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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn-that fight was hott until what he said to her--that hurt me like it hurt Rukia. It was also very sudden, I think, but I can see why he got frustrated chasing her this far...Since he's not used to it being such a challenge for him...And that cliffhanger was evil--I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 17:00 CDT
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I am definitely not an Orihime fan...she's a whiney...well you know...anyway, I don't know if Ichigo meant what he said to hurt Rukia, But I have a feeling is going to feel bad about it. I kind of got the impression he said it out of jealousy. Oh...and was it a hint that Momo actually said Rukia's password out loud...she had to know Ichigo was in the office. It would be kind of cool if Ichigo cancelled the date with Maki Maki and went in his place or Uryuu helped him get rid of the man so Ichigo could take his place. I have a feeling your going to let Orihime help whoever hurt Rukia...but it would really be wonderful if you let Uryuu find out she is in on it and inform Ichigo. The Whiney Woman needs to be brought down. Great Chapter Update, though, I love it when your chapters send me into a frenzy of Orihime bashing...it is such a rush (hehehe) and I will always love how you bring Ichigo and Rukia together. Your stories are simply amazing. I am so glad you are enjoying college...remember to set aside sometime to have fun, keep up your grades and update your story (hehehe). All of your humble readers will be looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 10:36 CDT
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Oooh. The plot thickens! Inoue as a villain -- very, very interesting... I would love to see Rukia and Maki-Maki's date -- and I would pay to see Ichigo trying to ruin it! As usual, great chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 10:27 CDT
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oh my gawdddddddd you finally updated! you don't know how many times I have checked to see if new chapter is out in the past 4-5 days since u hinted at chapter being released early /sob I loved the chapter by the way, I still Love the interactions between Ichigo/Rukia the most obviously, but the talks between Ichigo/Momo is always cute, love it all, I get the feeling that Hime is gonna cause Rukia greef, but that what doesn't kill you hey? ahah Must say i really enjoyed Ichigo saying you are not worth it, i kind of hope it forces Rukia to be a bit more honest to herself/show him a bit more respect, she needs to get over her outdated thoughts about him, obviously she is just telling herself what she wants to hear, but love it all cannot wait until next chapter already, update soon k? /wave
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:24 CDT
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Ahh, we're getting closer to the lemony goodness of the matter. YAY! But on a side note, the Rukia as her sister thing was creepy and sweet, kinda, moreover creepy. But I understand where it came from.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2008 22:48 CDT
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Where is the new chapter, neeeeeeeeed it, update soon =(
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 23:45 CDT
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Loved all of it. The emotion that Ichigo felt; though his side wasn't written I could tell, just by what Rukia saw, how much he cared and ... well, LOVED her. Simply wonderful, Tibuta! Looooved it. Love love love love ... =]]. Please, as always, udpate soon!^_^
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Title: *Tear*
Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give this chapter an 11 if I could. Amazing emotion, wonderful characterization. This is among my favorite FF's ever, and definitely my favorite Bleach FF. You're such a great writer! You deal so well with the emotions and I'll say it again, I LOVE how they are taking their time. This picture of Ichigo fits very well with the anime/manga Ichigo. He's stubborn and rude, but loyal and caring. (I only wish he were real...!) LOVE IT!!! Update soon... please!!!
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Title: Perfect, Fluffy & Beautiful
Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful...plain and simple. By the end of the chapter I had a tear running down my cheek. I normally have an extremely long review for you...but you have left me speechless. Excellent Job. I anxiously look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did I mention I love how slow you are taking this? You're allowing real development, real emotions. I feel as if this is all real (don't take me for crazy). This wasn't too fluffy, it was perfect. Too fluffy would have ended with Rukia saying romantic things and being girly, and Ichigo responding like prince charming instead of hot-sexi-playboy whom is actually starting to care about someone for a change. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 23:11 CDT
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This chapter was very heart-warming... What Rukia did for Byakuya was such big sign of her devotion to him. And I really liked how you described their relationship and Rukia's feelings for him... I really thought that this chapter was going to be a Kuchiki siblings chapter, so I was pleasantly surprised to see Ichigo at the end of that hallway... And I am loving him. Ichigo telling her to bring her old self out to play on Monday was probably the sweetest thing he's ever said to her, in my opinion. Well done! And again, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolute magic, it made me cry and ache and laugh and feel all sorts if things wrapped into one, these are the kind of stories you want to read, the ones that suck you in. Can I just say that this line-Once a year he made a joke- was pure win. Also Byakuya's theory on love (I also hold these silly notions) was beautiful. Poor Rukia, I caught myself crying out 'poor baby' outloud in my apartment...I hope the roomies dont think im crazy, oh well its worth it. Also Ichigo is by far the shiniest knight in armor I have ever seen. Also Rukia catching herself being mean was so real. The fluff was wonderful, I fell in love with them all over again. By all means please do update sooner... I can't wait to see the on monday, ( I cant wait to see Inoue?)
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 21:35 CDT
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I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. that whole thing on byakuya believing in love.... that was sooo beautiful
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 21:02 CDT
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Honestly an amazing chapter, probably one of your best ever, written so well...could feel emotion from both of them, and wasn't Ichigo so sweet to her, awwwww
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 19:42 CDT
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This was a very sweet and sad chapter. You really brought out alot of emotions in your characters. I adored the interactions between Ichigo and Rukia. Extremely sweet, and her finally opening up to him like that made me smile. Now you must update so Navi can be happy happy again with more IchiRuki :3
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