| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ultaraguyver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was BRILLIANT and from me thats saying much because I hate to read things this long. The grammar could be improved but that doesn't bother me unless it is really, really bad. Just a few requests though: 1.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this, please I hate cliff hangers and I'm a DBZ/GT fan and they always end with cliff hangers. Hell if you want I'll pay you to continue writing. 2.Please let Rei live, I'm a sucker for happy endings. 3.Will some body please shot Akagi betwwen the eyes. Thanx
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Title: Everquest Paladin
Reviewed By: Iuldias On: September 18, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've reviewed your fic before (on FFN) but after reading some of the other reviews, felt I should do so here as well.
Watch out with your spellchecker, some don't catch when the wrong word is used as long as it's spelled correctly. It mught help to have someone go over all the chapters and correct the incidents in which the wrong word was used. Other than that, it's a very fun fic that I still love to read :)
P.S. Ignore the so-called FFY, they're immature children who actually think their collective opinion matters to anyone with a brain and the ability to use it. Please continue to write this story and I hope to see an update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shadowmaster62 On: September 07, 2003 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some people like this fic, others don't. But god people, don't even waste time reviewing if your just going to bitch about how you hated it. If you were that wounded by it, go read something else. It's fun to read an OOC once in a while, and if you have enough spare time to read 500 hundred page stories just so you can write about how much you despise it, try writing your own fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Fucktastic On: August 19, 2003 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
No need to give a reason. I now see the True: it's just a brainless S/R written by a clueless fangirl...
Written by a fangirl, for a bunch of fanboys, SHT is one of the works that defines what fangirl's fanfictions are all about. It contains the perfect imbalance of lame ideas and ships ripped from Evangelion, and is a totally deformed vision of the serie which vomit new masochist phantasms about the characters while keeping them untrue to their original personalities. Kimberly is an author who is afraid to read impartial comments (MST MST MST), and it should be obvious that it paid off with this and several of her other fanfiction fiascos. Overall, a quite hilarious work to read (if you enjoy brainless shippers fics), recommended for any R/S fan in total despair who don't care about such thing as OOCs, pathetically long descriptions of guns, brainless deification of Rei and unless characters bashing. |
Reviewed By: adam On: August 11, 2003 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reallllly liked this fic alot...been waitin for an update for awhile now though...if you do still read these reviews, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Blahman (again) On: July 31, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, but, ..., your just a jackass. Be more specific if u complain, I'd e-mail this to u, but I can't find your address...
so.. I'll just say your a &#@^*&#^&*@$^$&*)^^)*&^)(#@^$^#@&*^$((&$#@*^&*$^*%^*(&^%*^*$&@^*#^)%^*#@%^($(&*%^@*#^$*&*()&#(^&$^(tedious, ain't it?)&@#^(*%$@%($&#%^(#%(&&*$#^&$^. |
Reviewed By: Blahman On: July 31, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update this?
If you are, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Good-GUy On: July 26, 2003 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your fic it kinda left me hanging was wondering if u could finish it i see it's been a while though so u most likliy gave up!!!! damn u!!!! |
Reviewed By: ... On: July 21, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I'll keep it simple...
1) watch the anime
2) if u watched it already... watch it again and pay attention for once
3) delete all traces of SHT from your computer and online
4) never post shit like that again |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 17, 2003 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOC is not character dev |
Reviewed By: sistergaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!! I love the way you've taken to develop the characters. Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Bobby Blackrose On: June 26, 2003 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kimberly, i truely hope that you continue writing because i honestly enjoyed your fanfiction. I Don't read much Evangelion fanfiction, im more a Ranma 1/2 lover when it comes to fanfiction, but i must admit i read your fic when it was on Fanfiction.net and truly enjoyed it. I applaud you for writing what you have and reread it when out of new fics every several months (which i rarely do,reread something that is,because i remember most of it anyway if i enjoyed it,so for me thats saying a lot.) I truly hope you continue writing, it would be a shame if this fanfic faded away into the 'lost and forgotten' category. Anyway please keep up the work, and even if you dont continue, thank you for writing this much. |
Reviewed By: Shinji Yagami On: June 20, 2003 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do I have to say anything else? But is there more...I want more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 15, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to god I thought TommyRude, me and Ayanami KILLED this fic. Well guess what...we're back. Your fic sucks. Your writing sucks. Your Asuka bashing is uncalled for and lame. I'm a Rei Shinji fan..but this is just SHiT....
Anyways, we'll kill it. Have fun~ |
Reviewed By: nanashi kag3 On: July 15, 2003 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao i thought this was dead. Anyway most of this is based on the fact u think S/R make a cute couple as some have alrdy stated. Just wondered have u read a real fic? http://rkawards.gloriousforest.net/year.html read this u mindles baka sheep. Get a clue ur bashing charz on the fact u do not like them. Have u herd of sumthing we like to call a plot. This is by far one of the worst things iv read next to "gendo you bastard".Do us all a favor and fall out that window behind u and remove ur genes from the alrdy decaying times created by ppl like urself .gg nunbz |
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