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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeekkkk that was fantastic....eww Momo should not have lunch with McCreepy Aizen. I can't wait for Rukia and Ichigo office interaction! I am glad you updated it was wonderful! Update soon, Can't wait!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 18:13 CST
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I loved this chapter! The part, with Rukia and Momo in the dress shop, CRACKED ME UP! I loved that old lady! Wonderful chapter! Have a great week! And, as always, update soon! Zapenbits~~
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 15:48 CST
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Aie. All these deals, they are sooo going to regret this later, especially Rukia... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 00:12 CST
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Pretty good chapter, I dunno if you will even read this or not but doesn't it just feel like Ichigo has no spine at all lately, if someone was to do that to me i'd back off and let them come crawling back to me, she seems to just get it however she wants, if I was Ichigo i'd stop showing interest and let her realise it's not just -get what she wants when she wants-, I know they probably going to get past just having sex and realise they care for each other but I don't see how Rukia is just going to switch into that mode anytime soon if at all, you've kept her in character this whole time which is good but she never shows how vunerable she can really be to him except the first time at the hospital/diner when he took her out for food, it's like she went from hard bitch to somewhat fond of Ichigo back to hard bitch who just wants to use him, I dunno show some spine Ichigo, turn ya back on her and see what she does. Obviously Ichigo isn't innocent in all this, he still acting like a bit of a playboy but I dunno, Rukia needs a reality check and stop being so selfish. ahhh well that's my thoughts on it, update soon xxx
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 23:26 CST
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Amazing as usual...but stupid momo...hell no to boss dates...i am gonna kill her if she hurts shiro...but if she does i will take him XD anywho keep up the good work and I cant wait for another juicy update
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--the beginning happened exactly how I pictured it when I finished the last update a week ago. Wow. It's so perfect, it's...Jaw dropping. I absolutely love everything--everything about this chapter, this fic. Shower scene---hott! Your choice of words and phrases, flawless. I've been dying to do some kind of photoshop/fanart as a scene from this fic, because it's in my head all the time! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Good luck with your homework and school!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 21:11 CST
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It's already beginning...they are beginning to fall...and Ichigo will be the first over the edge. And let me guess...Kaien is the "Liar...married man"...NICE. It would be so cool if secretly Byakuya knew aboutIchigo and being the control freak he is, had him investigated and wanted her to end up with him...knowing the only way to push her into the relationship was to almost order her to get married and have children. I wouldn't put it past him...But I am so sure you have something of more substance up your sleeve for this story and I can not wait to see what it is. You should be voted the goddess of Ichi/Ruki fanfiction. Wonderful update...this story is awesome and you are the best. Keep up the incredible work...also I am glad you are enjoying college.
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 23:05 CDT
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Thank you for updating early! My heart weeps with joy lol. Poor Rukia, so many expectations from her from her brother. Can't wait to read more. Can't wait for the next update. Hope you are doing well with your studies.
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Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 17:39 CDT
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Yay, they're actually together again:D After the last chapter I was kinda thinking: "Oh bugger, now Rukia is gonna go all stubborn and keep pushing him away". So yes, I'm one happy reader^^ Good work as always:)
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 13:01 CDT
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yay for early update =o I liked the chapter alot, I dunno why but I thought it would of been cool if Ichigo didn't let Rukia in or turned her away, just so she realises he isn't just a piece of meat she can use whenever she wants, It's going to be interesting how/when Rukia realises it's more then just sex. Keep up the goodwork, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 22:31 CDT
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YAY! Ichigo's POV. The fact that he, no matter what Rukia says, is determined to sleep with her again is hilarious to me. He gets what he wants. Nuff' said. I bet he was happy in the end as well. XD. Yay for sexual frustration! lol. Nice chapter! And, as always, update soon!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, absolure perfection, as usual. And i love our two fools for the newest development, no strings, riighhtt. tsk,tsk momo. Orihime...dear god, what will she do after seeing proof if this night and all the other lime/lemons to come? don't really wanna know ?update this awesome story soon!
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fantastic. I love how theres so much more going on than Rukia and Ichigo realize. Byakuya was hilirious. And the sex scene was...hott--they're always hott, you write them better than anyone else, in fanfiction, or fiction period. To be honest, I had the same experience with Orhime. The first second she appeared on the show I was like: "I don't like you--how many episodes until you die?" Then I was like, "Eh, she's just a minor character." And then she was going to soul society and I was cursing. Then her feelings for Ichigo were written into the storyline...Ick. It left a bad taste in my mouth. So don't worry about hating her, or anything. She was a messed up character before you started writing fanfiction, and it's not like her being obsessive over Ichigo is out of character--because it's not.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 11:13 CDT
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I won't be one of the reviewers who would complain or call you on how you're depicting Inoue. This story needs a creepy stalker to add to the suspense and who better than someone who is slightly obsesses with Ichigo in canon? You did manage to paint a very creepy Inoue in this chapter -- the kind who is too stupidly in love to be a pawn in someone else's game... And Aizen and Momo flirting. I was pretty disappointed in Momo for falling into Aizen's charm but I totally love this story for having something like this. A nod to canon Momo and Aizen. I hope Momo doesn't get caught up with Aizena and ruin her pretty perfect life... Ichigo and Rukia in this chapter was pretty sweet. Ichigo, in particular. That "I missed you last Saturday" comment had me squeeling. I'm glad Ichigo did not allow Rukia to ignore him and get away from leaving him after a night a sex. Rukia proposing a no-strings-attached-sexual relationship with Ichigo just spells trouble for the two of them. I can't wait for how that relationship will pan out... And the lemon. I swear you are the queen of Ichiruki Lemon. Hot, hot, hot! Knowing that you will have lime-y / lemon-y chapters in the future just makes the wait for updates harder. Please, please, please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe don't feel bad about the sex it's a very good thing lol and i hate inoue too so fuck that bitch and i hope she gets whats coming to her
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