| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: brian On: June 13, 2003 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. ive read it almost three times over the past year or so and ive been left hanging for so long pleeeeeaaaassseee finish it *sob* |
Reviewed By: Mike Doyle On: June 04, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I spent the last two days reading this fic, and my conclusion is:
I like it!
Your characterizations are, overall, a plausible extrapolation from the very badly broken people we met in NGE. Gendo and Kozo were only a little bit of a stretch, but a reasonable stretch when we remember that this universe is a joint construct of Shinji and Rei/Lillith. Plotting and pacing are good, and you have a very nice narrative voice (it improves with practice, and that's the only thing I could suggest as a style "issue"). The citrusy parts are handled in good taste, and do good service in advancing the romance - without any sense of an exploitive or prurient intent (which is pretty rare in fanfic).
Unfortunately, I have to ding you for a few grammatical errors that should've been caught on a proofreading (maybe you could give each chapter just one additional pass before you post).
I'm not one to get fanatically hung up about following canon, but I keep hitting a bit of a snag when I try to reconcile this with EoE. Not a complaint, really - we can chalk it up as a divergence. It works, and it beats hell out of the postapocalyptic "S & A in the ruins" story that's been rather overdone.
Nice work rebuilding the world after 3I, and it's a well - constructed world, at that (though I must admit I found the Ikari family tradition of a personalized ceramic gun to be just a little over the top)
I loved the hell out of it - what can I say? I've always had a soft spot for romance. And thanks for giving Asuka a shot at redemption - she's not my favorite character, but I always thought she got more of a bashing than she deserved.
Bottom Line: I do so hope you're gonna finish this soon. |
Reviewed By: Shinji--Ikari On: June 03, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic because, 1. It has my favorite pairing R/S. 2. Because it has a nice flow to it. and 3. I just plainly enjoy it. Very good Fanfic overall.. I wish you would finish it. |
Reviewed By: SonRyoga On: July 15, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, note that nanashi kag3 is Ayanami. |
Reviewed By: Arsenal On: May 15, 2003 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your chapter 19 was very cute and I am glad you didn't put the detailes of the date in reading about the lead up and then haveing the readers use their imaginations in my opinon is always better.
So far I have loved every single chapter. That duet title was very sweet as well.
I feel sad that Rei is now stuck as third comander all to save that molester Misato.
In all honesty I don't find that to OOC in fact I find the idea of Misato molesting her charge rather beliveable somehow. |
Reviewed By: Procyon On: May 12, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story it is so beautiful, I truly wish you would have come out with more so that I can continue to admire your masterful works of art. |
Reviewed By: tidus_ff On: April 26, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic ages ago, but it still hasn't been updated!? I guess its not going to be finished huh?
What happened? I know something happened with all the jealous people not liking all the fans and praise Kim was getting? Please Kim!!! ignore these ignorant people and continue writing!! These people are obviously jealous and they also have no idea what the word "fanfiction" means!! Keep writing and ignore those poor sad people who have nothing better to do, other than trying to destroy better skilled writers who they are so jealous of they would spend ages trying to rally support to go against you! LOL That just speaks for itself! You should be proud! :) |
Reviewed By: DI On: April 15, 2003 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this fan fic and was very impressed with the creativity that has been put into it. i is one of the longest fanfics i have ever read and i loved every second of it thanks but when are you going to come out with the rest of the chapter i am practicaly crying i am so eager to see how it ends PLEASE HURRY!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: April 14, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the plot was very good. It is one of the best Evangelion fics I have read. I didn't know what the secret project Rei was working on until Misato read the report and I liked that suspense. I can't wait to find out what happens to everybody. I hope a new chapter comes out soon. |
Reviewed By: concern On: March 22, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So when exactly are you going to finish your fic
The suspense is killing me!! I read this a whole year ago and still no new chap!! You know, it is just wrong to get to a good part and then stop!! LETS GET A MOVE ON IT!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron On: March 12, 2003 07:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I read up to chapter 36(35)
when are you going to continue this?
it surely cannot end at such a traumatic cliffhanger? |
Reviewed By: Sandman On: March 12, 2003 02:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good series that could do with a bit of editing. Your versions of characters are generally more mature but oddly evil. Multiple spelling errors, missing words, odd grammer. Good story though.
Greatest complaint is....You write too slow! |
Reviewed By: Procyon On: March 08, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent more more more!MUST HAVE MORE! |
Reviewed By: harvman85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I fell asleep during the first chapter. So FUCKING BORING |
Reviewed By: Mikeyguy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. Ive been readin it for the last couple of days and i cant wait to see how it ends. plz plz plz finish the story soon. I cant wait to see what shinji does to dr akagi. and i wanna know if kawaru (cant spell) and asuka get married. |
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