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| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] | | Pages (8): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: bontakun117 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
#&(* $#^% this is one of, no the best fic I've ever read. The fact that it's not been completed is like the ending of Halo 2. It's one of those moments that makes you yell in an incoherent and pissed off manner shortly before shattering your TV, or in this case monitor, with your face. That could just be me, though. For the sake of all things holy, decent, well thought out, well executed, and amazingly written, PLEASE continue!!! WE LOVE YOU, KIMBERLY!!!
| Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plase update this story. It is a vrey good story and you should keep going with and add more chapters to it. Rei and Shinji forever together. Plase update soon.
| Reviewed By: chakal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this is amezing fick and reallty good please finish it and do not make it a asuka a shinji fic quip it a shinji and rei fic and do not kill rei eather please and upgrade sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon i have never read a fic like this one it trone out in to a dark fic whit love and suspens sad comic hentai and all the other this and really goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood please finish it and please email me at mexicano_310@hotmail.com leting me know if you are going to kill rei and make this fic in to a asuka and shinji but please dont make it do none of those to thing PLEASE THIS FIC IS GOOD AT IT IS WITH REI AKIVE AND SHINI AND HER A COUPLE thanks and please email this is goooood.
| Reviewed By: The light of darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you havn't completed this yet. It is long, yes, but it needs to be completed. It ends currently on a cliff hanger. Something this good should not be left incomplete. Please update this, for all of us. We would really like to see this completed, wether happily or tradgiclly. But it needs to be done. Please update this.
| Reviewed By: djohnson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very great story. I didn't want it to stop while I was reading it. It sucked me in so much, that the few flaws were jarring. Those were: 1. You're extremely mean to Asuka in the fic. I hate Asuka too, and I can admit that enjoyed some of the bashing she got. But still, it got to be a little much after awhile. Thankfully you started easing up on her in the later chapters, but still it was a little harsh 2. You completely ignored Gendo's abandonment, neglect, and emotional abuse of his son. You made way too much of a sympathetic character, and glossed over the fact he abandoned his own son, forced him to cripple his best friend, and generally neglected him for more than a decade. I wish you would have addressed this better. I liked the Gendo in your story, but it was like he was an entirely different character than what he is in the series. Like I said, I extremely enjoyed this fic, in fact it's probably the most enjoyable fic I've ever read, but there are a few chapters. I know the chance of this happening is slim after three years, but I really hope you update. The fic is almost finished, and could probably be wrapped up in a chapter. Please, if you ever look at this story again, please update. If not, thanks anyway for the enjoyable story.
| Title: Chapter 36
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When for the lve of god will you update this fanfiction. It is rather unkind to those that are enjoying this fic to leave hem hanging in limbo especilly for so goddamn long. I hope you do coninue this Shadow Megatron~
| Reviewed By: seele89 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this.Dont leave me hangin
| Title: impressed
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 05:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is quite long and great like everyone says and i have to agree. But i desperatly want to know how the story ends, so Kimberly-san, please update. Some say that there are flaws like "lusty teens" but i say it doesn't matter because we get the point. And again, please, update ASAP.
| Reviewed By: Fyorie Jusdyus Auricor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, now to the rating: as mentioned and reiterated by others before me, this is a great fanfiction story. Flawed, but nontheless great (and wonderful, magnificient, etc). Flawed because of usually mild mistakes in spelling (I'm not sure about grammar, since it looked alright to me; I'm not a native speaker of English), wordiness, and (rarely) context ("lusty teens", in particular, severely implies a merely physical relationship; I advise against using it with Shinji and Rei's clearly romantic attachtment); and great because of the originality of the main plot, the unique characterization (OOC is expected, as Third Impact and Instrumentality were clearly of cataclysmic proportions), and the balanced equilibrium between romantic love and carnal desire in Shinji and Rei's relationship. This, in my humble opinion, is enough to outset the use of some repeated themes. That is all that I have to say for now, except that I will be waiting for more updates. And to all faithful fans of Kimberly-san: please, try to be sympathetic and send an encouragement e-mail to Kimberly-san, without excessive flattering and enthusaism.
| Reviewed By: Fyorie Jusdyus Auricor [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 01:56 CST
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First, I\'d like to thank KeyTobias5-san for his selfless concern and providing such vital and critical information on the author\'s current status (look the previous page of reviews); it is rare that we see such morals in our unfortunately dark and predominantly amoral world, otherwise there would not have been so much conflict and misery. But I digress. Allow me to address those who asuume they have the right send such malicious, destructive reviews. 1) You are nothing but ranting, high-and-mighty throngs of sore people who are jealous of Kimberly-san's prowess. 2) If you don't like the story, then why are you here? Don't go and blame someone else for your mistakes, for "the sin is yours", solely yours. 3) Just because no one had reported your misconduct to MediaMiner.Org's administrator(s) before doesn't mean no one ever will; personally, I am going to write a complaint about this immediately after posting my review. 4) There is no way I am going to take anything I said back, come Hell or high water. Death threats, hacking attempts, and virus/worm attacks will be treated as used toilet paper. There is no way am I standing down, for I will not abandon this wonderful and magnificient masterpiece. (Not that it's flawless; flaws are part of the human nature and valuable lessons for the future.)
| Title: Cant believe it!
Reviewed By: Caligoiel On: August 25, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I havent enjoyed a fic this much in absolutely ages! And to see its been SO LONG since it has been updated has made me so depressed! I want to see everything happy again, but most importantly (for me at least) I want to see Asuka happy for once :)
| Reviewed By: 9q873 On: May 30, 2005 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to be shitting me that you gave up on this story...damnit, I was really addicted with this and was like reading nonstop for AGES and then some authoress GAVE UP!?! Oh well, I respect your decisions however I wish to point out a few things. Firstly, I remember seeing a doozo somewhere and you said it meant please. Doozo is more of a 'Here you go' definition rather than please. If you want please, you want 'onegai' which is their way of saying please but is more literally defined as 'I beg of you'. Secondly, I do believe that you overuse some adjectives. Whenever you describe their kiss, you say hungrily or greedily to a point where it loses its effect. I suggest you might want to use a different adjective for such situations. Same goes for lusty teens. Or you could try and put in a completely different phrase instead. And thirdly, there were a few spelling errors, the only one I remember at this point being 'gratefully' which you spelt 'great fully'. Other than that it was a brilliant and addictive story and I really wished I could see more rather than be stuck on this cliffhanger which destroys it. Could you at least make one last chapter where you just give it an ending no matter how crap it is? Although that's really impossible because of your incredible writing skills. Haha Good luck
| Title: left something out...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
btw, i reviewed up to chapter 36, forgot to mention that. I don't personally review every chapter, but the story (thus far) in its whole. I can dream for an update, but...its entirely your choice. However, i think quite a few fans (myself included) would be very happy to one.
| Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say i am very much impressed here. This is a GREAT Evangelion fic...however, looking at the last time something was updated here..I must say it is a damn shame we'll be seeing an update...*sigh* In any case, I loved your style of writing. Including the person's thoughts while they speak showing what they truly feel is somethingi felt you have done a wonderful job. I wish there were a few more styled fics like your's actually. Your spelling and grammar, in a few places, were only a bit spotty and in my opionion do not detract from the overall enjoyment of this fic, as you were still be able to get across your meaning. I loved the plotline. Seeing Ikari and Ayanami together is not too common and you did an incredible job of portraying it. Starting them out as roommates, then working them up to a married couple would be hard to do, but you did a great job. Overall, keep it up (if you still write, cause it'd be a damn shame if you don't) cause the world need good fanfics like this one. Peace!
| Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 09:35 CDT
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Eh, we can dream. It'd be very nice if this rose from the ashes, but I agree... I don't think this is going anywhere, anytime. Such a damn shame too...
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