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Reviewed By: Thumos-flint On: November 24, 2004 14:56 PST
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HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!Eat,drink,and drink some more..Love your chapter...poor rin got highjacked once again,i swear she is going to be dramatized if not already.FLUFFY is BACk BABY!I can't wait until he starts kicking ass. I'm pretty safe to say Inuyasha is getting worse...and it has something to do with that weird powder he just had to touch...BAKA! I think that Demons influence on men has to do with the powder...Inuyasha hasn't really seen the demon so he has naughty dreams about the only girl he cares for...Kagome. Anyway enough babbling happy holidays.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (fully convinced that she's right about the powder) On: November 24, 2004 13:25 PST
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First thing: I am now absolutely *sure* Hisadaicho's funky powder is the cause of Inu-Yasha's dreams. Second thing: Yaaaay! Sessy! Hisadaicho ain't gonna know what hit her. Heh! Third thing: I'm gonna miss you over the Holidays, I can't wait to see what's coming!
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Title: WTF happened? MY review got screwed up. Oh well, more for you.
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (nsi) On: November 24, 2004 10:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo WOO!(
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Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (nsi) On: November 24, 2004 10:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo WOO!(
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: November 24, 2004 09:19 PST
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great addition to the story. glad to see Yash is handeling it a little better then he had been before....well....besides for the rabbit remark. bakayasha! anywho's, sesshy is now pissed off, not a good thing. great for writting, sucks for who gets the blunt end of his rage. great things written here, as always. have a great holiday and i look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate On: November 24, 2004 07:44 PST
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YUMMMM, sesshy in a cold, burning rage... some lovely Kagome/InuYasha moments here: him needing reassuring that it's 'only one pup,' and well, the end is cute even if it didn't end the way most of us would secretly (or not so secretly ^_^) prefer. If he'd gotten on the bed with her they'd've been "rutting by morning." ^_~ o 0 (not that she'd complain... but then again, who would?)
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: November 24, 2004 07:20 PST
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At least they are talking, and he seems to have accepted the idea - at least until he sees Miroku. LOL maybe Miroku should have a seal ready?
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Title: Happy Thanxgiving
Reviewed By: kalobagh@mediaminer.org On: November 24, 2004 06:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic. Happy Holidayz!!!!!
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Title: Ch13
Reviewed By: Flames101 On: November 24, 2004 06:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Can't wait for Monday!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 06:06 PST
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loved it.. can't wait to see what happens after the weekend.. till then have a happy thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: Nicky(ff.net is back to read only status.) On: November 24, 2004 05:21 PST
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Hmmm...where to begin?A rabbit?! well he was right about one thing, it would make less noise. Loved the little line where Inuyasha asked Kagome if it was just the one pup; as well as where he said he's still gotta beat up Miroku,cause it's the 'principle' of the matter. See Kagome he does care, he's just alittle stubborn sometimes. So he's still not gonna tell her where he went? Will he tell her about the dreams? Might be a good thing for her to know especially with him sleeping in her room. Might also be a good reason for her to hold onto those beads. Not that Inuyasha would intentionally hurt her but sometimes those urges can hard to fight.(not like I'd know.) So they took Rin. All I have to say is that they better be prepared for a serious butt-kicking. Anywhoo have a wonerful Thanksgiving week and enjoy the time with your family...we can survive till Monday (unless of course my sister annoys me to death before then.)
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Reviewed By: bloodykitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 04:34 PST
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*Out of frustration for a spoiled oppurtunity, goes on HALO and blows countless things (83 elites, 69 jackals, 47 Grunts, I counted, just so you could KNOW how annoyed I am) to smithereens* *Glares at author, murderous rage apparent* You are so CRUEL!!! *breaks down into tears*
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Lena17 On: November 23, 2004 19:51 PST
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Thiss one is full of more angst at thism oment then i have ever seen in your previous stories. it's very original though.I've never seen anyone pull the idea of Kagome bearing Miroku's child for Sango..lol. What made you think of it??
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Reviewed By: Silent Sky On: November 23, 2004 18:01 PST
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wow, you've been busy. i opened my email to discover 8 author alerts from you. wow. sadly, even though ff.net is working again, the review thing is not, so i'm back on mediaminer. oh well. well, great chappy. poor inu. i could almost FEEL his pain. and kag too. oh, the suffering. this makes me wonder, will kag's pregancy serve only to drive kag and inu apart, or will it bring them closer together? i think that, once that initial pain fades, and if they can make it through till the pup is born, then their bond will be even stronger. hmmm... miroku had better stay away for a while, if he values his life (or all his body parts. i imagine that inu will be in a maiming mood for the next little while.) you know, kag's mama just seems too perfect sometimes. does she ever make a mistake, like say the wrong thing even just once? she seems goddess-like in her ability to deal with people, especially inu's temper^^. well, i guess it's a good thing this time that she's so talented at calming people. she may be solely responsible for saving inu and kag's relationship. yay! praise to you, oh goddess of love, also known as mrs. higurashi. ~.^) great chapter! (and praise to you too, oh goddess of writing. lol) ~Sky
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (in disguise!) On: November 23, 2004 14:43 PST
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Well. Inu-Yasha handled it well, didn't he? (yay sarcasm) Saw that coming from a mile away. And ahhh! Medicine dropper insemination, brilliant, why didn't I think of it? You really do think of everything! Still warming up to the idea, though. Poor Inu-Yasha. All and all, dispite my reservations I think Kagome being a surrogate is a fine turn of the storyline. And oh hey, I've been thinking about that powder that Inu-Yasha got from Hisadaicho's cave and its corrolation to his naughty dreams about Kagome...and how his hormones seem to have been kicked into high gear...Could that powder have been some kind of aphrodesiac?
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