| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Title: *Look at her name* It a lot easy to remember now.
Reviewed By: Veglma On: September 25, 2004 23:22 EDT
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*is laugh at Bulma's conversation with Vegeta*.....Hahaahahhahahahahha*Cough*...Hahhahahaha *is speechless from laughing* Xiahou Fumi:I think I will kill the piggy. Yin Yi`Jing:*Look at the conversation between Bulma and Yamcha* Good job, Young Yamcha. Komachi Ayako:*Also looks at conversation between Bulma and Yamcha*....Bulma, You and Vegeta may not be in love now, but who know? You both might be in the future.
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh, this chapter is very nice. it gives a lot of foreshadowing. i look forward to reading what happens next. i particularly like the exhange between bulma and yamcha; it's very interesting. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: vegeta1a On: September 25, 2004 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. very good story telling
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 16:05 EDT
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The pacing is slower, but that's fine for this point in the story, very fine! Sooo, we have a new setting and Yamcha's been told (does happy dance--yey! Yammie's playing such a prominent role in two of your fics!) and we are promised one more communication from Vegeta--I honestly don't know where you're going to go!!! This is exciting, to break away from B/V for a bit (thanks for the goodbye sex and for the little funny communication in this story, though! Can't live w/o the prince for too long here!!!) It was good to see the gang, and Oolong was disgusting as always. Yammie was a dear. Yey, Yammie!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: September 25, 2004 08:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Quite a lot of insight into the way Bulma thinks in this chapter. It's clear she hasn't come to terms with her feelings for Vegeta or what their relationship means to her life. He conversation with Yamcha was well-written and realistic. It's clear throughout the series that he is her most valued friend. You portrayed their relationship wonderfully.
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Reviewed By: Kiera On: September 21, 2004 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Hilarious! xD *Laughs out loud at Bulma calling Vegeta a little shit* And how well it describes him! You WILL be continuing... right?
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Reviewed By: Kiera On: September 21, 2004 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! *melts* lol
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Reviewed By: Kiera On: September 21, 2004 04:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you for making awesome stories!! >_< It's 2:30 in the morning, and I wanna go to the next chapter... lol THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY!! And thoughts of Vegeta... heh heh heh... ~.^
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Reviewed By: Kiera On: September 21, 2004 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... God. I've read tons of fanfics about DBZ, but this is just... awesome. I love how you described everything with such detail, without overdoing it. It made me feel like I was really there. That, and I'm almost a huge Vegeta fan. ^_^ This is awesome!! *Reading the other chapters now*
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was a fun chapter! I like the way you are keeping them in character. It made me laugh when Bulma was torturing the intern. And I really enjoyed the butt-smacking!!! I always pictured Vegeta and Bulma being kinky! Lol And I liked the way you had her initiate it… What a great lemon scene! Why do I get the feeling that the reason Vegeta wants Bulma to tell Yamcha about their involvement is because Vegeta knows she is preggers and wants to be sure Yamcha knows who the father is before she finds out she's pregnant…? Intriguing! Loved the last line… "Damn," she swore under her breath, "I think I'm really going to miss the arrogant little shit when he's gone!" Looking forward to the next installment. ~Gail~
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Title: Yo ^-^
Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 14:24 EDT
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*looks for more chapters* ahhh!!! No more chappies????? *cries* what will I do now??? *has spent the whole day reading the fic* ^^;; Anyway, I really enjoyed reading the ficcy so far *nods* very very much ^-^ hehe! I know LisaB or what ever... I mean, I've read her fics too *nods again* also good. Both good. Very good. Great. Excellent *rambles on* ... UPDATE SOON! ^-^
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Reviewed By: me On: September 04, 2004 11:37 EDT
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woo woo! good ol' sorta goodbye sex. nothing like it. lol. so i'm guessing that hopfully vegeta will give in and go on the camping trip. hahahha, man, so much could happen then! lol. but what is the real underlining reason that vegeta wants yamcha to know? is it just how it seems, or is there another meaning hidden beneath?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. Is it hot in here or is it just me? Actually, no, I think it's you Ember. I remember you telling me once you wished you could write "raunchy" lemons instead of just romantic ones. Well, let me tell you girl, you've mastered the art.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a wonderful chapter, there is not need to be sorry. I think we all understand how hectic things can be; especially when you've got so many stories going. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see the next chappy!
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Title: ch.7
Reviewed By: LS On: August 31, 2004 17:30 EDT
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Yay! for pivotal chapters!! I love that he wants Yamcha to know there is something between him and Bulma. I like how she can figure out what he really means. I love all the 'blush-cheek' moments *^_~*
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