| "Master of Desire, Slave to Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: March 22, 2006 22:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's gotta be one of the BEST V/B stories i've EVER read, no joke. man, u're the SHIT! that was a really good one. Wow...
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: March 22, 2006 22:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's gotta be one of the BEST V/B stories i've EVER read, no joke. man, u're the SHIT! that was a really good one. Wow...
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 08, 2006 15:24 PST
Comment/Review:
Maybe you should do a sequel,to show how much of Vegeta's influence has changed Bulma for the better.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:02 PST
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What a great ending! They understood each other so well, it was so harmonious. Thanks for finishing this one--it was definitely worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 28, 2006 00:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic =) a sequel would be interesting ~.^
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Reviewed By: pisq On: January 18, 2006 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness Gracious! Talk about intense! Congratulations! That was the perfect ending to that story!
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Reviewed By: EleneK *Not Logged in* On: January 14, 2006 22:51 PST
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I just finished reading the whole thing so I'll make this short. Holy Cow!!! I'm going to take a cold shower now.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:49 PST
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*opens mouth to speak - but nothing comes out* ... ... ... *vague arm gestures and hand waving to try and convey what she means* ... ... ... *moans* ohhhhhhhhmyyyyGohhhhhd *Snags Bardock to act out fic*
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Reviewed By: br0keback On: January 14, 2006 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a wonderful way to end this story!!! god im such a sucker for romantic displays of affection!! he held her hand!! how sweet!! great story!!! and yay! it is completed!! great job!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 03:48 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
totally hot, yet again!!!
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so beautiful...in a strange kind of distorted way that is so beautiful.
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Reviewed By: sysaiayn On: January 12, 2006 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i written a review before asking you to update and im wondering when are you i mean you cant jus end it at chapter seven when bulma left go to a certain someone so please update soon please
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: in limbo On: January 12, 2006 10:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best. I am amazed at how great of a writer of erotica you are. I was also anxious for an ending to this story; however, the wait was worth it. Every word you chose was perfect to give the meaning of the situation. Successfully you have created a masterpiece of wording and sensual-not to mention sexual-pleasure. A delicious story. Congratulations.
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Title: ABOUT TIME
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: January 12, 2006 08:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Finally, some deliciousness from you! I nearly scream every time I see that you have updated any of your VB stories! Please, write some more of anything! That was freaking excellent!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: January 12, 2006 07:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another outstanding piece of work. Possesive and wickedly decadent. You amaze me each time you write something new or update any of your wonderful stories. Not to mention you are the ultimate fangoddess of the lemons...*chuckles*
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