| "Darkness Fades to Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 180 ] |
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 00:27 CST
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Congratulations kodiaqkitten - your story Darkness Fades To Dawn (Misery) has been nominated for Best Original Character at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild . com [remove the spaces] (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ktshabatie
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts clapping and then bursts into tears* ITS OVER!!!! i dont know what to say T_T *grabs a tissue and wipe eyes* n'awww Kagome is going to be a mother!! YAY!!! and i can see Misery going to be jealous and soon wanting a kid :P but omg i cant believe its over... *still crying* and i just have to say this... TOP OF THE LIST!! TAKE THAT PEOPLE!!! XD hope to see more of your stories ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfull story! I'm sad to see it end. But I'm sure you'll write more stories.
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Title: So Sad!
Reviewed By: lifesabitch25 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great endding to this story, although I am kind of sad its over. I guess I will just have to wait for next story I am sure it will be just as good.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2009 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... nice ending... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:06 CST
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My congratulations on finally finishing this story. I have enjoyed following it since it first began. Thanks so much for completing it. It is certainly a brilliant piece of ingenuity. Keep up the wonderful work.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fantastic ending to this story. I am not surprised that Kagome became pregnant so quickly but I think Misery will be pregnant soon too. She will be fine with babies after she spends some time with Kagome and Inuyasha's child. I am sooo glad that Miroku and Sango made it to the modern day and that everyone recovered their memories of the first time they were together. I am a little surprised that Sesshomaru made it waiting for Misery, Inuyasha at least had the knowledge that he had to wait for Kagome to be born but Sesshomaru knew she was already in the world. I don't think he would have made it if he remembered the troubles that Misery was suffering through though. He would have gone looking for her early. The stories of the time waiting must have been fun, any chance of getting some one shots of the time past and the antics of Shippo and Sango and Miroku's kids? Kagome's reaction to a grown-up Inuyasha was great, but was even better was his realization that he didn't need to change to be worthy of anything since he had Kagome's love just how he was. I am not surprised by Inuyasha building an elaborate bathroom for Kagome, she does love her soaks in hot water. Another idea for a short story set in this universe is Shippo finding a mate now since everyone else is paired up. I look forward to reading your next project no matter what universe it is set in.
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Tooting horns and throwing tons of confette!!* That was so awesome sweetie!!! Odooles of kudos (or would you prefer Perogies?? *wink*) for your amazing, creative, ingeneous writing!!! I loved reading it as much as I did drawing it!!! I'm curious to see what other masterful creation you are going to churn out of that cranium of yours? My bunnies are anxiously sitting on standby! *wickedly grinning*
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2009 20:05 CST
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*standing ovation* Beautiful. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story, and you did a fantastic job cleaning up any possible plot holes. I'm thrilled to see everybody (well mostly everybody... I'm assuming Shippou catches on eventually) got their memories back from the previous time in the future as well (wow, that's a weird sentence, ain't it?) Really... that's absolutely awesome. And I giggled about the whole "pee on a stick" instructions. I asked the same thing when my sister-in-law was pregnant. All-in-all... thank you for inviting me (and your other readers) to come play in your sandbox. This was an incredible story from beginning to end.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
anyways.. im happy that Misery had the strenght to kill that asshole again.. but it worries me how she did it.. that would be pretty scary... seeing 2 red eyed demons... wouldnt be a happy sight XD and demons on the tv?? huh, that would be interesting to see, and see Kagomes face XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im confused... who were the spies?? and i nearly died.... last chapter is next.. *falls off the chair*
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This update was awesome. You managed to tie up so many loose ends at once it was great. The reunion was fantastic and I was glad to see Shippo even get some attention. Misery's reactions to Kagome getting emotional was perfect. I was also glad that I was right about Miroku and Sango being the two watching the girls. I can't wait to see Miroku and Sango reunite with their friends and how they handle Misery knowing them. I knew Misery could handle Cernonnus now since she knew it was possible and she had the memory of Sesshomaru and his love to bolster her through the fight. I know there is one more chapter and if this doesn't cover some of the future (like the Inu brothers' children) I would like to see a sequel to this, maybe Shippo's mating, where we can catch up with them and their children? In some ways I will be sad to see this end but I know it has to at some point before it gets to bloated and we already had a reprieve to the ending with the second trip to the past. I will eagerly await your next story after this one is done.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cernonnus is alive again! I was wondering about that but I wasn't truly expecting Misery having to destroy him again. At least she is stronger now and knows that he can be defeated. Where is Sesshomaru during all of this? And were the spies for Cernonnus or Sesshomaru? Were they perhaps Miroku and Sango? I am going to be in agony of waiting until the next update. I am glad that the rebels will survive. Sesshomaru is going to have his hands full with them, but he would do anything for Misery. Kagome leaving Inuyasha again is breaking both of their hearts but it has to be done. I hope that they do find each other again soon. Is Kagome pregnant? Her passing out suggests that she might be. That would be an interesting present she could give Inuyasha. I know I am just going to have to wait for the next update to find out at least some of the answers. Please make it soon!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 11:57 CST
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Oh no!!! I *knew* she had to run into him again... hopefully, though, this will be the last time Misery has to face this particular demon in her life. I teared up when InuYasha dropped Kagome into the well... the poor brothers. I'm crossing my fingers that the spies were Sango and Miroku? They wouldn't remember Misery at all... I look forward to the next installment of this fantastic story!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww i feel soo sorry for Kagome... Misery is making look like Kagome is the bad guy.. i hope Kagome can conviced the emenies to lay off... and thanks for feeling guilty.. if it gets us more chapters... lol
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