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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 00:01 CST
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omg the next one is even heavier...cause man that was some sexual tension being released there...first i want to slap then both since lawyers should know to read every document no matter what people say it is...stupid...but I give them a high five for making themselves official...i am so psyched as I have been waiting for this for a while...yay...cant wait for more drama so update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 19:52 CST
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gzm6p_Vslys p.s., i made this sweet little AMV in honor of your beautiful fan fiction. i must seem like a crazed fangirl, reviewing like every single day :3
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 14:51 CST
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Rukia was so hilarious in this chapter. I know that's mean to saying, considering she thought that he was going to break up with her. And then she was called him cute because he was all nervous. It was just a total sweet chapter and I loved it. Great job! As usual, you leave me speechless with your amazing writing style and awesomeness. =] -Liz
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 11:56 CST
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...does heavier mean it'll be longer before we get it? Because if that's the case, I'll take light and fluffy NOW, please XD (though I would MUCH rather have the promised heavy now, but again, if time is a factor... =P) Another amazing chapter, and I maintain that NO ONE writes IchiRuki as well as you do.
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmmm i love the smell of sex and drama LOL nice chapter
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Reviewed By: pollyhi5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually feel the sinister dragon breath now. I knew something evil would pop up from those signatures! Now I'm scared. Don't be too evil? They're in loveeee! Come on! :) Pol.
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Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that Momo's feeling better (I really don't like her much in canon, AND I'm a HitsuMatsu shipper. But I like Momo here very much, and I can actually get behind her relationship with Toushiro here. Proof of your brilliance as an authour!). Loved Ichigo's 'goddamn it, Rukia, I need to wash off the Inoue!' snarling. I like Orihime in canon (I just don't support her with Ichigo), but I really most sincerely hope that THIS version dies a slow and painful and really humilating death. Oh, and nice job with Ishida and Nemu! I don't know exactly why I like these two together, when they've only met once in the manga and twice in the anime, but I do. (I would like to know exactly what makes Mayuri so frightening here, though). But MAN, I have a sinking feeling - as in pit of quicksand sinking - that Ichigo and Rukia really should have read those papers carefully. And I think that maybe Aizen sent Ichigo off with Inoue to put him in an irritated mood, and therefore in a must-fuck-Rukia-now mood so she wouldn't read them either. (seriously, your foreshadowing positively LOOMS) Just a thought; if Toushiro's so brilliant, how about having him help them out of the trouble they're about to land in. Ooooh, have Momo prove her worth once again as Rukia's BFF by bitch-slapping Orihime!!! (seriously, I think I'd actually pay to see that) And is Aizen going to pay (and pay, and pay) for what he did to Momo, the bastard? 'Cause it's fairly obvious who's to blame for that little nightmare.
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 19:31 CST
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btw...just noticed something. you switched from third person limited to first person for rukia at one point. be careful...i do the same thing a lot too
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 18:52 CST
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Wow that was such a good chapter, they are just to sweet together, and I love how she knew he would never have done anything with Inoue. He was so upset after dricing that crazy toot home he just wanted to be with his Rukia, and boy were they together. I think this was one of the hottest chapters because it was so emotionally charged. And he blushed!!!! Ack a heavy chapter!!!!!! Now I really can't wait for the next one!! Thanks for having such great stories!!!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 18:23 CST
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this chapter, the end of this chapter, and your comments are now going to result in me not being able to focus on school, or anything for the next week... Great and awesome chapter, and finally! Took them long enough. ichigo was soooo cute. Update soon!
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Title: I love IT!
Reviewed By: 123lV33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 16:55 CST
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What nooo i can't wait!!!! give me more!!!! ..................ok now i sound a bit crazy......fuck that i don't car if i sound crazy..... i just can't wait till the next chapter! Renee G
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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gorgeous! will be anxiously awaiting arrival of next chapter! *bites fingernails*
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 16:18 CST
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Oh nooooo! This whole chapter, I've just been so tense whilst reading it 'cause I just KNOW everything's gonna blow to pieces and it's so SAD! Right now, right after they're like moving forward and they're so CUTE together and omg no. =( Inoue is bitch. God, please don't make the awfulness last too long or I think I might die from actual fangirl-hyperactivity. Gah, the new Bleach chapter "The Lust", so GAY. STUPID Inoue! And Ishida is so sweet being all in love with her and unable to refuse her when she's all after Ichigo and she's such a BITCH. Awwww, Ishida. =( Sorry, irrelevant. But yeah, continue updating! I'm gonna go re-read the chapter again without any pending nasty feelings and just soak up in the loveliness. =D --Caz
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 15:52 CST
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This is quite possibly one of my favorite stories ever, including those beyond fanfiction. You rock.
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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huzzah! how many pages do you have left before you finish the story/novel/story-on-steriods? hopefully a lot, because this fan-fiction has caught my heart :]
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