| "Darkness Fades to Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 180 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! Another chapter in this story. Poor Kagome being so torn between doing what needs to be done to save the future and helping these people now. And poor Misery being torn between her heart and head. Then there is the brothers facing losing their mates for centuries before being reunited. This chapter is so angst-filled that I hope you update soon showing some brighter spots. I do like that Inuyasha is back to being full youkai and Kagome is stronger the second time that she combines with Inuyasha. I will eagerly await the next chapter to see what awaits the intrepid time travelers.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww Misery GET OUT!!! *giggles* Inuyasha... always impaintent (sp?)
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg sooo goood! i cant wait for the next chapter=D please dont wait so long to write the nextXP lol sorry i sound like a little whiny kid...thats what your story does to me! makes me want more and more=D lol i loved the merging reiki and youki partXP lol loved it=D
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is right and Missy has to leave but Sesshomaru isn't going to be happy about it. He is going to have a hard time sensing her out there or knowing she is there but not being able to see her. I like how accepting Inuyasha is about the situation and how he is coming to empathize with what Sesshomaru feels about missing Rin, the two of them will help each other survive through the centuries until they can each be with their mates. I am still waiting to hear about Miroku and Sango, does Kagome know they might still be alive and floating around somewhere? Why do I have a feeling that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha hid all the youkai when Kagome and Misery were looking for them so the girls could make this trip to the past. I would hate to be the one trying to unravel all of the paradoxes this seems to be creating though. I hope they get together and it all works out without Sesshomaru being too much of a pain about it.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 21:40 CDT
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*tears* Poor Misery... Poor InuYasha... Poor Sesshoumaru!!! They have to go so long without being with the ones they love! And Kagome.... she feels so bad for InuYasha, having to leave him, and for her friends... but it's great to see her put her foot down. I absolutely love this story and was thrilled to see an update. I hope life is treating you a bit kinder then when you last left a post on LJ (haven't been there yet today so for all I know, you may have posted!)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best BD present EVER!!!!!! So cute and fluffy on both couples. Inching ever closer together (though in Missy and Sess case, it seems they are inching through a mine field covered in barbed wire. LOL) Can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drat, and here I thought Inuyasha and Kagome were going to be totally back together. I did like how the relationship between Misery and Sesshomaru is developing (redeveloping?). Misery has never taken Sesshomaru's high and mighty act and she showed him she isn't now. He needs her to keep him grounded and she needs him to fight with. I am glad that Misery is healing but how much longer are the girls going to be allowed to stay in this time and how much are they going to be allowed to change the history that Kagome knows? If Kagome is ripped from him again Inuyasha is going to be devastated and Sesshomaru is going to be furious if he loses Misery after this. Unless you make a very confusing twist in which they live until the beginning of the story and Sesshomaru hides this Misery (and Kagome and Inuyasha of course) when the past Misery comes with Shippo and then they live through the battle with Cernonnus and then he reconnects with her (if that make sense). I can't wait to see how it all works out and where you take this story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshomaru and Misery crack me up soo much XD its funny :P and n'awww just when Kagome and Inuyasha get somewhere.. lol
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing is easy for poor Misery. It was good to see Inuyasha and Kagome start to reconnect and to have Inuyasha wishing for the memories that Kagome has of the two of them together. I just wish Sesshomaru hadn't almost destroyed Misery with his words, she is having a hard enough time dealing with feeling the pain Cernonnus is causing her younger self. At least his inner beast recognizes her as his mate, he just needs to listen to it and try to repair the damage he already did. I can't wait to see how you work the whole thing out.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you updated quick!! anyways OMG Sesshy is soo cruel!! i wanna give Misery a HUGE hug T-T and ooo Inuyasha and Kagome are just soo cute :P
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Title: *cracks up*
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 21:48 CDT
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Okay... that was an AMAZING ending to the chapter. *tear* Poor Miss... if it's not bad enough she has to deal with Mr.-HIGH-AND-MIGHTY himself, now she's gotta deal with Cernonnus all over again, from half a world away! Don't give in, girl! Fight the man! You have the power! I'm anxious to find out what's going on... I certainly hope InuYasha and Kagome can get back into the awesome little niche they had, just for them...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wonder what Sesshy is thinking about Misery... and ooo they feel the difference between them...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In a way I am glad that Inuyasha and Kagome feel the difference between them because of the experiences each lived through separately. Kagome did go through her experiences with Inuyasha but not the Inuyasha that she is facing now. But I have to also say I am saddened by this gulf that has come between them, I hope they can work their way through it and become a close couple again. They have both grown, which is good. I also hope that Sesshomaru and Misery work out their problems and get back together soon before Misery ends up too hurt by living in the past twice. I am looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 05:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* awww i love Shiro :P hes just sooo cute :P and Misery... awww thats nce, that she will be able to heal her soul :) but Sesshy and Inuyasha.. i wonder how they will act when they see Kagome and Misery :P
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, and this one actually provides answers. :-D It was good seeing the start of a good relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. I do have to wonder how Shippou changed with the influence of Sango, Miroku and Inuyasha this time around. I am sure it was for the better. I hope that Misery does get some healing from all of this, but I still wonder if Cernonnus is currently alive and if he will do a show. If he isn't does that mean that Misery grows up without his evil influence, and how will that change the current Misery? Or is he alive but just not noticing Misery and Kagome now because he is focusing on the younger Misery and her mother? Also how will living twice in the same time cause changes in Misery? I know more questions that need answered, just what you really didn't want to see probably. I do like the answers that you have provided and I am looking forward to Sesshomaru meeting Misery for the "first" time, sort of. Inuyasha will be glad to see Kagome when he realizes that her main reason for returning to the past was to find him. I also have to say I am now very curious as to what Sango, Miroku and Kirara have been up to. Could the mysterious priest have actually been a formerly cursed monk? I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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