, what more does she want? He asked nicely... OK, she's stronger than I could ever be! Great chapter!
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