| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: parasectman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is just soooo good.i give you my compliments.are you sure you're not a writer? |
Reviewed By: AlZeroX On: January 30, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good stuff and you should continue writing. Liked it alot, keep it up |
Reviewed By: Dark Marine On: January 28, 2003 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of Fanfiction regarding Evangelion lately and even though the characters are OOC, they at least gradually change to that from the beginning. Spelling and Grammar could be improved....greatly, but at least it only requires one or two looks back to figure out the word. I enjoy both S/A and S/R fics easily and the style of your fic is excellent, comedic scenes are usually at the right place, though sometimes the story seems a little longwinded at times. Overall it's a very enjoyable fic and I hope to see the rest of it soon. I've read some negative reviews around about you and I'm sure you may have heard of them. Don't let them discourage you, everyones a critic to their own degree. |
Reviewed By: Lifeless On: January 25, 2003 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kimberly, you're a goddess of WAFF. You probably look like a goddess in real life too. I won't even doubt that for a second. My life is so much brighter that I read your story. |
Reviewed By: Nadeisco On: January 22, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well how to put this...
I've read many fan-fic's, to many to count, from a wide variety of animes/games. Now after reading this one [I'm only up to Chapter 12 myself], I have to admit, you have great potential as an actual writer, the skill with which you right is absolutely astounding.
I greatly look forward to future work from you Kimberly, and if you ever just want to talk about Evangelion or Anime, or anything really, contact me, webmaster@digitalnova.co.uk
See.. I'm one of those people that doesn't really care about giving their email address out.. go me!
Now before anyone accuses me of the old 1/10.. 10/10 trick, don't try it, I honestly rated this fic with what I believed to be fair, and also to the person who accused her of being a "Fangirl," I like Asuka, Rei, Shinji and nearly the entire cast of Evangelion, and even though many people have picked up om the Rei/Shinji storyline before, this has got to be one of the, if not the, best I have ever read, so give Kimberly a break, she writes amazing work. |
Reviewed By: Unknown Flamer On: January 19, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a few grammer errors, such as the wrong tense or word or an occasional missing word. The style of writing is easy to read, easy on the eyes, and it makes the story flow well. Finally, this story should have the NC-17 rating instead of the R rating as it does contain somewhat graphic sexual activities. I do find that this is a very enjoyable story. |
Reviewed By: Kevin On: January 16, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very well written story, been reading it since it's been on FF.net.
I am highly anticipating the conclusion to this wonderful story |
Reviewed By: Akira On: January 16, 2003 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLASE CONTINUE THE FANFIC, BECAUSE I WANT TO REED THE END PLEES CONTINUE.
I really love the fanfic. |
Reviewed By: NEON On: January 13, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT |
Reviewed By: Colin Ryan On: January 13, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
BLASHEMY!
I declare a fawtah on your head you dumb bitch! |
Reviewed By: Phil On: January 08, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!! I feel as though I should worship the ground you walk on! I love this! Drag the ending out please! |
Reviewed By: A Concerned Patron On: January 06, 2003 07:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Kimberly, some jerkoff named Diros. *Points to the name above* Is MSTing your fic without permission. The name of it is MST-So Happy Together. Look what he's doing to it.
Loved,
A concerned patron. |
Reviewed By: Diros On: January 06, 2003 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_- Give me a break...
Your fic is merely based off the fact you think Rei and Shinji look like such a KEYOOT couple. Your Askua bashing is unforgivable as well. -_-
Your stupid stupid fangirl. |
Reviewed By: Tony On: January 05, 2003 03:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've loved reading your fic. i can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Socie-tron On: December 22, 2002 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hunger intensely for more of this -fabulous- fic! Absolutely dripping with anticipation, hoping for an update. Keep up the good work. |
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