| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: ZWorld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2012 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost, I LOVE your BulmaxVegeta fanfictions! This was absolutely a wonderful read! Congratulations :) Beautiful story! You got me hooked on the first chapter. I love what you did with Yamcha! It's so good to see a fanfic where Bulma doesn't throw Yamcha to the way side. I found the way you portrayed Vegeta was absolutely fabulous! The closer I got to the *closure* chapter, the more I was wanting this to never end. It was just such an amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it to us :) 10/10 once more :) |
Reviewed By: Tracybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2011 07:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was definately one of my very favorite Bulma/Vegeta Fics. I loved the first lemon so much. It was better than any I have ever read. I do feel like the fic is unfinished. But even if it is done as it looks like it is it is still wonderful. |
Title: please finish story
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you find the inspiration to finish this story someday. I really love this fic.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even now when I read this, I have to still say that this story is the best BV ever! ¢¾
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 20:19 EDT
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I just reread this entire story all over again. Once again I think this is by far the best 3 years fic ever written. I know your busy with personal projects but don't forget about this one *wink wink*. Hit me up sometime at DA :)
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Reviewed By: juzkatie8115 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 01:12 EDT
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Here I am, tricked into thinking I'm reading a finish piece because of the title of chapter 23, "Closure." Thanks a lot. :) But really, it's a very interesting read. It kills me to see how true you really are to the characters because it feels strange to read a BV that has very little "emotional bonding" or w/e people think happens between the two. It's interesting how it is turning into more than just an occasional lay (which I hope it is because that's why I love BV! Few people can accurately portray the situation without someone being OOC) and it's also interesting to see only Bulma's POV because I have no clue what Vegeta is ever thinking! The only thing that confused me is the few times Bulma drinks alcohol when she is pregnant. It's a personal thing, obviously, but wouldn't she know that can do serious harm to her child? Just curious. I'm not sure what English culture says about that or not! Otherwise it's great, your imagery and wording are amazing and put my pathetic stories to shame. I still have hope you are updating, and I look forward to the next chapter, no matter how many years from now it drags out to be. :) Just kidding. But seriously.
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Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was amazed when I suddenly started receiving email alerts for updates to this story a while ago. I thought for sure it had been abandoned but this has really been a pleasant surprize. I've always loved your interpretation of Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. You do a wonderful job in every aspect of your writing. I haven't read DBZ fanfiction in so long but seeing this be updated again, how could I not read?
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Title: Excellent tie-ins!
Reviewed By: Adli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 12:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another excellent chapter! I love how you managed to tie everything together and offered an indirect explanation about the ever debated "why didn't Vegeta try to rescue Bulma when her plane fell?" question that plagues the V/B fandom. Very nicely done! This chapter ending what slightly abrupt, and I hope you plan to add at least one more chapter. An epilogue, perhaps? I'd like to see Vegeta's train of though on how he decides to end up staying at the end, since he seems so determined to leave. Vegeta is my favorite character because he seems to grow and mature so drastically through the show, especially compared to the rest of the characters. You've managed to catch his character evolution so well in this story. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 07:28 EDT
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Another excellent chapter, I really liked the interactions between the characters, and the way you depicted the resolution between yamcha and Bulma. I have a feeling that this is just the calm before the storm which is the next chapter, and I can't wait for that to come out.
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Title: Closure...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...sounds cryptic, doesn't it? Wow, yet another amazing chapter Ember. It is such a wonderful thing that you continue this fic; I have been reading for a while and it is such a part of my everyday life ( I check for updates like every week or so ). I love how you make Vegeat and Bulma so real...you put them in such good-character it takes my breath away (like when he refers to her as Bluma passionately, but calls her woman when he trys to gauage a reaction out of her)! Please continue to take your time on this wonderful story and I'll be around for your next update. Take care and thanks again!!!
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you're still updating this little gem! Okay, I loved loved this chapter, and Vegeta's 'master plan' was a little out there, but it sounds just like Vegeta. Loved the lemon, that was very much overdue. I love the pace and flow of this story, and once again thank you for continuing this wonderful, splendid, outstanding story! It really makes my day!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 10:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!! Their reunion was everything it was meant to be and more. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one!
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Title: ch 22 vegeta's master plan
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 12:57 EDT
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Wow that was very intense, I really enjoy the way you write the conversations between Bulma and Vegeta, the underlying chemistry pulsating beneath the surface, it's amazing. Vegeta's plan is also exciting, I'm not sure how far you plan this story to go, but I can't wait to see what happens when the androids come and Vegeta finds that his plans may not turn out as expected. There is also a kind of tragic touch to Vegeta's dreams of domination, as we know how it will plan out in the canon, unless you are doing an alternate universe. Either way the tension between unfulfilled dreams and harsh reality is interesting to watch, I think especially in Vegeta's case, as this has this is a tension which has dominated his life for the most part.
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 08:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG yay! I was so happy to find a chapter alert in my mailbox this morning, and even more thrilled when I read the newest chapter. The lemon scene is incredibly sexy and so well written. I am so happy that you're continuing on with this story, it is simple amazing! I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your other fics, but this one is by far your best. This is an excellent story, completely engrossing. I love your lemon scenes, very steamy. I hope you'll continue this story, this is probably the best B/V fic I have ever read. It's almost 7am right now, and I've been reading since yesterday evening, I simply could not stop! Please update! :)
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