| "A Saiyan For All Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 209 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: May 27, 2004 21:52 EDT
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hey great chapter... aww mor fun for bulmy... can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 21:45 EDT
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Well then. *Cough* I guess Bulma wasn't kidding when she said she could be a slut between the sheets! I really, really hate her. At least I hate the way you write her - the lucky bitch.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 (not logged in) On: May 27, 2004 13:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was worth the wait and then some. Probably the best B/V lemon I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Heartless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 10:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ADORED that chapter!! I've been waiting for this from the first chapter, thank you so much! It was written very well, and the interaction between the two was perfect.
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Title: I can die happy now...
Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in but in seventh heaven On: May 27, 2004 09:46 EDT
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Now I can die a happy woman. I hereby dub thee Ember, Empress of Bulma/Vegeta romance. Not only was that a wonderful lemon, the whole chapter was full of special details--I loved it when V left a note marked with V on top of the clothes! The breakfast scene was miraculously sexy, even after all the previous hotness. I can't believe this story. It's my favorite of all time. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: May 27, 2004 09:18 EDT
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God! That was one hell of a lemon! This is... like..the best fic ever... I don't even have the words to describe how GREAT this fic is...Bulma and Vegeta are great here in this fic. not ooc at all. I just love you! Can't wait for the next chapter =D
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Title: forgot to tell you!
Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: May 22, 2004 12:30 EDT
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Forgot to say I really appreciate what you're doing with Bulma's character in this fic (and in the other 2 you've got going but with the most finesse in this simple, evocative fic!) So many people worry about whether or not V is OOC in fics but for me it's so often Bulma who's too whiney and victimized or, at the other extreme, too damn self-possessed and mature (the way she was never portrayed in the manga or anime). You're telling us she *grow* and showing us *how*--all the while never letting her lose her spirit and fiestiness, and letting us see her scientific persistence, her feminine vulnerabiltiy--oh, ALL that good stuff Bulma is. I'm still really impressed with this fic. I'm probably going to start suffering longing pangs for it when its finished! :-) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 -(I tried to log in, damnit) On: May 21, 2004 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. You naughty little tease. Listen, you KNOW how much I hate it when people pressure me for updates, so I would really hate to do that to another author... but... under the circumstances.... HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That chapter just left it up to my imagination to finish...which, sometimes, I don't mind at all. Very well written, as usual; I give Lisa many props! I can't wait to see the outcome of this evening/morning of passion. Love Ya!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 03:58 EDT
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dude!!!!!!!!!!!! that was tight! i gotta see what happens next!!! update soon!
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Title: More, please, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 01:03 EDT
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I really enjoyed this last chapter. It has such a nice set up to a juicy lemon for the sixth chapter. Please update soon and if you could, add me to your mailing list for updates. My address is unicornlover_@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 00:57 EDT
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Gah! Update darn you! for the love of all that's good and pure, update!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 00:00 EDT
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That was utterly amazing. (I was going to say it was orgasmic, but there might be youngsters reading this and it would probably bother their parents to know they were reading such wonderfully-written stuff, so I'll stick with amazing.) So, do you think Bulma's going to be sorry? I don't! : )
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Reviewed By: me On: May 19, 2004 22:08 EDT
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Haaaa! omg! drama! holy crap, i think that the edge of my seat has fallen off of my chair! gahhh!! exciting!! that's the only word to describe it!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: May 19, 2004 20:02 EDT
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i just started this fic and am really enjoying it keep up the great chapters.
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