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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 21:48 CDT
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amazing chapter, i love Ichigo's new nickname, haha, i cqtm about that. [chuckled quietly to myself] and about chapter 350...that pissed me off to no end. ichigo had some leg action and that was hella sexy, but inoue was being as useless as usual. kubo needs to speed things up! well, at least ichigo almost knocked out inoue and ishida when he whipped his tail about. i would've felt bad for ishida...but not inoue >:3
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 21:27 CDT
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I grew very sad to hear that this will be ending so soon lol. Great chapter though. Loved the interactions between the three and can't wait to read about their 'date'. Shall interest the evil side of me, and definitely want to read up on what has been going on. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 20:20 CDT
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This was an excellent chapter. You have out done yourself yet again. I loved the interaction between Renji/Tatsuki/Ichigo...very nice, all three working together. And I can not wait to see how you bring Orihime down *rubs hands together and joins you in an evil laugh*. I have just one question, were you hinting that Rukia could be...Oh I don't know... pregnant? Now, about the recent manga update, Yes...I was pissed at first, however my best friend's new wife is Japanese and LOVES Bleach...she, too, gave me the same translation, so that made me feel better. And you are right...Orihime needs to become useful...considering SHE is the reason Ichigo and the rest are there to begin with...Her half-witted notion that her going to Hueco Mundo would actual save Ichigo...She had absolutely no faith in him whatsoever...but now that he has come to save her...with her other friends, she thinks he's her personal savior. MY GOD ORIHIME GROW A BACKBONE. Get your wimpy butt up and do something useful for once...like maybe sacrificing yourself for the greater good. Isn't it better for one to die to save thousands than thousands to die to save one...But I have this feeling that one is going sacrifed won't be Orihime but Ichigo...and his hollow it badass. My friend thinks it might be Orihime is sacrified and Rukia will choose to staying in the Living World. But I believe Ichigo's power is too great for him to remain in the Living World. He'll choose to remain a soul reaper to protect the ones the cares about...like the a guardian angel. Anyway...Sorry for the rant...just thought I would share. Your stories always get me excited like this...you are an awesome writer and I hope you decide to do it for a living...this world could use a few more great writers. Awesome update...I look forward to your next.
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a fantastic job with this chapter--as much as I'm dreading Ichigo going on a date with Inoue, that just shows how far he's willing to go for Rukia. I can't wait for the next chapter. Is it wrong if I'm hoping Rukia ends up in New York before Ichigo can stop her?--I don't know, just seems like it would be a good love-chase. Even more romantic if he's already waiting for her in New York to tell her. Those were just ideas I got while reading this chapter. I can't wait to see how you have it planned out. And I completely agree, chapter 350 of Bleach was ridiculous. I can't wait for Rukia to return and turn Ichigo back to his human form, and then hopefully then Orihime will give up.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 19:22 CDT
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holy hell that was intense...it was soooo worth the wait...and even though i dont want it to end since your writing is so good i cant wait to see what happens...cant wait till next week...GL
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 21:00 CDT
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omg, are you going to be posting an update?? please say yes!
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 00:07 CDT
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Ah, so many emotions going on. Your last two chapters have been very heart tugging. Rukia's breakdown was very well done and Ichigo's desire to win her back melted my heart. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 01:47 CDT
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This is actually rather painful to read due to how invested you have made me into this story, and seeing such bad things happen to the both of them is quite sad when it's gonna be a whole week til we can read some more bright news between them :( But hats off to you, no other Author does this on MM, you are levels above everyone when writing your stories, what else can I say but.. Update soon eh? heh
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Reviewed By: GirlInterpreted [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 00:16 CDT
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Osu! I'm actually in the process of re-reading this. Gomen ne. I should apologize for being a lax reviewer. I was reading the chapter where Ichigo takes Rukia to Urahara's for sandwiches. I was really struck by how you captured a particular feeling: when one has been taught to be strong her whole life, and the only options you have are to be the emotionless, made of steel, ice princess or the pathetic, needy, weak and fragile little girl. There is no gray area, which means that the moment you admit any need or accept any help, you've lost and you'll hate yourself for the pathetic, silly girl you've become. So this obviously is Rukia. And the way you wrote it, it was such a clear impression for me. I was really moved. She feels so broken, so ashamed, but she can't allow that to show or she thinks she'll really fall apart. She's not very generous with herself. She can't allow for the idea that accepting comfort doesn't leave her totally vulnerable and at the mercy of the one offering it. But at the same time, just the feel of him holding her hand... I bet a part of her was exhausted, and just wanted to give up, just wanted to melt into that hand and feel warm and safe for a little while, even if she knows she'll feel stupid about it later. I think you did a wonderful job conveying that. I felt it so strongly. Osukare sama deshita. I'll try to leave more reviews as I re-read. The story is coming to an exciting climax. I can't wait to see how you pull all the ends together ^_^ Ganbatte kudasai.
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 15:33 CDT
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Ichigo's gonna kick Aizen's BUUUUTT! Great job! I have to go so this'll definately not be very long. Update soon! -LIz
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2009 11:56 CDT
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That was so goo-ood! I can't wait, pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update like, really really soon! Hah, I cannot wait for that Inoue BITCH to get her comeuppance. And poor Ichigo. =( Go go Ichigo, you can do it! =D
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 23:03 CDT
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Woooh! I thought the last chapter was intense...I really need Rukia to find out and forgive Ichigo, just as much as he needs her to. I really need for Toshi and Momo to get back together too. This is all way too sad I am so overwhelmed!!!! Hurry next chapter let this all be fixed and happy!!!! I want love and flowers not tears and crap, although for Inoue and Aizen I would personally see to there destruction! I hate them so much right now, how evil.... Well another wonderful chapter, leaves me craving more! Ack make it better I know you can!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 22:57 CDT
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This was a great update...not quite what I was hoping for but I'll take it considering it is you...if it had been any other writer I would have stopped reading after last chapter, but your stories always do this...they bring your heart to a near stop only to reboot with even more energy than before you started. Now we wait and see what Ichigo has in mind on how he finds out the information he needs to bring Aizen down. Please don't let him cozy up to Orihime to find out...because I loved the interaction between Ichigo and Orihime...he totally brushed her off. She needs to be dropped out a fifty story window. What Ichigo needs is Chad, Urahara and Yoruichi. I can't wait to see where you are going with this...I will be patiently waiting for your update next Friday. You absolutely Rock...Great Job.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 20:18 CDT
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NNNNOOOOOOOOooooooooooo Dont go to new york!!! You'll never read about ichigo's awesomeness....ugggg...but damn that is going to be a good chapter...eeeepppp I cant wait for next week or earlier *hint hint* XD loved it soooo much but I wanna beat the crap out of Toshiro for dumping her...stupid...but I guess I cant neccessarily blame him but still...ok I am going to stop rembbling now....cant wait for the next chapter XD
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 19:25 CDT
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Another amazing chapter...I think i'm going to die of a heart attack. what the hell could Aizen possibly gain from destroying Momo? And ichigo should have taken his car and plummeted towards Inoue, though he's too moral to do that. Ichigo better do something soon before Rukia goes away. Update soon!
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