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 Reviewed By: JasperK  On: October 23, 2018 03:56 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful journey. I read this years back when still incomplete and the tale haunted me in the gentle manner the scent of summer does - recalling long forgotten memories. You allowed me (through this tale) to recall a time lost, but perhaps to be regained. I thank you. The tale was ponderous and full of troubled yet worthwhile growth. It is fun, alarming, sad yet entertaining. Thank you for sharing.
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 15, 2018 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Wow, 13 years? Well I've been here every step of the way. I can't remember if came across The Lucky Ones after it was already finished or if you were still working on it, but I distinctly remember when you first started posting this sequel. I was so excited! And it didn't disappoint. It's been a fabulous adventure, and I'm so glad that despite everything real life must have been throwing at you, you saw it through to the end. :-)
 Title: Love this
Reviewed By: lublubdub  On: August 07, 2018 09:58 PDT
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I still enjoy your stories, and refuse to give them up. Hopefully after this dream, Yukio will be able to move on from such a hateful mate. Miaka was not worthy of him.
 Title: The Coyote Child
Reviewed By: A Friend  On: November 13, 2016 09:10 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love this continuation, I would love to know what happens! Please update. I hope you find the inspiration you need to finish this amazing story.... good luck!!
 Title: Late night/ early morning
Reviewed By: BrokenHand  On: June 10, 2016 00:21 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not going to lie this chapter was better written then the last chapters of this fix, in that it sucked me in and made me hold on until the end. Miaka's perspective was a good choice and I really enjoyed learning about Yukio's mate. Now, do I hate Miaka's? Yes. Do I understand what she did and why she did it? Yes. She said it herself she mated with Yukio way too young when her head was filled with the greatness and beauty of marrying a demon. She was young and she made a mistake that very much could not be corrected easily. I will never like her because of how she treated Yukio and met his love with such hate. Should Yukio have taken her out of Japan? I honestly couldn't tell you. Going behind her back was wrong, dying with her (he would have never left her) would also be wrong. I'm just happy/hoping that Yukio will attempt to move on. The little stinker deserves happiness and someone would will love him for who he is.
 Reviewed By: Silver.film26  On: February 16, 2016 06:56 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yet again your story has brought me to tears, however this time there's no way to get over it as you have not continued on. I hope that you will return soon! Please don't leave for so long again I really wanna see Yukio happy!
 Reviewed By: Hotaru83  On: December 28, 2015 23:47 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! I hope that Yukio will find happiness.
 Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: kmitchell  On: November 15, 2015 20:01 PST
Comment/Review:
Update please!!!! Really would like to see how this ends!
 Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2015 21:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!! You're back! It was really interesting to see Yukio's life with Miaka. I still don't like her but I do feel sorry for her.
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 21, 2015 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your author's note just about said it all. "OMG! A new chapter." LOL. I was soooooooooooooooo glad to see you update this! Took me longer than I'd have liked to put aside the time to actually read it, but it's been in my bookmarks. Damn, girl. You got me tearing up over here. That was really, really well done, and really touching, and not expected, but truly fabulous. I'm really glad that happened because it sounds like something that needed to happen, and maybe it really was that tea that did it, not that it was all a hallucination because I 100% believe it was real, but maybe the tea opened his spirit to allow it to happen. I'm trying to watch what I say so as not to give any spoilers to anyone who might read this before the chapter in question, LOL. Anyway, good job, and I'm looking forward to the next update. Hopefully it won't take you five years, ne? ;-)
 Reviewed By: Araian85  On: September 14, 2015 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for taking the reins of this story again! Please, please, don't leave us stranded again, pleaseeee. ("Sorrowful Puppy Eyes. Tm) Kudos for an excellent job separating Miaka's thoughts from Yukio's assessment of her actions during the flashbacks. Never did I miss the line of continuance. That being said I can see why Yukio has been so reserved in pursuing another relationship. Miaka did put him through hell. I'm sorry but this did nothing to ingratiate her, in fact, I hate this fiction character even more. She had what most of us spend a whole lifetime looking for: a faithful, committed, devoted and loving partner, and she choose death. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapters when you're ready to upload them. I'm very curious to see who's arriving in that helicopter (it would be awesome if it was a certain yokai, but he can fly) and I'm very very anxious to see what happens between Emma and Yukio.
 Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2015 00:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great to see that you're continuing this, and a fantastic new chapter. The first person perspective material is extremely intense. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
 Reviewed By: CJFlutterbye18  On: September 07, 2015 13:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
New chapters make me so very happy, and gave me an excuse to read the whole story again. I will wait for as long as it takes to read what happens next.
 Reviewed By: CoffeeGyrl  On: September 06, 2015 21:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I'm overjoyed to read a new chapter on this story. Thank you so much for not forgetting it, it was worth the wait. What a great chapter, now I need to reread it all again :)
 Reviewed By: ladybuns  On: September 06, 2015 19:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really and truly loathe Miaka. She doesn't deserve peace she should have gone to hell.
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