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Title: wow
Reviewed By: LostMyShoeInSheol [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off this is not just for the epiloge but the whole fic. This has to be one of the best storys I have ever read, not only did you throw in your own originality to the story you some how managed to keep every character almost exactly the way they would be in the manga while keeping them as far away from the setting as possiable, a feat that escapes most all fanfic writers. The story its self again I must reidorate is one of the best I have ever read, its funny, its sad, its touching, its passionate. I am sad that it is over, which as a reader, is always the best feeling, not wanting to loose the characters that you have so easly animated. I cant wait to read more of you work, one shots included. Thank you for such an amazing tale. :D
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Title: The End
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very hard for me to get into AUs, and I hesitated with starting this from the first few lines. Glad I started reading it. It pulled me in and made me want to finish it. Good job!
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: Irishneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had just started reading this fanfic, and I could not believe how great it turned out to be! You showed how something might happen in the real world, and you took the characters and made them your own. Awesome job on this one, keep up with the great writing!
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Title: The End :'(
Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was--IS--an utterly, utterly amazing fic. Wow. I honestly cannot believe it is actually over. :'( Having been with you as you have written this fic since the very beginning... what can I say? It's been a journey for me too. I feel like my entire idea of Bleach has been mapped by your ideas, and your stories. I'll never again be able to see Ichigo and Rukia without thinking of the bare-faced ATTITUDE they show each other, and the amazing sexual tension that's shown in this story. Honestly, IchiRuki is DEFINED by this very story. And I have seen countless forums which mention your name, and this fic, all across the internet. You're FAMOUS. :O Urgh, I cannot believe that this is actually over. I am going to miss this story insanely, and I whenever I wanna seek out a good long IchiRuki story to read, I will come back here. :) It's upsetting to know that you're gonna stop writing long-length IchiRukis, but it's understandable-- they must be rather taxing. Please don't let this be definitive, however. At least consider starting up another, given you have the time, and the idea? I think a little part of me might die knowing that I'll never read a decent-length IchiRuki story again. :P However, it is of course, your decision. All that remains for me to say now is, congratulations! You have wonderful, amazing talent, so don't ever stop writing! And please share with us some of your original works! Lastly-- thank you. From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much, for bringing this story to us. We absolutely LOVE you. 'Til the next time-- take care, and goodbye! Thank you thank you thank you.
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Reviewed By: aya07 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 01:22 CDT
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great story! thanks for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 15:04 CDT
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I love the "occasionally obey" scene. One word for this whole thing: LOVE :< It's over... :{ Nooooooooooooooooooooo
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Reviewed By: Kylara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It was such a fun trip to read this fanfic. I'm sad to hear you might not be writing anymore full-length IchiRuki ffs, because you do them SO well, but I wish you luck in your original fiction ventures. That last chapter was ridiculous and adorable. Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us.. IchiRuki forever :)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. As always your mastery of writing and creating great characters (though they've been the same template over and over again) will get you far in the writing world. I wish you the best and I hope one day I'll be reading some of your published stories in the next few years!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 00:56 CDT
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BRAVO BRAVO...that was amazing and I wish there was more since I dont want this lovely story to end but you finished it well and I couldnt be happier...I will look forward to any work that you plan to do and count on me to be there to review XD keep up the good work and if you do make another story like Murder My Heart or Odalisque I will loves you forever XD thanks again for all your hard work I really appreciate it
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 22:15 CDT
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Great, great job! You're such an amazing writer, all of your stories - fanfiction or original - will be brilliant. You're awesome! -Liz
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 22:11 CDT
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I'M GOING TO MISS THIS STORY SO MUCH! I believe Odalisque and Murder my Heart were your two greatest masterpieces! I love the conflict they had at the end during the wedding; made me chuckle to myself :] Thank you for updating and gracing us with your amazing story these 50-some weeks!
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Reviewed By: wulong [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 22:10 CDT
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I can't believe it's been nearly a year. A year! Looking forward to this weekly dose of IchiRuki love was part of my life for a year, and I am really going to miss it. No one does it quite like you. If you publish - when you publish - please notify us! I look forward to reading your future works, whether IchiRuki or original.
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 00:49 CDT
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Brilliant...That is the only word I can think of when I read this story. The chapter was spectacular in length and content and the proposal at the end of the chapter was perfect. You have outdone yourself yet again. BRAVO!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! This is the best...you are the best. I look forward to the epilogue, but I will be sad to see this story end. I hope you plan on doing another...of course when you have time.
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi! The reunion was very nicely done! I'm going to miss Odalisque...it was like my young adoptive child...anyways, I hope you'll be starting a new story soon. :]
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 09:31 CDT
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Oh my god, wow. My heart is actually burning from the emotional intensity... damn, if I can be half as lucky as the Ichigo and Rukia in your story, for the rest of my life, I'd be content. Just got back with my boyfriend recently, so this is a happy time for love. :D All that remains is for me to say you write so incredibly amazingly that the only thing lacking is that we all, completely, wish it were real. Thank you thank you thank you-- I feel BLESSED to have been able to read this story, and follow it from the very beginning to now, the very end. And I am gonna recommend this to every single person I know. Now we just wait for the epilogue. And cry it out. ICHIRUKI FOR-FUCKING-EVER!!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 00:48 CDT
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Well....I'm speechless, I'll come back again when words have returned to me
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 21:16 CDT
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I loved this chapter! This review definately won't be as long because I think I've reviewed out. Haha. XD. But, still, it was an icredible chapter! I loved it! -Liz
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 08:02 CDT
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Loving the story as per usual and really want Ichigo/Rukia back together talking....but when that happens the story will end :( WHY MUST IT BE SO haha hopefully update is soonish :)
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi! Sugoi! Sugoi! Awesome chapter. The flash drive's hiding place was absolutely ingenious, and of course it's gold. That image of the blazing sun behind Aizen making him look like a devilish god was great. So Aizen did some re-imaging with Momo's rape tape? And he did the disgusting act himself?! *Facial expression as if I just died in The Ring* Oh my Kami, I'm going to be on edge all the time until your next update(s). Especially since they've got less than 2 days *Hallucinating and believing that we have way more than 2 ch. left before we have to see this awesomeness end*...Update soon!!!!!! And holy freak, how much dumbassedness does Inoue possess?!
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 15:28 CDT
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Oh, and BTW, I really like what you're doing with (to?) Orihime in this story. CRAY-ZEE! I'm not an Orihime hater, per se, but I totally am Ichigo/Rukia fan.
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 15:25 CDT
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YEAH! Can't wait for Aizen to go down and for Ichigo to get Rukia back and Shiro and Momo to get married!! Woot! What a great reward for finishing my thesis! While I am totally sad that this story is coming to an end, I am so excited for the happy ending!! :)
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 14:13 CDT
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At first I wasn't sure how you'd have Ichigo discover the evidence that would bring Aizen down, but I'm glad you pulled it off. I love the way you're pacing this story...it's not too slow, nor fast. Unlike the manga right now *glares at Kubo* Anyways, can't wait for your next update! P.S. Ichi-rukiness of the new ED. Sorry, just had to say that again!!! :3
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the climatic ending is coming i can't wait i loved this chapter
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 23:26 CDT
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OMG that was intense...but I liked what you didi it not doing anything obvious with h iding that flash drive...very creative BRAVO and man I hope they nail his ass and he isnt able to get out of it...*crosses fingers* cant wait for more so update soon...so good...and I hope Rukia doesnt leave!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 22:06 CDT
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LOVE IT! Rukia and Momo are so heart-broken. I just hope their men come back to reclaim them FAST! They need to do it before Friday (in the story, of course) Great job! As always, update soon! -Liz
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 15:25 CDT
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*squeals* The Ichi-Ruki-ness of the new ED!!!! They're holding hands :3
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 12:28 CDT
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Hihi, forgot to write a review when you first released the chapater so thought id do it now [better late then never eh?] Hoping that you do release new chapter soon, guessing it might still be a few days or so so being patient, anyway great chapter, and loved the family scene with ichigo and his family and rukia at the grave talking to her sister, good stuff keep it up, and gl with homework and everything else ~ Chad
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2009 17:11 CDT
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Aaaa I wish I had more time to write as much as I want to in this review but I dont! I love this chapter but I wish he had run just a little faster and caught her and held her. Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one, I just want them to get back together!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 22:02 CDT
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brava! very awesome....it would be EXTREMELY awesome if you matched the ichi-ruki reunion in your story with the ichi-ruki reunion that MIGHT happen in the manga :3
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 21:44 CDT
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OMG that was so good and sad...i cant wait for the next chapters but I dont want it to end XD this chapter definently made me feel their emotions and was overall well written...cant wait for more
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