| "Darkness Fades to Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 180 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahwww.....I knew the big fluff monster was a big ol' softy. Sesh is so sweet with Misery, it's kind of hard to believe he's got wicked fangs and claws with a temper to match. The possiblilty of being 'pupped' scene was a nice touch. Internet folleys be damned, update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters. My computer has been acting a fool lately, but it's having a good day today and I've finally been able to check for updates, lol. But, wow, there's been some action. Inuyasha and Kagome and Miroku and Sango have now fully consummated their relationships, and you did it pretty much perfectly. As for Sesshoumaru and Misery, you are doing an excellent job with them. Sessh is becoming such a terrific guy, simply from Misery's influence. Cernonnus has got to die; that's all there is to it. He is AWFUL. And I hate that you won't be able to update for a while. But, I totally understand. Take care of your business, and update when you can!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:35 CDT
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i like the way that sesshoumaru and missery are slowly coming closer. if it had moved faster, it wouldn't have been believable. it's nice to see him in a reciprocating relationship. i will wait patiently until you are able to post again, as long as you promise the chapter will be as goog as this one.
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Reviewed By: Parseltongue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 16:42 CDT
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Such a sweet chapter. I'm glad that Misery's laughing again. Hopefully you'll grant us some lovely chapters upon your return from computer hiatus!
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARRRRGGHHHHH!!!!! You ended the chappie there!!!!!!! Your so evil!!!! Come on and hurry up the next chappie, I want to see Sesh and Inu kink some Oni tail!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 03:19 CDT
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this was quite an action filled chapter. i love kagome's new personality traits. she needs to do more than stand in the backround and shoot arrows. but what an evil way to end the chapter. i guess i'll just have to wait to see what happens to misery. thank you for all the time you've put into making this a very enjoyable story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Misery is on the lose!!!! Sesshy run run run after her!!
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Reviewed By: Parseltongue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since its original post date, and I have to say, the originality of your story is lovely. The characters are written to be very much in-character, and Misery is a lovely OC. I can't wait for the next update; Keep up the great work. One question though; Will Inuyasha's night of mortality come into play?
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru has his hands full with an enraged and scared Misery. If you add enraged and protective Kagome and enraged Sango, the three of them will take down most of Cenonnus's men and a piece of Cernonnus before they are stopped by anyone other then their mates. When you add the mates trying to protect the girls and Shippo protecting his friends Cernonnus doesn't know what he just made the wrong move. When they get protective is when they get strongest, especially Inuyasha and Kagome, and they can do amazing things. It was interesting to see Sesshomaru uncertain about where to go or what to do. He always struck me as a man who had a plan and backup for everything. I am surprised that he never thought or planned of somewhere to go besides the fortress. I am looking forward to what happens next and kudos to you and your beta for getting so many updates and revisions done so well and quickly.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 11:55 CDT
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Oh dear... I think this is NOT going to be pleasant for InuYasha, Miroku... they'll have two very PISSED off ladies, especially if anybody Kagome knows gets hurt. And with Misery... *cringe* BAD plan, boys. Can I just say - it was really weird seeing INUYASHA stop KAGOME from tearing into battle? Not that I blame her... but still. Weird.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Sesshy is getting soft!?! OMG!!! and Kagomes... ouch that wound would have been nasty and more scary to have a tongue on the sore.... yummy.....
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha, ha, ha.......I love it!!! The great Lord of the West submitting to his mate was priceless!!! And very believable!!! Poor Kags, the hentai hanyou won't be held under a leash too much longer by the looks of things (HUGE WINK). Keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 23:52 CDT
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This is very good! I really like Misery as a character, and the dynamics of her relationships with Sesshomaru and Shippou are really interesting. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very happy tonight when I checked my e-mail and found the notices for two chapters added to this story. You have done an excellent job as always to answer questions left from the past and keep the story going down interesting pathways. I love how the relationship between Sesshomaru and Misery is developing. It was good of him to allow her to continue to maintain her friendship with Shippo. And I love how Inuyasha is merging with his youkai and becoming stronger and more confidant, though I will miss the shyness he hid behind some (it was cute). Kagome is in for some surprises in the future from her hanyou as he claims his mate and starts a family with her. I think any of her old friends that she might run into will be surprised too, especially if they try to hook her up with Hojo again. This is turning out to be a truly fun read.
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Title: two words
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 18:19 CDT
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GO SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!
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