| "So Happy Together" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: zero On: December 18, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it,..
I,ve red many fics .
but this one hit me.
I hope its a happy ending????
& would someone please KILL gendo?
the niceguy isn,t him.
same for ritsuko.
I got an idea how about adding .
an evil shinji;;;;;
someone to stirup trouble
just a thaught.
TO Be CONIUED>. |
Reviewed By: Lucky On: December 10, 2002 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this fic has raised more emtions in the eva community then any other I know. I find the fact that it was removed from ff.net quite unfortunate.
As for the review, the only REALLY bad thing about this fic that would need fixing is grammar. Since I'm not a native english speaker, I have a pretty high tolerance for misspelled words, but even I find myself bohered by the amount of grammatical errors. A simple pre-reading would help shaving a lot of those errors off.
Not much else to say except tp encourage you to finish this fic. And request to continue the "Searching for Eden", which imho is your best work so far. |
Reviewed By: zero On: November 09, 2002 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I LOVE IT.
I started reading this fic on fanfiction.net.
And I was hooked .
I just have 1 tiny request .
please PLEASE don,t kill rei?
shinji&rei are so cute together,.
It almost makes me cry.
I have got to see the ending.
I hope it,s a happy one
loveit
CONTINUE. |
Reviewed By: David Johnson On: November 07, 2002 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. It's original, has a good plot, and balances all the characters elements without becoming boring or tiresome. The grammer and spelling arent' perfect, but what is?(see example above this line) It dosen't detract from the story, which is good. All in all, a great fanfic. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Pyrex On: October 17, 2002 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where's the intermission. That was the best part of SHiT? SHiT just isn't SHiT without the intermission!!! |
Reviewed By: DREDNAX On: October 14, 2002 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I stopped reading this half way through. Despite a great liking for the Shinji/Rei relationship, this was just becoming too repetative. Try putting in more believable character interactions next time. |
Reviewed By: *god x hunter* On: October 11, 2002 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of the best i have read(removing the hentai parts)you got potential! |
Reviewed By: Li On: October 06, 2002 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been reading your fics for almost a year now, eagerly anticipating each chapter. Your spelling and grammar are easily forgivable (I make to many mistakes myself to nitpick). Very original storyline and most enjoyable, keep up the good work. Oh, and try to get another chapter of Searching for Eden out. Thats another of my favourites. |
Reviewed By: brian On: March 23, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why is it not finished yet *sob* |
Reviewed By: Sephi_chan On: October 03, 2002 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come one people, do you know why kimberly probably doesn't give a damn about her reviews? Probably because no one gives an accurate review. They're all either extremely over-inflated or under-inflated... We have all these 10/10 people.. Give me a break, I like Kimberly's fics too, but they don't deserve a 10/10, if they did, she'd have a writing deal by now... and then we have these 1/10 people (on some of her other fics) 1/10 means the fic isn't even really a fic.. 1/10 on grammar and spelling means everything is spelt wrong and the meaning is completely distorted, while you 10/10 people... *sigh* her spelling and grammar is aceeptable, it's acceptable because she makes mistakes but it doesn't really distort the meaning..
So long story short, at least give reviews that make sense... no one is perfect, and without constructive criticism, a writer can never improve.... |
Reviewed By: alex21 On: October 01, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE FINISH THIS! I have never read such a heart-wrenching story! |
Reviewed By: Ayane On: September 29, 2002 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you the goddess of kawainess? Please tell me so!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: LamerKing On: September 29, 2002 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this a longtime ago in ff.net, yeah, and I was one of your fanboy back then. I hope youre not troubled by ,well, the incident that happened....... Just continue to write ok? |
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the fic so far i await in the shadows.
Decepticons....RETREAT! |
Reviewed By: andres ocasio On: September 22, 2002 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally been able to read up to chapter 36 and i got to say this fanfic is superb but now i'am on the air please update when you can i'am dying to now how thi fic is going to end.
ps. please you can't just kill rei is so heartbreaking i hope this fic has a happy ending. |
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