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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 11:24 CDT
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Ack! I've been trying to get back to my comp to write a review forever...stupid school. Anyway, this was a very good chapter. I really enjoyed it. Poor Byakuya, Poor Rukia and how sweet was Ichigo. i want him to politely excuse himself and thenbolt after Rukia...although I don't think Ichigo would care about excusing himself. I hope my dear Kuchiki-sama is still alive, I would be devastated I haven't even really seen him in the story yet!! And can I say that Inoue is such a cheery butt crack, I hope Rukia tells her off! Loved the chap. can't wait for the next. I hope Momo and Ichigo are there for her at the hosp.
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 10:12 CDT
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Really good chapter! Rukia's resolution regarding her not-sleeping-with-Ichigo rule is absolutely in character -- and how she enforced it was totally funny, too. I am very intrigued about this old flame of Rukia's that you have alluded to. I can't wait for him to make an appearance... And Byakuya being shot was a total surprise for me. Rukia's reaction to the news was heart-breaking... the final image of her (from Ichigo's perspective) of running barefoot to the nearest metro -- that was very tragic... I hope you have the urge to give us a quick update again -- soon, like in the next 24 hours?
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 22:34 CDT
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I like the chapter, you excel at sexual tension and sexual descriptions. I like how you have build Rukia -even if I do think she is a little too cold- but I feel you have completely forgotten about Ichigo. I mean, you made him out as a womanizing pig who possibly has a soft heart and you haven't done much on him. He hasn't gotten the level of complexity like Rukia has. We know nothing of his mother or any relationships or why he is a womanizer. I just hope you can develop him a bit more before he is head over heels in love with Rukia.
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 17:08 CDT
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OH. MY. FLIPPIN'. GOSH. That was probably the most amazing chapter yet. I love love LOVED Ichigo's determination in getting Rukia to sleep with him. That made me laugh. XD. && then, before they went inside the board meeting, how he was trying to get her to calm down. It was so sweet. Oh oh oh! And how they corresponded with each other! It was so cool. Then, when Rukia ran out of there and he saw her running to the metro - all her power and confidence gone - and his heart ached, my heart SOARED. That was suuuuuch a good chapter! I looooved it! Thanks so much for the chapter! And, as always, update soon!^-^
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Title: Oh, I forgot to add...
Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:55 CDT
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Oh I forgot to mention the finer points...the office scenerio after the party & the Baseball bat remark...priceless. I loved how you wove in Ichigo's caring side. I hope he goes after her. GREAT JOB!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:52 CDT
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OMG...Not Byakuya...Again...It is sad and I cried a little because I too LOVE Byakuya Kuchiki. However, I did see it coming...although, you really do not have to kill him off...you could make it appear that he died and put him in a coma this time. That way when he comes out of it you can have him have a better outlook on life...and it will give Rukia and Ichigo time to get to know each other BETTER...it's just a thought. This is your wonderfully marvelous story and I'm sure Byakuya's death has a purpose, especially if it all his business goes to her. That would make her a very wealthy woman and that would make Aizen want her more...which is what he is planning...He had Byakuya killed because he thinks Rukia will inherit and he can try to woo her, marry her and take the company from her. Rukia is smarter than that and I am sure Byakuya suspects things and has put his business affairs in order so that can not happen. Byakuya is not a dumb man...with that said...PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE...DON'T KILL BYAKUYA AGAIN. Okay, My begging & crying has finished...it probably won't help, but I tried. As I said before this is your beautifully written, marvelous story and I will graciously accept any and all our plot because I will not and refuse to argue with greatness. GREAT UPDATE, I can't wait until you update again. Oh and by the way, did you know the lead guy in Twilight played Cedric Diggory in Harry Potter and the Order of the Pheonix? I'm addicted to Twilight as well. Again, Fabulous Job.
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Reviewed By: babyA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:09 CDT
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omgggg are you going to kill him off!!! nooooooooooooooooo!!! murder my heart was bad enough, i can't see byakuya dead again!!! argh. love the update though! i like how you subtly portrayed ichigo's caring nature
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow--two chapters in one week...It's either my birthday or Christmas, thank you very much. =] I really enjoyed this chapter (like all the rest). I was really happy to see that Ichigo didn't act like nothing happened. I was even more surprised at who got shot. I thought the hit was out on Rukia. It doesn't matter if its sexual tension, action, witty lines and cliffhangers--I'm always in suspense when reading this creative, and original fanfic. I cannot wait till the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work! (I'm also addicted to Twilight)
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Reviewed By: navirae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:54 CDT
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aahhh thank you for updating this so fast. not feeling well, but was so happy to see the update waiting for me when i logged on *sniff* aayyee IchiRuki are onto betting again on when Rukia will succumb to Ichigo's advances fufufuf =] Poor Byakuya. He needs some love
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:48 CDT
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Congrats!!! I think I've just made ur 200th review!!!Yea!!!! A rather 'hot' start for this chapter. I luv that playful side of Rukia and Ichigo is just god damn sexy. Why does Byakuya have to be killed again in ur fics? First MMH and now Odalisque as well?? :( Oh well, I will get over it. I understand. It's one of the planned twist in the fic. Seems like Rukia is gonna need someone's help to get over her grieves. Well Ichigo better not let that chance slip. Thanx for the super fast update :)
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tsk,tsk, ichigo and rukia... And finally, part of the sinister plot is being revealed! yay. Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next update. And might I add, those 12 men are lucky I'm not in the room with them, else...I'll leave it to your imagination. :]
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Reviewed By: RogueAmazonBoo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 13:08 CDT
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I knew they were going to combust. = ) How could they not with that much sexual tension disgused as loathing to help them along? Girl, you're giving new meaning to the phrase, a thin line between love and hate.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 22:42 CDT
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haha amazing really, it will be interesting to see if Ichigo still goes on the offensive or will he back off and maybe Rukia will wonder if something is wrong/and she makes the move, loved the whole chapter, could see it play out in my head as you wrote it, amazing job and I hope you update quicker then normal because the wait is tooo long =( Also great to see the transition into College has been going well for you so far, hope everything is good [you are near 200 reviews as well, yayyy =p]
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Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow-that was the sexiest chapter in fanfiction history. I feel bad for Ichigo because Rukia keeps getting away. >_< But I am addicted to this story, I think of this more than I think about anything else--I cannot wait for you to update again. And I am very glad that you are enjoying college so far.
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 20:22 CDT
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Ichigo. Wow. ~~haha. I loved how he like just ... stared. XD. It made me laugh of how schoolboy he was ( just like he mentioned in the chapter! ). I thought that was an awesomeee detail. && all the death threats on those poor old men! Sure, they're kinda, well, gross, but still! They'll be dead soon anyway! XDD. Then then he just -- jumped her. Like, he was trying to restrain himself and just did it.=]] Amazinggg chapter! As always, updare soooon!^-~~
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