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Reviewed By: Leni_ba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 11:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ch1. *sniffles* I loved the scene with Sango beyond all that's reasonable. Hit a little too close home, I guess. The pacing there was excellent and so moving. Congrats!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayay!!! more more! Really good so far! Can't wait for more
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Title: Favor
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 08:24 PST
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Ut - Oh Kagome owes Inuyasha a favor. I hope he doesn't ask for anything stupid like Ramen. lol
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Title: t3h burninator
Reviewed By: code_wyze On: November 16, 2004 22:29 PST
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:O! Miroku ain't gonna knock Kagome up, is he?! Kagome would actually do it, but Miroku might have a breakdown, and Inu-kun would have a caniption fit and go full-blood mode and destory everything. Haha, I'm reading this because I came to mediaminer because of a lemon chapter in Chronicls somewhere back in the late 70s/early 80s. Interesting where trails lead, ne?
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (not logged in, because people are conspiring to take over my computer through Mediaminer and kill me! Just kidding!) On: November 16, 2004 19:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this a Miro/San/Kag fic? Cuz i read one of those once. You know, the whole thing that back then that was exceptable, to have 2 wives. I'm thinking either lillies or orchids. Just my opinion.
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Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 16:38 PST
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This by far the best fic I have read in a long time!! Its also very long too which is great!! Please check out my fics!!
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Reviewed By: Kagomesjewel(nsi) On: November 15, 2004 22:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...the last line is rather forboding for the future... What if Kagome finds a way to carry a baby to term for Sango and Miroku? There would be a lot of factors to think about - not to mention Inuyasha would probably just seal Kagome in a hut then let her do something like that. After all, there are complications to think about, morning sickness, the whole stretch mark thing, and the whole shebang of pregnancy. And even if Kagome brought the baby to term and it was healthy and everything, she probably won't be prepared to give up a small living thing that SHE grew inside of herself to Sango, no matter how worthy the cause. Will she talk to Mrs. Higurashi about something like that, or will she even mention it to Sango and Miroku? Or even Inuyasha...course, IY would probably have a few things to say about THAT...
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: November 15, 2004 19:46 PST
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Oh My! Here we go on a roller coaster of a story! I can not imagine, which direction this tale is going to take, regarding Kagome considering 'trying to have a baby for her friends.' Are we talking test tube here? It's hard to imagine Kagome having a child without InuYasha or even being able to part with one after carrying it; or better yet, InuYasha letting her have one without him. (Snigger!) I know the story's going to be good, any time Kag/Inu are fighting their attraction for one another from Chapter One on. Lead on O'Queen of Way with Words. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: myrrdinowl On: November 15, 2004 19:45 PST
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is kagome going to have a baby for sango and miroku? i remember reading another fic where she did that and it was absolutely amazing. it would be intersting to see where this idea would go in your hands. by the way, did you happen to watch that monkey episode of inuyasha again while you were writng this chapter? hehehe. just wondering!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story so far. I wonder what Kagome is planing? I'll bet InuYasha won't like it. So please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ThePioden (too lazy to log in) On: November 15, 2004 19:33 PST
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I should be doing me homework right now, but... this is a helluvalot more interesting that the Social Studies text book. *hacks book into little pieces with Tetsusaiga* Oops... I slipped... Anyway, another great start to a fic. It's not freaking fair, the speed at which you update. I can't update that fast. And my chapters are short, and they suck. Yours are so... so... GOOD! Gar...
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 15, 2004 18:31 PST
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Uh, is Kagome actually considering being a surrogate mother? Or am I reading it the wrong way? LOL Would InuYasha be happy about that? I mean, if he really loves her he probably wouldn't like the idea that she would be having someone else's baby and not his. I can't see Miroku and Sango agreeing on that either. But what the hell do I know? You're the master at this stuff. You make up the plots that are unbelievable and addicting. :-D I'm not being a suck-up...noooooooo. Never. LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:24 PST
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oO hmm....well...where to start. monkeys...hehe. thats great. mirokus closing comment was even better..don't stop for monkeys. priceless. next, kagome carrying for them? if inu is pissed that houjo kissed Kagome, imagine how he would feel about her carrying their child...specially being that they can't go through the well and artificially insiminate her....wow...real 'monk dead red'. hehe. keep it up, as always, great job.
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Title: Oh my gosh!
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIwould [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 18:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS. I love it I love it I love it. It's so ADORABLE! But I REALLY REALLY hope that this whole surrogate mother thing is with ARTIFICIAL INSEMINATION (with emphasis on artificial) or using SANGO'S eggs, because as much as I love Miroku, that's just gross. Don't go there! OR ELSE! I think you're thinking that too, but if you're not, RETHINK IT. I loved Inuyasha's comment about liking to carry Kagome. Very kawai. I think I'll go read it again. :D ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W.
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Reviewed By: smg1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 17:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far. Why are girls always such saps for a cute little animal? I am subject to this too, so i really wanna know. I'm trying to think of how Kagome could carry Sango and Miroku's kid without them able to go to the future. So invetro fertilization is out. That leaves something with the jewel, at least that's what i am assuming. Anyway, great story, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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