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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And things get even more interesting. I love watching this all develop, the chemistry of this fic is just so over-whelming (in an addicting way). I'm so glad you updated early. (and i can't wait for Orihime to realize she can't split IchiRuki up--if anything she's going to push them together! haha--take that wench) And I loved the scene in the office, and the family scene at the end. Perfect. Can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo Ichico's family is so crazy! Heh, Isshin is wonderful! Poor Rukia! Oh and the way Ichigo waits for her to get in the elevator, how sweet! Hmmm is Momo really sick or does Aizen have anything to do with it? I hope there is some work interaction next time, we have yet to see any! Great chapter as always!!! Can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 22:39 CST
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You write Isshin so well too!!:) I can't wait to see what might transpire next week-end! Good chapter and definitely looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:40 CST
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I hope Momo doesn't do anything that will hurt her relationship with Toushirou! And your Orihime is evil (it's great!) I can't wait until the fact that Rukia has him is flaunted in her face!! Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:18 CST
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I love the fact that Rukia left him!!:) I can't wait to see when they finally meet up again!! Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 18:46 CST
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Congrats. I finally got my lazy ass to write you a review :) Hump... so...ichiruki intensive sexual relationship --> conflict between the two --> Orihime + other villains enters in --> ichigo and rukia sum how makes up again --> rukia got pregnant --> ichigo got pissed for not telling him --> ... GAH!!! what's gonna happen next?? It's okay if it's gonna take you a while for the update. Understandable that collage work is first priority :) *sign* I still have 2 more years to go till I start my collage life. -It will be great though if you can keep up with the weekly updates, that's my inner voice speaking- What's really making me so impatient is how are you gonna make those two get together? It's not just gonna be a make-up sex and that's it? ... so it's there gonna be more drama? Hump....
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a great update. I am surprised Rukia is the first one to start to feel something more (even if she doesn't realize it yet). Isshin was great, and totally in character (like everyone else might I add). And three weeks of non-stop sex?--Hell, Isshin could be on to something...Not sure if Rukia getting pregnant would be a good thing right now though, with people possibly trying to kill her and all. Not to mention with Ichigo's reaction, her first act upon finding out would be to keep it from him--and of course once he found out he'd be pissed...I hate how college and work consume my life from writing, but at least the semester is almost over. Do your best! I kid you not when I say I literally think about this story everyday, but I could wait a little longer for a chapter realize, so long as you never quit on the story until it is completed.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was GREAT!!!! Isshin is hilariouse!!! 'are you pregnant?' lol. i was cracking up so hard wen i read that all. lol. well it was AWESOME!! i really liked it all!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 21:56 CST
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Loved the chapter, some pretty funny moments during it, good luck with Uni, hope everything goes well.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 21:17 CST
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ohhhh that was soo good...in a way i hope she is pregnant cause that is going to be a lot of drama if that happens...anyway...update when u can cause i am gonna love every minute of reading it...XD although i should be doing homework instead oh well
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 16:13 CST
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Aha. Now, I've been faithfully reading every single chapter of this story since it began, but I've been rather neglectant of reviewing. =/ Not very nice, so I'm gonna start now. Just fantastic, as usual. =P The characters are so awesomely formulated, and I could so see Ichigo and Rukia getting into a big fight over something stupid like this! I think it's hilarious. I got really freaked out when the twins first came out though; I thought they were the people sent by Ulquiorra to 'investigate' her or something. Still-- omg, Isshin! I love Isshin, he's fucking class. =D Keep it up, can't wait for your next chapter! --Caz
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 15:17 CST
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AWESOME JOB!!!!!I loved the update and the introduction to Isshin and Rukia finally meeting was hilarious. I loved the entire chapter...All of it was completely terrific. I can not wait to see if Ichigo follows Rukia up to her apartment. They need to initiate her apartment now...or they need to talk. Either way, I am sure whatever you write or have planned will be the best. And don't fret about updates...I've always been told good things come to those who wait...Great job and I look forward to reading another superb update...when you are able.
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 14:49 CST
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[Her eyes scanned her apartment for a moment before she slowly brought the jacket to her face, pressed it to her nose, and inhaled. Her heartbeat quickened.] AHA! She's starting to careee about him! w00t! Loved the chapter, Tibuta! Have an awesome week! And, as always, update soon!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I fell out of my chair laughing when Isshin asked about grandkids. I love this story, I get giddy when I see it's updated.
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 11:00 CST
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Thanks for the update! Interesting developments. I hope Rukia will start seeing past Ichigo's prior image and that the closeness they had developed during the time Byakuya was shot is brought back. I really loved that chapter. Hope you are doing well with your coursework and please update soon!
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